Reviewer: smallintercoil Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2023 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction / Upset Mother

Fantastic! In just a few short paragraphs you have created a world that is ripe for writing various short stories. The stories you have written so far have all been an enjoyable read and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.

As far as suggestions for scenarios: I really like entrapment & unaware scenarios. Some examples:
a planet finds itself stuck to a person/clothing and goes missing or forgotten. A temp caretaker tries their best taking care of the planets but doesn't realize they're making things difficult for the little inhabitants. An after hours visit by somebody in a hurry and that isn't paying attention to their surroundings.

I created an account on here and left this review just so that I could hopefully encourage you to keep updating this as ideas come to mind. I feel that this little world that you have created is fun to think about and I hope that you can keep updating it.

Reviewer: Questathana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2023 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction / Upset Mother

Another great chapter

Reviewer: Questathana Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2023 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction / Upset Mother

Love it! Some ideas are a geeky sister who roleplays as her fave galactic character, a bratty daughter who wants all the attention in this galaxy, and/or a nerdy mother who wants to test experiments on them while giving attention.

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2023 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction / Upset Mother

Amazing concept and intro chapter. For future chapters, would love to see an angry ex wife looking for her runaway husband, or maybe even younger sister looking to get revenge on an older brother who used to bully her