Date: March 16 2023 6:42 PM Title: Hide and Seek
Another amazing story love your work. You are definitely one of my favorite authors please keep up the excellent work and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words! Very happy you are enjoying my stories! :)
[Report This]Date: March 15 2023 11:38 AM Title: Hide and Seek
Another Great Story! I really liked the concept of Tanja hunting around for Nina in the room. Really help enforce the idea of predator and prey.
I kind of have an idea for a future story concept you can write about. A story about a vegetarian girl who gets peer-pressured into eating tinies and tastes meat for the first time and ends up getting addicted to the taste of tiny flesh. And when I mean addicted, I mean really addicted 😄
Just an interesting concept I thought you could use in the future
PS: In response to the last really long review I wrote I am vegetarian as well 🙂
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind review and the five star rating, I always appreciate it!
Well, I did already write a story very much like that - it's essentially the plot of "A Matter of Principle" and how Hannah becomes a tiny-eater. She isn't a vegetarian or a vegan, but everything else is very much the same! 😊
Date: March 11 2023 3:56 PM Title: Hide and Seek
Read this yesterday! I’m always anxiously waiting your next story and it’s always such a GREAT day when I finally see one of your stories pop up in the Most Recent sections!! Added on top of that, a chapter that’s solely a Tanja F/f chapter?? I’m in heaven lol. This was great! Tanja continues to be one of, if not my top, favorite giantess characters!! Got to the point where I lowkey also wished that she kept Nina for her reserves lol. Her frantic, horrified reactions were so great to see.
Only have a few nitpicks and that’s that I wish we could’ve seen at least a quick update to Ramona’s situation and I was hoping she’d wait to swallow the couple at the end so that they could witness her using the bathroom, maybe even showing them her shit afterwards and taunting them about that’s what they’re going to become. But it was still fun knowing they could feel her using the bathroom from inside her stomach.
And in response to the previous review before mine, I absolutely LOVE long chapters like this. Even with how long they are, I still want more once I’m done reading hahaha. I definitely prefer long stories like this rather than shorter chapters. Like you said, it just makes it easier to find different parts and I don’t know, there’s just something satisfying about such a long story on one page.
Anxiously waiting for the next one!!!
Author's Response:
Very happy you enjoyed the story! :) I actually considered Tanja keeping Nina around for longer myself at one point, hahaha. But the story wasn't originally intended to be this long, and there's still Ramona's story that needs to be continued. And yes, Ramona not appearing here is on purpose, due to the chronological setting of this particular story in relation to the others (you might have noticed that it is set after "Girls' Night Out" but before "With Friends Like These"). Not going into any details as to not spoil anything! ;-)
Date: March 10 2023 7:36 PM Title: Hide and Seek
I like your stories Vortex. Can you break this into 3 or 4 chapters? 22k words is too much to read at once.
Author's Response:
Thank you! As for the chapter division, I have considered it before but prefer to keep the document in one piece so that people can easier look for specific parts, as that is something I always preferred to be able to do on this site myself. I know it is a little inconvenient with regard to bookmarking, but the POV dividers (***) can be seen as chapter division of a sort. The stories are also available as PDF files on my profiles on DeviantArt and Eka's Portal, if that is any help! :-)