[Report This]Date: March 03 2024 9:23 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Wonderful one-shot! The fun role reversal here is delicious... And plenty of playful payback that is so enjoyable~ excellent work you ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: May 03 2023 7:49 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
“Nanomachines son,” Julie said with a grin, typing more commands
Is Samantha the type to harden in response to physical trauma?
More seriously, I enjoyed this, seeing you do F/F is always nice. If I had any feedback, it'd be that the gloria section in the middle felt kinda jarring pacing wise, but I like shrinking-as-revenge, so I enjoyed it at the end.
Author's Response:
Yeah the Gloria part was a rather late addition, I almost didn't put it in but I really wanted Julie to get her revenge so I decided to go for it.
Date: May 01 2023 10:23 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Awesome story as usual!
I disagree with the reviews below. Not every story has to have *everything* or be more than a short. And the shorts leave room to the imagination and as potential come back for more stories! For myself at least.
You also have a way of making interesting ideas…interesting (for lack of a better phrase) and engaging that is very admirable and make me excited to read your stories.
I liked the setup and the fluffiness between Samantha and Julia. I will say that Gloria’s reappearance was sudden and unexpected (and the tiniest bit jarring), but to me it served as a way to show Julia’s dominance in her own way.
Author's Response:
I wanted to show Julie getting one over on Gloria, to really show that she's not going to be bullied out of dating Samantha. Anyways glad you liked our protagonists!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2023 3:58 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Im with akilmilo, most of what you have to do is your normal skill with plot, just the tinies happen to be girls. You did and excellent job with Back to Normal?’s, so I believe you can do it.
Author's Response: Typically F/m appeals to me more than F/f, but I dabble in it now and then.
Date: May 01 2023 1:31 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Just reread this and remembered why I don't like shorts. Because you had to set up some kind of plot, sexual part is so little and plot part is little as well, despite taking large part of the story.
But the worst is that there are so many potential scenes and scenarios we didn't see.
For example:
Threesome multisize, footplay, slow shrink (from full to doll in an hour or 2), strength comparison at doll size etc. (Well, there was only 2 scenes for doll size and both of them I saw in your works before without much difference). Not many chances to explore and introduce new scenes with story specific characters.
I hope to see continuation of this one or something similar but as a long story. Please 🥺🙏
Author's Response:
I'll see about a continuation when I'm done with my current long story. Personally I love shorts because, from the writer's point of view, they're pretty low stakes lol. Not every story or chapter can have everything, but we'll see what happens.
Date: May 01 2023 6:21 AM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Rain started to fall outside as Julie made up her mind, and she couldn’t help but laugh as lightning cracked the sky, illuminating the small apartment just as she grabbed her car keys of the hook.
You really tried to recreate evil genius scene with a small and shy girl?
Author's Response:
Hey in fairness small is relative, she ended up a lot bigger than everyone else by the end of the story
[Report This]Date: May 01 2023 5:14 AM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Solid, same as the rest of your works!
I hope to see more FF from you in the future!
Author's Response:
Thanks, not sure how much F/F I'll do over the long term but it's something I dabble in now and then.