[Report This]Date: March 06 2023 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Literally In Her Hands
Still loving the series!
Great to see the other side of everything that Amy was doing last chapter, and James constantly trying to reassure himself that everything is going to workout in the end.
Hope you decide to continue the story, as it's been great getting a chapter every week and I would be thrilled to see more, even if releases slow down with you focusing on your other stories.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2023 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]
Your writing style is fantastic! I always love a good panty transformation story, and this is so far one of the better written ones I've seen.
Looks like it'll be focusing on the front of the panties? Should be great, but I'd also love to see an alternate where it goes right and he gets the full experience, or even just the back of the panties instead. ;)
Looking forward to more from you!
Author's Response: We'll see what happens! Thanks for your feedback.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2023 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Fabric of Love and Misunderstanding [Amy]
Great second chapter, I'm definitely hooked on this story and looking forward to more of it!
I love the shifting of perspective to Amy to get to see things from her view and how she's thinking of the situation. I feel like getting the viewpoint of both sides in different chapters really adds to the excitement, and is something I think other stories are really missing out on!
Also, I adore how Amy has started to shift and get into it herself, it's great seeing her work herself up from hesitant and nervous to getting more and more dominant close to the end of the chapter.
In addition, I very much appreciate the images and think that they're a great thing to add to the experience.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback! Not many people seem to appreciate the image details but I think they add a lot to the immersive experience. Glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2023 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]
Perfect first chapter, just hope we don't have to wait long for the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! Next chapter is up
[Report This]Date: February 22 2023 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]
Always happy to see more well-written transformation stories, though the set-up was a little long for my tastes. Unless it's relevant later, I feel like the shop portion and some of the device's explanation could be cut. However, I did like that the explanation to Amy served as an explanation to the audience as well, and their dialogue was wholesome and natural.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I wanted this story to differ from the standard magic/witch motivated transformation stories and I feel like explaining the process in a detailed, "scientific", almost boring way makes everything seem more real and possible. The confusing explanation does play a significant part later as well (and there's a cute little payoff from the shop scene). Hope to hear if you change your mind about the scenes' impacts once the last 2 chapters are posted. It's alright if you don't!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2023 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]
Amazing story so far, especially love the pacing and the buildup, as well as the reluctant girlfriend. Excited to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! Slow pacing for the win
[Report This]Date: February 21 2023 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]
Ohh, looking forward to this one! Also exciting to see transformation into panties. With the way you described Madison, it almost would be exciting to see her brought back in.
Excited to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Madison was fun to write. Thanks for the review!