[Report This]Date: March 06 2023 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Literally In Her Hands
Still loving the series!
Great to see the other side of everything that Amy was doing last chapter, and James constantly trying to reassure himself that everything is going to workout in the end.
Hope you decide to continue the story, as it's been great getting a chapter every week and I would be thrilled to see more, even if releases slow down with you focusing on your other stories.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2023 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Fabric of Love and Misunderstanding [Amy]
Great second chapter, I'm definitely hooked on this story and looking forward to more of it!
I love the shifting of perspective to Amy to get to see things from her view and how she's thinking of the situation. I feel like getting the viewpoint of both sides in different chapters really adds to the excitement, and is something I think other stories are really missing out on!
Also, I adore how Amy has started to shift and get into it herself, it's great seeing her work herself up from hesitant and nervous to getting more and more dominant close to the end of the chapter.
In addition, I very much appreciate the images and think that they're a great thing to add to the experience.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback! Not many people seem to appreciate the image details but I think they add a lot to the immersive experience. Glad you enjoyed!