[Report This]Date: July 07 2023 4:58 PM Title: I: Shifting Roles Over the Shifting Sands
I'm amazed that this doesn't have any review, so I had to make one!
This is beautiful solid story of the type where it's all about misery. Yu mei-ren makes a great giantess that hates the guts of Ritsuka, but still somehow keeps her alive for 4 chapters! Great pacing with how destroyed Ritsuka gets along the story.
I believe Senpai's ending is the good one, you get to make her happy and live in her almost divine body, and who knows, you might get to live again as her cung zai or even a human someday! After all, hope is addicting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the response. If I had a nickel for how many times someone says that they are amazed that a story doesn’t have a review, then I would have two nickels. Kind of odd that it happened twice. Regardless, I really appreciate it.
Yea, I quite enjoy setting the gradual destruction of our main character. It also helps that Yu Mei-ren isn’t the most gentle senpai out there. Initially, the senpai ending was the only ending that I had planned. But then as I neared the narrative denouement during my writing process, the back of my head ended up getting tickled with the possibility of the kouhai ending. As a fan of tragic misunderstandings, especially at the hands (soles) of someone that would deeply care for the MC, I have to say that the kouhai ending is actually my preferred one. But I can definitely appreciate the appeal that the senpai ending had.