Reviews For At the pet sitters
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed 



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Date: September 30 2009 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1





Date: September 30 2009 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what the other reviewer was grousing about. I think this is fine, just the way it is!
Reviewer: Gadgetman Signed 


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Date: September 29 2009 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1




Date: September 29 2009 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Maybe things should be clearer...There is terminology in this story that should be explained. If this is a sequel to a story perhaps you should include a note of the prequel or this and many others should be one complete multi-chaptered story.