[Report This]Date: August 11 2023 2:29 PM Title: Friday Evening
Would love to see Julia perused Nat into having him pamper her. Love to see him reluctantly give his mother a foot massage for helping create an antidote.
Author's Response:
This is definitely something I’ve considered; you’ll have to wait to find out. 😉
BTW, any thoughts on continuing your “Origins of a Foot Fetish” collaboration story?
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 3:23 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
As I comment I have a wide smile on my face. It seems even when only practicing people (me included) like your writing. That said, I am not sad Tim’s story is coming to a close since – like ‘Inari The Floof’ already commented - we know it was only practice for the lots of great works yet to come.
What I mean is I can’t wait for the release of Little Big Brother and Summer with my Stepsister – but you probably already knew that.
About the dialogue in this chapter, it went smooth as a show, don’t tell. What do I mean: altough I would agree with Julia, Natalie acts as a worrywart and doesn’t want to leave anything to chance, displaying the contrast between the two: Natalie is careful and also more anxious, while Julia is more extrovert and carefree/careless.
So, I am sorry for the people that wanted Jules to be an evil maniacal dominatrix. She isn’t (at least as far as I can tell). I must hold the urge of
making more theories – ‘bigfly20’ idea of Mackenzie not giving up is spot on.
Must… hold… the urge!! Anyway, there is a more important thing than my theories: you taking the time to practice, asking for the readers opinions and even responding to all the comments shows how much care and work you put
into this for us.
Thank you. A million times thank you! Hope everything is well. Stay safe!
Author's Response:
Yes, “Little, Big Brother” is going to be the next, big project for me, but there’s 2, maybe 3, small things I’d like to finish before really diving into writing that novel, specifically a short story about a tiny being stuck between his wife’s toes while she gives herself a foot massage, a scenario I’m planning to include in the upcoming novel, and finishing the alternate giantess chapter of “Babysitter Trouble”. There might be a quick story about a teenager getting shrunk while his younger sister hosts a pool party, but I don’t know how long that might turn out to be, and I really don’t want to jump into another multi-chapter project unless I have a clear outline and can confirm it’ll only be a few chapters long, if necessary.
I’ll be honest, chapters that are dialogue driven and have long conversations are something that I really have to take a long time writing and finalizing, because I have to make sure I hit the plot points I want to cover, while still making the dialogue feel smooth and natural. Often times, I find myself physically playing out the conversation out loud to make sure it sounds realistic.
So, as far as Julia’s personality, I wanted her to be playful and domineering, and not just jump to downright maliciously evil. I do like a domineering, even resentful giantess, but one who reaches that point naturally over the course of being around a tiny person for a while, and discovering just how much fun she can have tormenting the tiny in various ways.
In conclusion, I am really liking my idea for the “Scenario Series” to practice some of my scenarios, encounters, and interactions for writing practice. I really think this is going to vastly improve the quality of my novels going forward.
Thank you for your high praise and support!
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 12:22 PM Title: Sunday
I am so honored
A+++ writing
*bows*
Se la vie, flowers wither and bloom let your mind wonder like the dust upon your grey storming field. A revisit is often beneficial and full of nostalgia and a chance for a new perspective
Author's Response: Well, I usually try to at least consider suggestions from my readers. Plus, the ending I’m planning will most certainly leave it open for a sequel if I so choose; in fact, I’ve even been kicking around the idea of adding a short epilogue which will facilitate the possibility of a sequel, but I haven’t decided whether or not to add it just yet.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 2:23 AM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Hi me again, I am sad this story is coming to a close. However I know you have great works to come and your writing style is fantastic. I also love how you have the protagonist never give up and not break and get something akin to Stockholm Syndrome because of their torture and them getting a happy ending when they didn't deserve the torture in the first placeyour stories as it's something you don't see to often on this site with a flow like that as if stories like that exist they aren't finsihed. It's refreshing. Anyway I look forward to all your works no matter the ending because once again above all else you are an amazing writer! Stay foxy my friend!!
Author's Response:
Well, I do usually like to have some kind of a happy ending in my stories, but that may not always be the case going forward. Unfortunately, my previous attempts at having “sad” or an “open-ended” conclusion to my stories were not well-received, but that was probably more to do with the ultimate execution in my writing as opposed to people not liking unhappy endings. Moving forward, I just need to make sure that if I plan to write a “bad ending” to a story, it needs to fit the story and plot narratives, and, at least, have it make sense or leave things open to continuations if I so choose.
As far as the whole “Stockholm Syndrome” narrative, it wouldn’t really play out as a tiny liking his torture or being tormented. It would probably develop more like a tiny person developing a crush on a gentle giantess, and developing a “fetish” for their features (e.g. developing a foot fetish after seeing a giantess’s sole from a new angle, and then wanting to be rolled around under her feet or cradled in between her soles).
Anyway, thanks for reading and sharing your insights.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 1:25 AM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Sad to be seeing this story ending so soon, but I understand wanting to stick with the week long structure.
First thing that crossed my mind for Tim ending up in the casserole would be for him to climb onto someone’s plate as he attempts to get some food, only for the owner of the plate to not notice him on it (maybe due to other food items on the plate already) to then lift the plate over the casserole as they are adding food to their plate.
One thing I had hoped to see at some point during this story was some more unaware interactions between Nat and Tim. Most of all some unaware in shoe interactions where Julie had put Tim or trapped Tim in his mother’s footwear. Possibly having Julie reverse blackmailing Tim with lies about Tim constantly going near Julie’s feet due to some bizarre fantasies of his. That Julie hadn’t told Nat about because she didn’t want Nat to worry. Julie puts him in his mother’s shoes both for his torture and to give credence to her lie about Tim trying to indulge himself.
Whatever you decide to do to finish out this story, I definitely will be looking forward to it. I’ll also be on the lookout for your future stories.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the week-long structure provided a few key aspects to the story while also ensuring it stayed relatively concise.
Tim clinging to a plate was also one of the few ideas I’ve been kicking around. I’m just not exactly sure how to properly implement it yet.
I actually hadn’t considered Julia manipulating the situation by telling Natalie that Tim had acquired a foot fetish while shrunk. It’s certainly a scenario worth exploring, if not for this story, for future ones. Having a shrunken person exploring a newfound fantasy as they get smaller, however, would be a more natural, realistic way of getting that tiny into trouble.
But fear not, while the story is coming to a close, there’s still plenty of fun planned. Friday evening is going to be a two-parter, and I’ve been kicking around lots of ideas as to what kind of trouble Tim can get himself into. I’ve already got the first few details figured out—just need to get them written.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 8:50 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Please don't let this story end. It is wonderful. I would like to see Natalie come back with the antedote, but it works much slower on humans and requires multiple doses. The amount she brings home only grows him back a couple of inches and unfortunately Natalie gets called away on business and asks Julia to take Tim to her house until she gets back in another week.
Author's Response:
Lol! I know that a lot of people have gotten really attached to this story, but it’s got to end at some point. I can’t keep it going forever; I have other stories I want to get to. Besides I really don’t like it when stories just go on and on with no sign of ending, and this site is way to full of stories that had promising starts, but the author(s) just abandoned writing and never finished.
But, given your suggestion, I think you like how the story wraps up…plus, there’s always the possibility of a sequel if enough readers really want one.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 3:58 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Aunt Julia really does have to make this afternoon enjoyable. She isn't going to have this chance again. (unless she steals some of the shrinking chemical.) I think that she should put him inside her vagina again. She knows how amazing it feels so she would want to do it again. Maybe keep him in there for a little bit while she does other things. Maybe Mckenzie comes by for Tim but can't find him because he is in Aunt Julia's pussy. He struggles inside giving Aunt Julia pleasure as Mckenzie searches. Mckenzie won't be able to search there on Aunt Julia. If not that way, I still think that the pussy is good. Maybe the nipple before, Aunt Julia forces Tim to cum into her nipple before putting him in her pussy. Just some idea rambling. I just think she needs to satisfy some sexual craving before Tim returns to normal
Author's Response:
Well, your scenario is certainly intriguing. Not sure it’s exactly what I want to add to this story for the end, but certainly a scenario that I will integrate into a future story, so thanks for the suggestion.
I think the rest of the afternoon is going to be eluded to in an afterthought, but I can certainly see Julia using Tim for one last “self-gratification” session. 😉
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 1:44 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
I hope just as Natalie is about to leave, the rabbits shrink back down, meaning the antidote doesn’t work.
Author's Response:
I can certainly say that this was something I had considered, and I absolutely think it’s a good idea, but I think I’m going to go in a slightly different direction for this story.
However, as I really like this particular idea, I’m most definitely going to use it in a future story once I find the right one!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2023 12:24 PM Title: Sunday
The only way I can see Tim giving up on blabbing to his mom is for her to almost kill/embarrass him, so he would feel bad about her finding out and possibly her feeling guilty since she's already under so much pressure etc.... casserole is one option for his aunt to try ( perhaps after some time in the oven, he winds up on his moms plate or maybe just ends up as leftovers or in the garbage ) , but their are other ways his mom could almost kill him, I know u enjoy options that are unique/new to gtsworldiverse. But since u asked here are some starting prompts
Ass- panties, cushion, plug, chair, towel, TP
Feet- shoes, heels, sandals, paint, ring, anklet, massager, pedegg
Vore- casserole, ice cream, liquid chocolate, coffee, gum, candy, marshmallow, boiling, ice
Breasts- cup, necklace, running
I enjoy your stories for their great ideas, here are some basic ones XD
Author's Response: Well, as of right now, I’m not exactly sure how I can get Tim into the casserole without anyone knowing and still have the chapter end how I want; unless I find some inspiration, I may have to abandon that particular aspect, but I still have some time to figure things out.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2023 9:41 PM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2
I'm talking about the warm casserole in the oven for the next chapter, mouthplay/unaware/aware/ treated like food/left overs/fridge/garbage its up to you i know youll find a creative solution...... its been a min since pudding, the casserole is such a big part of him getting caught.
A++ writing
Author's Response:
Well, I haven’t quite figured out how that’s all going to play out just yet. The real issue is figuring out how to get Tim into the casserole 🥘 in the first place…you know, without someone intentionally putting him there…
Any ideas?
[Report This]Date: July 14 2023 11:15 AM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2
casserole.......... A++ writing
Author's Response: Well, I had to find some excuse to get Mrs. Peterson and McKenzie into the story again. 😜
Date: July 13 2023 10:49 PM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2
Love that Tim found his way back into his aunt’s wonderful crack! Can’t wait to see what’s in store
Author's Response: Well, I, too, am certainly a fan to tinies getting stuck in between giant asscheeks. It’s a favorite trope of mine, especially where the giantess doesn’t know she accidentally sat on someone
[Report This]Date: July 13 2023 12:49 PM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2
It would be hard for Tim to escape without assistance. Aunt Julia would be more cautious as Tim nearly escaped, or be a little crueler. For him to escape, I have an idea but I don't normally like it when the story goes this way but it makes sense if Aunt Julia does. The idea is that Aunt Julia will fart with Tim in her ass cheeks. She will taunt him in saying that she needs to change her panties. She would take them off and wad them up over and over with Tim inside. She puts them in the clothes hamper as she is ready to do laundry again. She gets a phone call from Natalie and is distracted. McKenzie has been watching and uses this time to sneak in and grab Tim. Maybe switch him out with a real bug so that Aunt Julia thinks the movement in her panties in the hamper is Tim
Author's Response:
Yeah, I agree that it would be hard for Tim to escape without assistance, and just having him simply escape his cage on his own again would be repetitive an unoriginal. The main reason for this this upcoming chapter was to work in some fan suggestions, but I fear that I may have written myself into a corner…
…That is, until your suggestion. Now, it’s definitely not going to go the way you outlined above, but it’s given me the inspiration I need to make everything work. Thank you so much!
Date: July 13 2023 5:50 AM Title: Sunday
I love your stories and I hope Tim gets a happy ending as well as Aunt Julia getting what she deserves. Maybe through Kenzie?
Author's Response: Well, I certainly appreciate your kind words and input. Thank you.
Date: July 10 2023 3:37 PM Title: Sunday
Maybe a way Tim could get out of his 'cage' is to make it look like he has escaped and when the giantess comes to find him he clings to her to get out
Author's Response:
Yeah, that’s kinda what I was thinking; the issue is exactly how to do it. In that case, it probably should be Julia again, but that might get a little repetitive. I was also thinking Tim makes it appear that he’s still in his cage, like sleeping under a blanket, then escapes in the same fashion as you described, in that case it could be either Julia or Natalie.
Anyway, thanks for the suggestion.
Date: June 29 2023 9:24 AM Title: Sunday
Man what a cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Well, I didn’t realize how long the morning chapter was becoming until I was almost finished, so I decided to split it. I’ve been working tirelessly on the next chapter because I really want to get the situation and scenarios correct, which required a lot of planning, blocking, and acting out the characters’ movements. I certainly hope everyone appreciates the effort, and I’m hoping the next chapter is finished by the end of the coming weekend.
Date: June 01 2023 3:26 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2
My vote is Mckenzie. Throw some teen romance in the mix
Author's Response: Well, you have to remember that McKenzie is still 4 years older than Tim (she’s 19 and he’s 15) so the likelihood of any kind of teenage romance between them (even if she does find him in his shrunken state) is pretty slim. However, I do like the idea of a teenage romance budding over the circumstances…🤔
[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 3:54 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2
I would have to say that McKenzie is the best option to find Tim. If Sandra found Tim, she would most likely return him right away to Aunt Julia. Viewing the adult as the responsible one and not a shrunken teenager. McKenzie would be the sort of person Tim would want to find him. McKenzie would listen to Tim and would consider Tim's plight from the get go. She would believe that Aunt Julia is torturing him. Tim is young like her so she would feel incline to help him. But since she is a teenager, she views herself just as capable as an adult for any adult thing. Upon hearing the stories Tim tells hers, she could want to do the same thing as Aunt Julia did. Maybe asking him to walk over her body from boobs, butt, and pussy to please her. She might not be as rough as Aunt Julia but gets the image across that at his shrunken state that people might view him as a sexual toy. He decides to come back to his house after that. Aunt Julia finds him and Tim tells her what happen. Aunt Julia is fine with it as it is a weapon in her arsenal to use against Tim. With Aunt Julia making it sound like he visit the neighbor girl to bang, all of Tim's complaints against Aunt Julia don't sound rationale. It makes Aunt Julia sound good trying to help him and him just trying to have fun at Aunt Julia's expense. Thus, giving Aunt Julia a whole day to do whatever she wants with him and Natalie will not listen to his pleas. Even after the ordeal. I believe Mckenzie is the best choice for that. Or building a relationship between the two after the week is done.
Author's Response: I do like the idea of a relationship building between a Shrinkie and a giantess character; it’s something I’m definitely planning for my upcoming novel. Giving the main character some kind of outlet (gentle giantess) is something I am a fan of, even if they’re technically cheating on a significant other (I.e. My “With Great Power…” story). I also like my gentle giantess characters to be nice, yet playful, even if it gets the tiny person into trouble.
Date: May 31 2023 2:13 AM Title: Sunday
Huge fan of your stories so I’ve got to cast my vote. I think McKenzie would be entertaining, whether aware or unaware. Bring on the butt stuff!
Author's Response: Well, thanks for being a fan. Right now, I believe more people want to see McKenzie again, but I think, for the story to make sense, that both neighbor woman will have to be in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 1:32 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2
I'm more interested in seeing McKenzie in the story.
While we're talking about what we want to see. I'd love some more butt and either fart/sweat content. Could be from anyone and aware or unaware. Maybe trapped in the back of some panties/thong for chores or errands. 😀
Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda figured as I was outlining the next chapter that people might want to see McKenzie. I think, in actuality, with the way I had envisioned the next chapter, that it’ll only work if BOTH neighbor woman show up.