[Report This]Date: May 15 2023 7:44 AM Title: Field Trip
I haven't actively posted for 5 months due to school but came in to drop by and say I am happy to see that you are continuing to post. I have a new chapter and short story planned at the end of May/Early June.
Food transformation is an interesting topic to explore and I have enjoyed it so far. Curious to see why the company transforms living people into candy and I am hoping you will address this later on.
As for some of the loudmouth backlash about the age, just ignore them. I remember when I posted my second story I faced some similar kind of backlash. "A Little Bit of Everything," told me he did as well. I like writing about younger characters from a psychological point of view. Not everything has to be full-blown erotic. Following this logic, all Honey I Shrunk the Kids films would be classified as erotic. I explained this concept in more detail in my writing guide regarding how to write young characters but at the end of the day, I still get some backlash.
At the end of the day, you can't please everyone.
Anyway back to the story, hopefully, some more details regarding the nature company are explored. Hoping you will continue with this story
Author's Response:
Ty! And ya I know that was gonna come. But I'll write what I want and where it goes it goes >< ch3 is out now and i left it as unfinished. youre' right i kinda wanna do a chapter exploring the candy company, and as the notes say, maybe use it as a jumping point to spawn other stories in the same world. that idea came to my head as i wrote ch3. The bulk of it is out but i know loose ends still need to be tidied up. I got some thoughts i wanna flesh out for sure. Thank you again for your words and I hope you enjoy the latest chapter! ^~^
[Report This]Date: May 09 2023 12:40 PM Title: Field Trip
Loving the setup so far, can't wait to see the next part!
Author's Response:
Tyty!!