Mann... Poor Tim can't catch a break.

Author's Response: …And things certainly aren’t looking to get much better.

It is good to see that Natalie is becoming more aware of incidents like this with Tim and Aunt Julia but not the full scope. The accident she has with him really helps Julia's case that there can be accidents. If there is constant accidents, there might be some worries that Aunt Julia is doing something. Aunt Julia will have to think of something to get Natalie back on her side. Either by blackmailing Tim with photos, or torturing him to be quiet. She can also fabricate photos of Tim in dangerous places and say that Tim keeps putting himself in those situations. A lot of different options of how Julia keeps getting away with it.

It is great to see a yoga scene where the tiny person is put into tight places on woman's body during a workout.

Author's Response:

     So, one of the things that I addressed in my recent revisions was Natalie’s obliviousness towards what’s going on at home while she’s at work, along with Tim’s hesitancy to speak up about his mistreatment. I tried to address this and play up the blackmail aspect of the plot in this latest chapter, while still leaving Julia room to continue having her fun, but I also know that if I want to keep story somewhat believable, I will have to make some adjustments to the plot moving forward to ensure everything stays a secret. I think the torture route is the one I will ultimately take, but there’s also some gentle interactions in future chapters that I want to preserve as well, so I’ll have to make sure I get the right balance.

It's nice to see a Laundry machine in GTS material. You really don't see a lot of it. By the way, will you be doing what-ifs like in your Babysitting story?

I could barely read the text, you may have to try reformatting it, it's too small to read properly.

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Great chapter. Liked him being located on Aunt Julia's as she went to sunbath.

I do wonder if the neighbor girl will have any part in this?

Author's Response:

Yes, this chapter was inspired by a combination of a picture I posted on Deviant Art, and a personal fantasy of being trapped in a beautiful woman’s cleavage while she’s sunbathing.

In actuality, I retroactively added in the ending to this chapter after brainstorming the events that will occur later on in the week, so definitely expect to see the neighbor girl again 😉

Thanks for the review!

Really liking this story, constantly checking back for new chapters. Hopefully see some more unaware interaction with mom too!

I like this chapter. I like how Aunt Julia is starting to become more aggressive with her sexual behaviors. She knows how to use her body even if the other person is tiny. I wonder if she will find some way to blackmail Tim to be quiet about what she is doing. Offers a deal to make things better but records it to make Tim look bad.

I hope that she does more stuff with breasts. Maybe something with the nipple.

Author's Response:

I understand it's a fetish story and common sense would only get in the way of the size shenanigans. But Tim and Natalie have me rolling my eyes at times.

Tim really needs to explain things to his mother more clearly. His situation would be resolved if he simply informed her that his aunt is intentionally threatening and abusing him. Natalie also wins parent of the year for being so instantly dismissive of her son's constant pleas. At the very least you'd think she'd verify the situation by setting up some secret nanny cams to check how her incredibly squishable son is being "looked after" while she's not around.

Anyway I assume his aunt is going to condition tiny Tim into an obedient and submissive slave before tricking or convincing his mother to get in on the action... perhaps over a few bottles of wine while she's tipsy and uninhibited. First by pressuring them into a few mother son foot rubs after a hard day in the lab. Or suggesting she keep Tim securely trapped in her stocking/panties/bra etc, instead of leaving him alone and unsupervised at night, or potentially wandering off and getting lost during the day. Before long his mother might start to question if she really wants to lose her obedient little toy, why keep working her ass off at the lab to find a cure?

I like your stories and this scenario is so hot, a tiny tortured by a mature woman.
One thing: consider seriously trimming down the CAPITAL words for used for EMPHASIS in dialogue. I mean, you use them a lot, to the point of obnoxiousness. this is a porn story, so I don't give a shit about style and skill usually, but this makes it weird to read. if you don't agree, try reading a portion of your story out loud and you'll hear how unnatural all the emphasis sounds. it's not necessary and it's intrusive.
anyway, good story though!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I probably need to reserve that for when someone is shouting or screaming. I think I just want to confer emphasis, and I’m not exactly sure how to do that effectively. Maybe italics? In any case, I do try to read the words aloud in my mind when I’m proof reading, or even speak them aloud when I do my dictation.

Anyway, thanks for reading, and for the critique. I’ll certainly consider it going forward.

This story looks to be amazing. The aunt that wants to tease and use her body with a tiny person but also know it is her nephew. She wants to fulfill her fantasies while watching him with care at the same time. Also knowing that her sister will come back later. What can she get away with without Tim telling on her. Or will Tim start to like this sort of attention his aunt is giving him. I hope she gives him all the experience that mature woman would know how to feel good.

Author's Response:

Well, Julia certainly has some plans in mind for having fun with her tiny nephew, and she’ll discover a few more as the week goes on.

Tim, however, is certainly not fond of his treatment, and is going to do whatever he can to stop it, even tattling to his mother. Of course, Julia will have to find a way to keep her little nephew quiet, even if that means taking drastic measures.