[Report This]Date: January 15 2025 4:58 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Ok, I really enjoyed this one.
I'm going i'm give you the cliche "you really need to do more F/f" It;s somethign I felt was missing from other stories such as Conquest for earth.
Now for everything else.
I love Julie so much...She has a demon inside of her tht was just waiting for a reason to come out and Gloria unknowingly unlocked it's cell door when she blabbed during her pickup.
I love she Julie immediately embraces this side, and becomes damn near a different person when Beth comes back.
The erotica here was top notch I love the effortless domination of Beth, everything from Julie having a dominative aura the drips into just her voice.
I love how she's purely in control, she can simple excercise her will over Samantha and have her way with because she's bigger and become her goddess.I love that she flaunts that control freely. "Doll's don't get to refuse" afterall, being the one with the control she decides whether or not Samatha wears the dress, and she decides that she will shrink as Samantha is helpess to stop Julie fromsending her far....far....away.
Now for the Gloria section.
I fucking loved this part.
So Gloria manages to stumble her way into this situation an tries to tack advantage until Julie stops and delusions that were in the ex's head of who held the power in their dynamic.
She removes and that Gloria previous had and reduces her to a helpless bug that's defenseless against the sheer weight of Julie's will.
The secne were she was like " be a good bug untila decide what to do with you" let's just say I almost lost it.... I love how she shows the bug that her fate is uncertain and simply up to her whim.
I loved that Julei contemplated crushing, I hope you write more girls like that. I feel like it's an underrated sweet spot of a girl who doensn't kill her victim but death was a legitmately on the table as an option to contemplate.
I find it so delicious.
I adore that Julie became god to Gloria and weighing up her sins like Anubis. Judging whether or not the dimunuitve should suffer a terrible fate because of the transgressions she comitted against Julie.
I love how she considers crushing the life out of her, I love she contemplates killing and contemplates sentencing Gloria to live the rest of "her life" in one of Sams shoe's, which would've surely been a deaths entence sooner or later esepcially should Sam ever wear that shoe.
I love that she ultimately decided to merciful because they're can be SO MUCH POWER in mercy. Showing the victim that she really coud've ended her life and how easy and effortless it would be for a being as powerful as her.
It's something that will live rent free in Gloria's brain for the rest of her life, should she ever choose to mess with Samantha and Julie again or even make Julie slightly displeased, that she may not be so merciful next time, and Julie to come for her should Gloria try her or her lover.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2024 9:23 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Wonderful one-shot! The fun role reversal here is delicious... And plenty of playful payback that is so enjoyable~ excellent work you ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: May 03 2023 7:49 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
“Nanomachines son,” Julie said with a grin, typing more commands
Is Samantha the type to harden in response to physical trauma?
More seriously, I enjoyed this, seeing you do F/F is always nice. If I had any feedback, it'd be that the gloria section in the middle felt kinda jarring pacing wise, but I like shrinking-as-revenge, so I enjoyed it at the end.
Author's Response:
Yeah the Gloria part was a rather late addition, I almost didn't put it in but I really wanted Julie to get her revenge so I decided to go for it.
Date: May 01 2023 10:23 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Awesome story as usual!
I disagree with the reviews below. Not every story has to have *everything* or be more than a short. And the shorts leave room to the imagination and as potential come back for more stories! For myself at least.
You also have a way of making interesting ideas…interesting (for lack of a better phrase) and engaging that is very admirable and make me excited to read your stories.
I liked the setup and the fluffiness between Samantha and Julia. I will say that Gloria’s reappearance was sudden and unexpected (and the tiniest bit jarring), but to me it served as a way to show Julia’s dominance in her own way.
Author's Response:
I wanted to show Julie getting one over on Gloria, to really show that she's not going to be bullied out of dating Samantha. Anyways glad you liked our protagonists!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2023 3:58 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Im with akilmilo, most of what you have to do is your normal skill with plot, just the tinies happen to be girls. You did and excellent job with Back to Normal?’s, so I believe you can do it.
Author's Response: Typically F/m appeals to me more than F/f, but I dabble in it now and then.
Date: May 01 2023 1:31 PM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Just reread this and remembered why I don't like shorts. Because you had to set up some kind of plot, sexual part is so little and plot part is little as well, despite taking large part of the story.
But the worst is that there are so many potential scenes and scenarios we didn't see.
For example:
Threesome multisize, footplay, slow shrink (from full to doll in an hour or 2), strength comparison at doll size etc. (Well, there was only 2 scenes for doll size and both of them I saw in your works before without much difference). Not many chances to explore and introduce new scenes with story specific characters.
I hope to see continuation of this one or something similar but as a long story. Please 🥺🙏
Author's Response:
I'll see about a continuation when I'm done with my current long story. Personally I love shorts because, from the writer's point of view, they're pretty low stakes lol. Not every story or chapter can have everything, but we'll see what happens.
Date: May 01 2023 6:21 AM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Rain started to fall outside as Julie made up her mind, and she couldn’t help but laugh as lightning cracked the sky, illuminating the small apartment just as she grabbed her car keys of the hook.
You really tried to recreate evil genius scene with a small and shy girl?
Author's Response:
Hey in fairness small is relative, she ended up a lot bigger than everyone else by the end of the story
[Report This]Date: May 01 2023 5:14 AM Title: Julie Blinds them with Science
Solid, same as the rest of your works!
I hope to see more FF from you in the future!
Author's Response:
Thanks, not sure how much F/F I'll do over the long term but it's something I dabble in now and then.