[Report This]Date: October 01 2023 5:03 AM Title: Tricked into Adoption by a Lesbian Couple
Great script interesting how you have made a dark kidnaping and shrinking seem loveable. This portrayal of the "Mommies" is just lovably dark. Looking forward to reading your other stories.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2023 6:24 AM Title: Tricked into Adoption by a Lesbian Couple
Y'know, looking at the...... "Script" yeah, i can understand why no one took it up, Jesus Christ this got dark really fast, and i don't know if it's just me but it actually made me uncomfortable.
Again, personal opinion, have a nice day
Date: February 15 2023 8:39 PM Title: Tricked into Adoption by a Lesbian Couple
This is fantastic, thank you. I love how this couple completely flipped the guy's life and taking ownership of him. In the process of diminishing his life (literally), they've added fulfillment to their lives. Their needs are more important and seems like they have a lot of love to give. Thanks again - what a great premise :)
[Report This]Date: February 11 2023 3:43 AM Title: Tricked into Adoption by a Lesbian Couple
That was a really enjoyable read. Thank you for submitting it. I hope you find a woman to make an audio (GWA) version. Let us know if you ever do.
The script flows along very nice, and with the possible exception, but by no means diminishing of repeating she threw his cloths in a clothing recycling bin down the street, it reads beautifully.
It would be great if you continue the story, and Taylor returns home to change and breastfeed their new baby boy.
I would like to bring to your personal attention, I have several unfinished and unpublished stories (don't we all) of women breastfeeding shrunken men, including at least one story of a lesbian couple and a shrunken man. Though unlike your story of benevolent lesbian lovers, mine tend more towards the malevolent side. So in the future, should I ever post one, kindly note I took inspiration from your story, but did not copy it. I just thought you should know this.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing out the repeat; I took care of that.
I would LOVE to read those! Benevolent and Malevolent are both very fun in their own ways. Please do let me know if any of those ever see the light of day. If you're not already on my discord, please feel free to join and discuss there.