Reviews For Growing Green
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Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2023 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Such a good story and writing too! Loved the goblin and her dialect! Hope to read more of your stuff!

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2023 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this one, I'm a sucker for green girls and also ditzy drunk ones. The goblin accent was well done, and while I get it if this is just a one shot I find myself wondering if our alchemist might find himself with the rest of the girls, all of whom are enjoying the effects of growgreen moonshine.

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2023 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Tonald, the tragedy of a man fighting a losing battle. In the beginning of this tale, you tell us of his distaste, but as he discovers Seq, and her bazooka badonkers, and prodigious posterior, you show us that his time with the elves had imparted him a sense of culture. Even if it is the heathen culture of the shortstack. 

Seq has extremely entertaining dialogue, and your portrayal of that iconic gobbo cockney accent had me rolling with laughter. Excellent reveal in the effects of the growgreen, and I particularly like how you portrayed her growing. A particular detail that sold it for me, was you describing how her growing feet plowed apart the trees. 

Only gripe is Tonald's trip down south could have been drawn out. Other than that, this tale was nice, short and sweet, kind of like Seq. Too-shortstack/10

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