Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2024 2:16 PM Title: Sunday

I was hoping for more of a continuation from the previous chapter, this chapter did not feel like an ending but that's ok. Leaves the option to come back. Pretty good story overall. I'm ready for your next one, the preview has me pumped up! Thanks for writing great stuff for us

Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter is actually how I envisioned the story ending all along; although, I didn’t initially have a sequel in mind when I started, but given the direction the rest of the story went, a sequel certainly could be in the works. I’m also ready to move on to other projects, as my two short stories need to get knocked out before I start the major work on my novel.

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2024 6:11 PM Title: Saturday

It's sad too see another great series ending especially right when Julia and Natalie are now completely on the same page. I hope this gets a sequel or spin off or something

Author's Response:

Well, I’m certainly glad you liked the story. I will say is that this chapter was how I always envisioned this story ending…although, I hadn’t initially intended on writing a sequel, with the story being set at the beginning of the summer and the introduction of the neighbor characters, it certainly leads to sequel possibilities. I still may add an epilogue that will leave the story even more open to sequel possibilities and the direction I’d envision it taking, but that would be all for quite some time with all the other projects I want to get to. I imagine the next novel I plan to write is going to take at least a year to even get close to completion, along with the short, side stories I’d like to write and post.

With enough interest, I will write a sequel, but I will make sure it’s of a much higher quality.

Reviewer: Inari The Floof Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 1:42 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.5

Once again, it is I Inari! Loved the chapter, poor Tim everything seems like it will always go against him. However Aunt Julia did invoke Murphy's Law so now hopefully Tim gets out unscathed and happy. I'm looking forward to the, possibly, last chapter to see the conclusion of his adventure. Can't wait to read more of your works!!!!! Hope you're having a wonderful holiday season! Keep it up I love it all!-Inari

Author's Response:

Yes, I know that things keep going badly for Tim, but that’s kinda the point to the story: it’s practice to help perfect the scenarios I want to include in my longer works. Ultimately, I still want this to feel like a complete and well-written story, but I also know some people just tune in for the good parts😉.

As always, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2023 5:22 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.5

So Julia knows where Tim is. But she also invoked Murphy's law when she thought that last line. I wonder if Tim will escape by getting out from under his mom without Julie seeing or by getting sucked into his mom's butt so Julie thinks there is nothing left.

Author's Response: Well, what I can tell you is that the last chapter is Saturday; the active events of Friday night have concluded, so you’ll find out Tim’s fate at the story’s conclusion.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2023 1:45 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.4

So good to hear from you again! And again, you surprise me with how
creative your scenarios are. Creative, that’s the word I think better describes your writing and makes your unaware scenarios so unique.

That extends to the characters relationships – you are very thoughtful of the
build up on the surrounding and the many sensations it arouses on the characters: big and small, you are able to show, not tell, leaving space for us, the readers, to wonder about what comes next.

This ability helps builds up to great inner dialogues, like the one at the begining (where you tell us a little about Tim’s situation and own view of
himself), followed by the emitional turmoil on the sink scene - Will he survive? Will he make it? How? When?… This keeps us invested and thinking. Makes your stories one of the best parts of this site.

Since you are wrapping things up and tihis is a practice, no theories this time - but thinking about Tim and McKenzie, what their previous dynamic was and what it became after him shrinking, how did they meet in the first place… all that might help in a future project (and giga mother… giga Natalie trying to find her son… kkkk the ideas just keep popping!).

Relax and don’t forget to take care of yourself while writing.

As always, thanks for writing and sharing! You are a hero! Stay safe!

Author's Response:

Glad to be posting again; it’s been almost a month since my last chapter:

     I always like to have unique scenarios and actions instead of just the same old feet, tits, ass, etc., and I like to be creative and try new things, especially in the unaware genre. I find that every reader is different, and what one person likes or is into, someone else may not like, so any chance I have to vary the scenarios in my stories I like to explore.

     While my plots and stories are usually action and dialogue driven, sometimes you need to hear a character’s inner thoughts to help explain and express their emotions, and the inner dialogue is something I like to use from time to time.

     As far as the Tim and McKenzie dynamic that I know people are dying to hear more of, I think it’s important to remind everyone that even though they’re only about 4 years apart in age, for teenagers, that’s enough to put them into two different worlds: Tim’s still in high school, and McKenzie, despite being the quintessential girl-next-door, is in college, so the odds of anything happening between them is low. They really don’t have a lot in common, and despite Tim’s crush and her involvement in the events over the past week, McKenzie really hadn’t given him much thought before now.

     Of course, one can never tell what kind of effect finding a tiny person will have on a person, regardless of their age difference, so you never know…😉

You’re one of my most avid readers and reviewers, and I’m always happy to hear from you. Thanks for all your support!

Reviewer: Inari The Floof Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2023 1:13 AM Title: Sunday

You know I think it's funny that I get first review of the latest chapter. With that being said, I hope you didn't push yourself to hard when writing this, rest up when you need to. Also, amazing chapter once again, Tim keeps getting lucky by a hair and I can't wait to see how everything turns out and how his mom reacts to what he's been through, good luck on the rest of the chapters and your other stories. Like I always say I look forward to them because they are an amazing different take on the giantess vs tiny trope. Keep on keeping on! -Inari

Author's Response:

Oh, I usually don’t push myself too hard when I write, as I like things to come to me naturally; if an idea on how to proceed with the story isn’t ready or doesn’t come right away, I usually just wait until an idea comes to me and I can outline it before continuing. The events of the Friday evening chapters required a little bit of thought about how to get Tim where I wanted him, but I’m overall happy with how I outlined the events and laid everything out.

I always love the first few days after posting a chapter waiting for the reviews to come in, and they’re always appreciated.

Thanks for the feedback, and, as always, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Inari The Floof Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2023 8:47 AM Title: Sunday

It is I, Inari The Floof once again! What an amazing twist you did there with Tim put into the trashcan instead of being eaten, but I figured you wouldn't do vore since it be a bit like a deus ex machina on how he survived since it never was said that he could possibly survive that type of harm before. Anyways, another good chapter and I'm looking forward to the rest of this story and the ones you create in the future! Keep on keeping on!

Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you like the twist; although, I was a bit worried that having Tim climbing out of the trash can might seem a bit repetitive after the hamper incident. I’m going to be working hard to finish the next chapter by the end of the month, but it might take a little bit longer…

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2023 6:16 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.2

Nice. I really hope the mom has to go somewhere and puts on her socks and shoes with tim inside before leaving the house.

Author's Response: Well, sorry to disappoint, but she’s in for the evening and planning to relax (if I didn’t make that clear). But, that doesn’t mean other antics can’t ensue at home. 😉

Author's Response: Well, sorry to disappoint, but she’s in for the evening and planning to relax (if I didn’t make that clear). But, that doesn’t mean other antics can’t ensue at home. 😉

Reviewer: TinyBoxMew Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2023 1:20 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.2

 “How would YOU like it if YOU were the one who was small, and I kept poking fun at YOUR predicament?!”  Oh how funny it would be if this actually happened.

Author's Response: Well, karma can be a bitch!

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2023 8:07 PM Title: Friday Evening

I think it would be possible for a more fanservice evening if Natalie feels the pressure of stating that it would be tomorrow for Tim to grow big, that she would leave the house to go back to the office for an overnighter to make sure that it will work. She will feel horrible if it doesn't work, causing more overworking. It will cause her to fall asleep there and wake up late, allowing more personal time with Aunt Julia.

If Aunt Julia has the house alone with Tim, I think that Aunt Julia should have Tim go to bed in her pussy. imagine him spending a whole night inside her. She gets pleasure all throughout the night of him struggling until he has to fall asleep. She can also tease him that he should feel lucky that he did. Nobody has water mattresses these days and she was able to provide that luxury to him.

the other idea is for him to make love to her nipple. Have her promise that she will be nicer if she gave her some affection for all the kind treatment she does for him. All of this is a ploy to record him doing naughty things to her. Blackmail him to agree to whatever story Natalie and Aunt Julia make about the previous week to hide that he shrunk. Keep him in line if he ever spoke up, she could turn it around against him.