[Report This]Date: March 24 2024 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Carrie's Last Day
I am sad to see this at its end, as it's been my favorite story series since you started it, with each part getting better. I always got very excited to see a new chapter more than anything else on this site for the past while. Thank you. I really do good for part 4. I want to see more stuff with Heather perhaps getting more victims, as well as eventually possibly meeting her own fate
Looking extremely forward to whatever you do next!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2024 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Amazing concept and writing
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: January 28 2024 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Carrie's Company
“He was standing there, fondling a pair of her underwear against his face that he had found in the trash“ What chapter did this happen in or is it yet to be seen?
Author's Response:
Callback to Shrunk in the Model City, Part 1 - Chapter 8!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2024 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help
Heather almost redeemed herself
Date: January 03 2024 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help
really amazing part
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2023 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Carrie's Poor Plan
Two weeks of torture in-bound
Author's Response:
Yep!
Date: December 03 2023 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Carrie's Poor Plan
Loved this chapter!!! I love the unaware Marie with Carrie being shrunk. Can’t wait to see how Carrie survives for 2 weeks. Is the next one coming soon?
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hoping to be able to continue this regularly!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2023 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Nice part!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Oops forgot to rate
Date: September 16 2023 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Really enjoying this part of the story! Loving the semi-aware vs the unaware of the previous parts! Also glad to see mention of crush via dick slap, the most underutilized SW/GM/GC trope imo.
Hope to see more of the previous cast show up (especially Heather)!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! More to come!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Dan's Toys
Absolutely amazing chapter! Love seeing M/f stuff and this delivered big time! Hope to see more Dan!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: September 07 2023 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
You write some of the best stories on here! I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: September 06 2023 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie's problems are BEHIND her
Nice chapter. I loved the unaware threesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2023 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie's problems are BEHIND her
GODDAMN THIS WAS HOT AS HELL! YOU SIR KNOW HOW TO WRITE!
I am absolutely 100% serious when I say that this was one of the hottest chapters I ever read. This is pure perfection.
By far the best part was when Carrie got eaten by Marie’s anus AND SHE WAS COMPLETELY UNAWARE! You make this shit come alive my friend!
Easy 100/10!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! It was a lot of fun to write!
Date: September 06 2023 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie's problems are BEHIND her
It looks like the Milf got a chance to get to know her Daughter and her daughter's boyfriend up close!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: August 14 2023 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Bath Time!
Nice. I really hope that when it is time for Carrie to grow back her being trapped in Mari's but means there is not enough room to grow back, and she becomes permanently shrunk.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: August 08 2023 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Great start to part three. Looks like Erin has a new crush
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yep, that'll play out later....
[Report This]Date: August 05 2023 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Always happy to see this series continue in some new way, and this is a fantastic start to the third installment! Love the juxtapostition between Erin and Marie at Carrie's feet. This is gonna be another great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm excited for it!
Date: August 04 2023 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Nice!
Author's Response:
Thank you!