Reviews For A Fae's Power
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Reviewer: HerPetJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, really hoping for a follow up chapter or more like it! Keep up the great work. 

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2023 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it again! I like shorter-gts scenes, where the giantess is still significantly larger but only twice or thrice the size of the shorter person. I also got the impression you might have seen Puss In Boots 2 from the opening premise (find map to enter magical forest for immortality). Great story!



Author's Response:

lol, haven't seen the movies but it's a common enough premise. Glad you enjoyed it and we love hearing your thoughts. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2023 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wait, if he gave fae his size(human form) and got immortality, does it mean she isn't immortal anymore? If it is so, it's in her own interest to reverse the spell, no?



Author's Response:

Sorry if it's not clear.  The magic item essentially acts as a middleman that allows it all to work.  The man makes a contract with the orb, and as the orb's guardian and executor the fairy acts as the catalyst to make the contract happen.  The man gets immortality from the orb's innate magic, and his size being taken away and given to the fairy is the orb's cost for providing immortality.  The fairy loses nothing from the exchange other than a paltry amount of magic expenditure. 


A little convoluted, but that's what I think fairy contracts normally are like... difficult to explain and easily misunderstood. Also hopelessly slanted towards the fairy's favor. 

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