Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2023 9:02 PM Title: Josh and Nova

This was a fun read. I liked the childhood friend angle, both the wholesome interactions, but also the references to the past they'd make (usually in their thoughts). It added a fun layer to their love making, them surprised at each other or knowing how to press the other's buttons. Also, a couple that plays fighting games together is destined to have a happy, long-lasting relationship and will lead to many interesting punishments for lost matches.

Author's Response:

This one is just a sweet little fluffy piece, and yeah I imagine that they will have some very interesting wagers on those fighting game matches lol.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2023 3:24 AM Title: Josh and Nova

Great story! I love your work that features more extreme size differences. This reminds me a lot of the later chapters in your “resizer syndrome“ story; that’s a very good thing.

Author's Response:

Typically I like 3-4 inches for tinies, but sometimes going smaller is fun. This one specifically had the commissioner request 1/4 inch.

Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2023 7:23 AM Title: Josh and Nova

It's too bad Josh didn't take the waitress up on that refill. It would have been interesting to see her try to handle a coffee pot small enough to be used by a quarter-inch-tall person.

By Henry's wives, this was good for what it was! Just a nice little one-shot about old childhood friends coming together and fucking. That's usually how these reunions turn out, right?

One thing I like about pretty much all of your smut writing, including in this story, is how skillfully you inject character development and dynamics into those scenes. Seeing Josh "gain the upper hand" by showing Nova no mercy in attacking her clit seems to call back to Nova herself celebrating the fact that she now had that natural advantage that Josh always had in the playful back and forth of their friendship before. He became the resourceful one that she had been, although I'm sure she enjoyed the mind-blowing orgasm just a tad more than he enjoyed getting pantsed in front of a girl he liked.

Also, Josh being relatively chill when it comes to dealing with full-sized people up until that point lends to him being more adventurous in be as well. Just him sitting in the diner by himself shows that most tinies don't want to interact with them at all, but Josh waving off the waitress casually and being polite by waving at who he thought was a stranger rudely interrupting his coffee time displays a certain comfort level amongst the bigs (comfort as in a lack of fear; he's still kind of annoyed in both of those instances). Therefore, it's not much of a surprise that he doesn't hesitate to be more active in his sex with Nova, someone he actually knows and trusts.

I also thought Josh's explanation for why he never asked Nova out probably changed how his night went. The first time she asked him to come home with her, she was talking about reminiscing. Then once her teasing about her chest got what I assume was a more honest answer than she probably expected out of him was quick to bring up her invitation again.

Based on how the conversation went, it's pretty obvious that Nova was self-conscious about her body back then, and I kind of got the feeling that part of her wondered if Josh's lustful looks now were only due to her fully bloomed body. To hear that he had not only thought about asking her out but only didn't because he was afraid of fucking up their friendship probably gave her the encouragement to act on those feelings that she held for so long. If he had thrown out a line about her not being his type back then or that he only ever saw her as a friend before likely would have hurt, as it would have shown that any feelings he had for her know were only skin deep.

The tiny intramurals is a pretty cool and inspiring concept. I may have to steal that if I can ever motivate myself to actually write something.

And I couldn't help but notice that this story title came with a colon. Would I be reading too much into it if I guessed that maybe you were commissioned to write multiple one-shots with this theme? Or was this just a randomly inspired naming convention?

Author's Response:

By Henry's Wives indeed lol. Anyways I'm a sucker for lost loves and sappy endings with your childhood friend. I think Josh would have liked to date Nova even before her "glow up" but like too many guys he wasn't sure how to best approach it, then he shrank and pulled away from everyone.

The naming convention is just random unfortunately, though if this particular commissioner wanted a repeat of the concept with some different characters I'd certainly be up for it!

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2023 1:03 AM Title: Josh and Nova

Nice little one-shot.  Good stuff!

Author's Response:

Thanks!