This one's shaping up to be another Greenanon classic. Barbara is such an endearing giant goofball. I'm always impressed on how quickly you manage to get me invested in these characters.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I do like my endearing goofballs lol. Glad people want to see what happens to these two!

Thanks for the chapter!

"Yeah, they're dead. They're all messed up."

First and foremost, I love the chapter name!

But yeah, this is a really good idea. I don't believe I've ever heard of, let alone read, a giantess zombie apocalypse story. This theme has so much potential, and you've already tapped into some of it with the tiny zombies being such a problem for the giant side of town. Multi-sized zombies is definitely something new to the zombie genre.

Barbara and Johnny, err, John are a fun pair of main characters to follow. John is a furnace of ambition, which contrasts really well with Barb's NEETness. I also really like how the size disparity between the two weighs on them both a bit in the early goings of the story. I mean, it makes sense that John is going to be nervous in the presence of a giant (especially when he watched her flatten several him-sized zombies in a single step), but it was interesting to see Barb's concern that her size might intimidate him when she was propositioning him. I think that says a lot about her.

Of course, thankfully, they both needed a good fuck, so it didn't end up being an issue, but it was still nice to have some insight into her thought process.

Oh, and if Barb was so concerned about John turning, she probably shouldn't have put him in her boobs before the bite check. Of course, she's a NEET, not a survival expert, and there were obviously an ulterior motive to the check itself, but that's the kind of mistake that can get you undead in the dual-sized zombie apocalypse.

I'm also really loving the zombie genre references that are littered in the story so far. I agree with Barb that groups generally don't do well in these situations, and I would think that the fact that they're next destination is a mall would bring up some red flags for her, too. Although it's good that the cheerleaders have already run the bikers out of the mall; they're not so good to have around in a zombie apocalypse, especially in a mall.

And Cheer Captain Rhodes has become a really compelling villain in a very short amount of time. Her need for absolute authority, even if it means zombifying her coach and refusing to even try to find a means of escape; her casual domination of her tiny crush; and her special blend of sadism and bubbliness are all intriguing. It's both creepy and kind of hot how quickly she can go from angry or serious to stereotypical cheerleader demeanor. Her power trip even has her making her fellow cheerleaders dressing up as cheer soldiers; how cute (and fucked up) is that?

Overall, this a great start, and I really look forward to where this goes. Also, I hope that Barb doesn't get a shitty camera angle when she reaches the next screen at the end of the hall.

Exciting set up, and great intro to a fun world! Cant wait to read more! 

Honestly I love the idea, sizey zombie apocalypses was one idea always floating around my head. Can't wait to see it more especially cause of Barb.

Author's Response:

I can't recall ever seeing the setting used so I figured why not give it a try?