Date: December 14 2023 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I hope you can come back and finish the story!! It's really interesting and fun!!!
Date: June 14 2023 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
Fun story, rather unique premise, you planning to continue?
Date: April 05 2023 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
I hope it continues…
Date: March 24 2023 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
The author has a clear understanding of what draws some to the genre of Otome games and uses that understanding to great effect as the story moves beat for beat through a setting so real I'd like to apply for citizenship.
Thanks for sharing - I hope this story continues!
(Rating based on chapters 1-3)
Author's Response:
You got me there, I play a lot of yuri visual novels and read a good amount of 'reincarnated into the an otome character' manga and manhua XD
And this is genuinely one of the best compliments I have ever received <3
Date: March 18 2023 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
This story is surprisingly wholesome. The family scenes in particular were quite good. Paired with excellent giant/giantess interaction and magic rules, I'm super excited for the next chapter! Everything I could want
Author's Response:
Thanks! I do enjoy setting hard rules in place for magic and whatnot
Date: March 14 2023 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
A wonderful start and a fascinating premise, I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: March 14 2023 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Amazing start! Hope it continues.
Unrelated, but your description says you have other profiles? Where can I find them?
Date: March 14 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
Loving this series please keep it coming I can’t wait to see where it goes I’m a sucker for isekai stories
Author's Response:
That's the plan!
Date: March 14 2023 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
The plot thickens... Characters behaving in some ways counter to what Katie knows of them (like Cayna), and others in ways she expected from the start (Gremoria).
Something tells me Kaya's in more trouble than Katie by the time all's said and done, though.
Author's Response:
Indeed~
There seems to be unknown forces at work here. Hopefully Katie can sniff them out!
And as for Kaya...wait and see~
Date: March 14 2023 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
Really enjoying reading this, interesting story and setting. Gotta love the trope of "mean family" but actually loving especially when it comes to Moms in Isekai.
Wish novels had more tiny MC living with normal size people. This being F/f makes it better in my opinion.
Please keep up the great work, cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I also really love the trope of misunderstandings in these settings. Thinking that you're hated just because the family has resting B face XD
And yeah, trying to live with big people would be pretty stimulating to a tiny gal. Every day would have something interesting going on.
And F/f supremacy!! XD
Date: March 13 2023 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I've never expected a story with otome game settings here, let alone yuri one.
The premise is really interesting, added to fav and looking forward to future chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Considering the increase in manga with that premise, I thought it would be fun to spin my own take on it.
Date: March 13 2023 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Impressions
Thanks for the chapter!
Well, there now seems to be far more political complications then previously thought, at least the duchess and the king might still agree to properly work together since someone seemed to have tied to sabotage it.
And this maid might be also a good test subject of experimentation, after her own attempts at things. Why should Katie not also derive some enjoyment. And if she does get eaten, bursting out of her in front of everyone would be good evidence of the maids wrong-doing(and the shock taking it memorable(could even use an illusory chestburster)). Combined with the issue of the princess, and it might mean some housecleaning is on order.
So, we shall see what happens next.
Author's Response:
The plot thickens~
And you'll see what happens with Kaya~
Date: March 12 2023 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 2: Prima's Home
More then fair to not make Magic omnipotent, either it be knowledge, practice, or raw mana supply requirements, there plenty of reasonable ways to limit it, let alone something life feedback or casting something wrong or by accident. Just cause it isn’t OP (or god level OP), doesn’t mean it can’t do a lot, or that stuff can’t be experimented/tried.
And thats exactly what I mean, she will forgive a lot, but if people squander it, the consequences are probably going to be so much worse for them then it was before. Katie will probably take a lot of pleasure out of that when it happens. Plus the compel spells can stay single target (without more mana or som other changes), cause its to find out the about his conspiracy and ensure no one with bad intentions like Kaya get any power or close to Katie and her eventual friends.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!👍
Date: March 12 2023 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Prima's Home
Good potential, nice take on the isekai setup compared to the usual "got hit by a truck and woke up in another world" style. I actually appreciate the lore dumping and magical info as world-building not just for us, but for Katie, since this gives her an idea of what she's truly capable of when not restricted by story railroading.
Oddly, it actually makes me want to create a setup like this using Fabula Ultima to create a game setting... Hmm...
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Making something like this after reading (honestly too much) isekai stuff is fun. And to me, establishing a world is very important. Setting rules and limitations prevents BS down the line.
And I've never heard of Fabula Ultima before, but it definitely looks cool! Though every dnd type sizey game I've tried to participate in or host ends pretty quickly T-T
Date: March 12 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 2: Prima's Home
Thanks for the chapter!
Well, good intro and confirmation on magic, the durability will help but might temporally backfire with what seems plans. Probably see just how metaphysical it can get, about intentions, attention, perception, or other things that are more ideas then physical effects. And conjuring matter, theres going as deep as the Quarks and Gluons. Maybe see if there any memory enhancement spells so ensure she gets absolute everything from the before. Bet the reason she can multicast is cause she isn’t limited by what everyone there believed, which was that could can only cast one spell at a time. Sounds like an interesting upbringing limitation.
And shrinking tests obviously, maybe see is non euclidian geometry/portals with in end thats larger/smaller then the other to shrink/grow things that go through them, sounds like a good construct, or trap when combined with some illusions. Other fun stuff too obviously.
Kaya obviously needs a far more serious reaction. Even just telekinesis to force choke and otherwise restrain. And any attempt at being used can be turned around, for fun on our and Katie’s side. Probably should have Compel Truth, Prevent/remove Lies, Command, and Prevent/Remove Resistance (or all the other synonyms for it(or mind reading) to get all the info she can out of Kaya. The new Primavella is much worse then a spoiled arrogant brat, cause she isn’t held back by either of those.
And the good old Otom staple of being hit on the head.
Author's Response:
Yeah, there's lots of possibilities when it comes to magic. Though I don't really intend for it to be an omnipotent force in the world. Honestly, it's no fun if there isn't any chance of failure after all XD
Katie herself isn't the type to get angry easily. She's quick to forgive and forget if it isn't anything too major. Everybody gets a chance. Revenge comes after they throw that chance away.
Regarding Kaya, there is a reason she didn't do anything drastic at that moment. I gave a subtle hint towards it, but it'll be more revealed in the future.
And yeah, getting hit in the head is a very convenient plot device to use. But the thought of a bread roll the size of a boulder doing it made me chuckle.
Date: March 11 2023 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Now this is a nice surprise! I'm already a fan of revenge stories, especially given how unfair things are to tinies, so this will be a fun twist on the usual size story tropes. Go gettem Katie!
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, revenge stories are the best~
Date: March 11 2023 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I am a simple person. I see yuri and size shenanigans I give five stars. Seriously though, very good introduction.
Due to her actions and reaction before being transported, I doubt Katie will run away. She seems a stubborn protagonist and I like it.
Thanks for writing and sharing! Already added to my favorites.
PS.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Katie certainly can be stubborn where Prima is involved. She has ideas on how to give her a happy ending, and definitely isn't afraid to use them!
Date: March 11 2023 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I shall eagerly watch those experiments with magic! And if you want, I and can DM you some of thous food for thought. Your the wordsmith and this is your story.
Fair enough on bikini-plate, its even more ridiculous then the heels (I can guess some balancing or ‘sure-footedness’/friction/stickiness enchantment applies would solve that). And with what magic might be able to do, nothing stop people from wearing skintight armour as cloths, making metal as light, flexible and comfy (or even more then) silk, let alone just how far the magic can truly go. Im sure you can fit this into just passive world building as they get mentioned or relevant.
And wonder if there are other fantasy races then just the fairies, cause some cat-girls or a dragon/lizard girl(full anthro and not just a girl with horns, slit eyes, wings, and gradin scaled hands) doesn’t sound too bad. You have to say anything, us reader shall have to see.
Thanks for the rapid responses! I eagerly await the next chapter!
Date: March 11 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Obviously she isn’t!!
Its just going to be interesting to see just how far she bend things, not just in story beats, but magic and in world stuff. Cause I cauls make a university semester essay on all the experiments and questions on the magic system that would need to be considered and what various answers might lead do and could be used for practical purposes. Let alone the good size stuff.
Then theres of course my own hopes for what to see in it, but that would be long.
Would recommend Tori Transmigrated for a real interesting take on this Otom game genre, and how in game/story beats are more complicated when becoming a real wold.
Whatever truly things was going in with Felicia in the end or being chosen as the spy is probably way more complicated I bet.
P.S. Wonder it its one of those fantasy worlds with boob/bikini plate armour and even serious high heels in battle, and what the in universe explanation and practicalities (since they are very impractical to fight in) of them/how they make them work? So something to answer eventually. Use readers will have to see.
Author's Response:
I have plans in mind on how she's gonna be changing the world she's in. Will definitely take some time, but being able to understand how physical elements work and being able to directly influence it with magic.
And there will be plenty of size play stuff still between then~
Felicia does have a complicated backstory, but we'll get to that later!
(Also, there are indeed bikini armors! Though they are not often used, since they are highly impractical. There's a handful of artisans that apply powerful warding magic to the armor to make it work, but most women avoid exposing themselves like that. Especially since they can just get those enchantments on regular armor.)
Date: March 11 2023 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Finally! Someone is trying the other tropes other webnovels are based on! So this should be good! Only thing missing os someone doing a serious attempt at a LitRPG/System one. Or even just the hero summoning.
Obvious recommend it Overly Sarcastic Productions Trope Talk to get some good ideas, and how to use the tropes to the best degree. Plus, as someone from Earth with earth knowledge in top of the game’s meta knowledge, that should make her magic extra powerful or interesting on top of what the lore normal said. So lots of experiments to run and see just how much she can break the magic too. Other obvious is some counter spells or antimagic field to counter the shrinking, spells, potions, levitation, and wing illusions, and ensuring there a lot of stuff recording it or with good witness. That reveal of Felicia could mean a good size scene at that moment, IF it happens.
Maybe also, even if mean to Gremoria, ask the king to have more controls available on her to prevent such rash decisions, being far more mature in asking it should go a long way
Sorry for a bit of review bloat, bit this should be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I thought it was a fun trend to try and jump in on with a sizey take.
Not to give away spoilers, but Katie definitely has ways of altering the storyline using what she knows. She has no intentions of letting herself die like that XD