[Report This]Date: May 19 2025 10:06 PM Title: Presentations
Whoa. I just read this story from start to finish in one day. It was amazing. I love the cruelty, violence, and depravity. Mary is scary hot. Her ability to switch between extreme gentleness and cruelty got me going. I love when it when the bigs can be kind to a select few, but kill other tinies without remorse. I wish you'd conclude the story. Ryan and Mary hooking up is something I really want to see. Great job!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2024 3:59 AM Title: Emma
A true power couple is born.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2024 9:27 PM Title: Emma
Great update!
Date: June 03 2024 6:53 AM Title: Presentations
I wish to see her Mom grows so huge and sexy too
[Report This]Date: May 31 2024 1:32 AM Title: A distraction
A truly deep and profound look at the devotion of a tiny.
Date: May 30 2024 7:59 PM Title: A distraction
I’m excited to see this story return!
Date: December 06 2023 2:19 AM Title: That doesn't fit there
That was intense and kind of sad. I think the scene was really well-written, but I found it surprisingly hard to connect with a domination scene where the dominant person isn’t into it. I think it worked best at the end when Mary directly orders him to destroy Julia’s corpse, involving herself in the action instead of lurking.
Looking forward to seeing how this ends! Any new stories in the works?
[Report This]Date: November 29 2023 3:18 AM Title: That doesn't fit there
Well hell things went south for Vic didn't they.
I mean he's not dead but from the sounds of it he's on the verge of it with one wrong move.
Author's Response:
The little guy has to face the consequences of his actions. Maybe Victor just wanted to be a good man by trying to get Mary to torture and murder less during her games, but as we saw with Francis, those who want to be "a good man" don't always end well.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2023 2:32 AM Title: Dream the shit out of it.
Incredible.
A beautiful moment at the end and its rare to see Mary out of her element.
Date: November 05 2023 7:33 AM Title: Dream the shit out of it.
Wow! I love that Mary sees the opposite POV and her realization isn’t “be nicer” but rather “damn it’s good to be an Apex.”
Mary’s terms are the perfect way to frame their relationship going forward. I hope Judy is equally capable of compartmentalizing - her advocacy for Lester is encouraging. I’m curious to see how the tension with him gets resolved.
Can’t wait to see Judy unleashed! I want to see her personally handle some minis.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2023 1:31 AM Title: Intimacy of several
Excellent chapter! The “little Mary” concept was clever and well-executed. I loved how you reintroduced Judy and how her relationship with Mary is changing. Poor Victor :(
[Report This]Date: October 30 2023 1:27 AM Title: Intimacy of several
Well damn that was incredible smut.
Intricately woven and crafted with each person playing their part wonderfully.
Now though I wonder about Victor's future given that ending.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2023 5:43 AM Title: The three previous steps: You can do it Vicky!
Great update! Mary definitely seems mentally stable enough for this to work - good luck Vicky!
[Report This]Date: October 12 2023 2:18 AM Title: The three previous steps: You can do it Vicky!
Mary is quite the taskmistress but you can't argue with results.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2023 1:55 AM Title: The three previous steps: Practice
Well fuck...never seen anyone die via soundwaves before in this fetish so that is an incredible feat in itself.
Mary really tried her best here for her man...just no these ones.
Author's Response:
I don't know if sound can do what it does in the story, but it would be awesome if it could. Thank you for your comments and for reading this story.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2023 1:39 AM Title: The three previous steps: Maybe a good idea
Victoria getting awfully brave with Mary...we'll see how long this lasts.
Date: September 05 2023 7:58 PM Title: Intimacy of two
Great chapter! I loved how Mary hyped herself up, and how quickly it wavered when she thought Victor was scared. I’m not a fan of animal stuff but the scene was well-written.
Happy to see the return of flashbacks! You do a good job of integrating them into the story. I would love to see more flashbacks of a younger Mary testing her power and wiping out some families along the way.
Next chapter sounds exciting!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2023 3:30 AM Title: Intimacy of two
Mary is truly incredible.
A big, unstoppable destruction machine who also cares about one little man she could mulch like paste.
Date: August 19 2023 4:03 PM Title: Presentations
I kinda wanna just see Mary unceremoniously torture and main tainy's in gruesome and Gorey ways, watching as people who she knows are helpless to stop her from doing what she's supposed to!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2023 3:44 AM Title: Speaking the people understand
I'd say the date was a success.
Mary seems to be willing...somewhat to slow down her murderous impulses at least around him. So at least a few tinies might survive around her.