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Reviewer: mowza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2023 2:52 AM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

Hhhhhhhhhhh I can't stop thinking about the scene with Lash, orcish pheromones are such a fun idea. This story was really really enjoyable!



Author's Response:

I really need to do a standalone orc story at some point, complete with the pheromone angle. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: imaybegae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2023 4:25 PM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

Is the totem, or the kobold attack, going to be featured in another story?



Author's Response:

I might use the totem again because it's a convenient way to get "nice" girls acting naughty. I'm not sure about continuing the story of this particular party, I wrote this one as a one shot.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2023 3:34 AM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

"“What’s that you’re reading?” Lash asked, narrowing her eyes at the elf. “Some kinda spellbook?” The elf just rolled her eyes and held up the book to show the cover to the orc. “Humanity’s Downfall: Subjugation,” the orc read slowly, “hey, isn’t that the one where the elves kill everybody?”"

Nice nod to Inwiththebooks Humanity's Downfall. Despite how dark those stories can get, I like them.


"“Of course! I’m an elf of my word,” she giggled, “just enjoy this! Plenty of humans would love to be in your position!”

“And what position is that?” he asked nervously. He was shrinking again, the elf’s naked body was a sight to behold at this size, and she was only getting bigger.

“Beneath the feet of your elven superior of course,”

Yes, I would enjoy being a foot toy to an elf woman.



Author's Response: It wouldn't be too bad if it was a reasonably nice elf like this one lol, and she'd probably be easy to convince to shrink you again sometime

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2023 11:24 AM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

Love seeing stories from this universe



Author's Response:

Thanks, I always love revisiting it.

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2023 9:55 AM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

Now these are stereotypes I can really get under. Another fantastic and entertaining read. 10/10.

Hopefully Rina gets the opportunity to smear some more inferior round-ears on their adventures, after all it's been far too long.

Also nice little shout out to the 'humanity's fall' elves. I wonder if your elves would be even a tenth as brutal if they somehow overcame dwarven gunpowder?



Author's Response:

The elves in my fantasy setting are generally a big shoutout to humanity's downfall lol, anyways a lot of the more evil ones do try to raid human lands but usually get killed by guys like Dirk from Amazon Country. As for the elves the higher tier mages do have the ability to pretty much completely ignore gunpowder, Tyrael for example in The Elf is Innocent has spent a lot of her time coming up with magical counters to guns even if she likes humans as a rule, their big problem is that it takes decades to centuries to become an archmage but a cannon and a crew for it takes about six weeks for humans to throw together.

Anyways would they actually be as brutal? No way, they'd definitely want humans as pets/companions or as some kind of vassal state but most of them aren't nearly evil enough to really enjoy wholesale torture and slaughter of humans for no reason. Like Rina says in this story humanity has a lot of other frenemies too, and getting too rough with the humans would probably result in some outside intervention or even divine intervention if things got bad enough. While this universe has some dark moments it's not a particularly dark universe overall.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2023 8:18 AM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

Would honestly like to see more of this party, though that elf's taste in literature is a bit of a red flag. Even if the party doesn't stick together long term at least Cinnamon has certainly found a good new owner/snack.


Author's Response:

I feel like these four probably stick together over the long term and have a Konosuba or Always Sunny type dynamic lol. The Lamia and the Orc would probably need to keep a close eye on the elf obviously but she's not that bad of an elf at least lol.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2023 4:37 AM Title: Fantasy Stereotypes

This was a lot of fun! I love the fantasy elements, the characters, and the sense of humor. Is elves wanting to conquer humans a common stereotype? I guess I'm used to Tolkien elves that are a bit imperious but usually humanity's allies.



Author's Response:

It's more of a thing that you see in size stories a lot. In particular on 4chan and on giantessworld it seems like elves are almost always evil in size stories, in particular Inwiththebooks and his humanity's downfall stories are probably the big name for the trope. Elves in Warhammer and dark fantasy stuff tend to be less friendly than the Tolkien variety even if it clearly inspired a lot of their looks. In my fantasy setting the elves and humans had a military conflict in the past and have frosty relations, though most of the elves are like Rina in this story, smug assholes with a superiority complex but otherwise nice enough.

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