[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 8:03 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Great story so far, I especially love the world-building and pop culture references. As a college student, It is easy to imagine a class surrounding this world's new rules regarding things like consent. Also, I imagine that some of the college students would use politically correct terms like persons experiencing shrinking, rather than tinies. I'm also interested in if celebrities or content creators also shrunk.
In the beginning, it's hard to root for Quinn, since she's doing and planning acts that would be considered horrible by most people. But since she and Derrick's relationship has reached a new milestone, I expect that too improve. I like the size of the tinies become. I really enjoy the pacing of the story, and how it cuts to the next events.
I really like how it doesn't go straight into erotic acts, and first introduces people. I hope to see more of Penelope, Iris, and the RA girl. All in all a great story and the first one I read of this author.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll have to write in some scene of students going to a tiny-rights workshop or something like that. Our main cast is going to get closer, in several ways, as the story goes on obviously, Quinn and Iris are fortunately not so evil as they imagine themselves to be in their fantasies haha. We'll also see more of the other characters. Anyways if you haven't read any of my stories you might check out We Help Each Other Get By, of which this is sort of a spinoff, though with none of the original characters.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 5:46 PM Title: No Outside Food
Vore isn't really my thing but I thought I'd give this (and everything else you've written) a read after being blown away by Amazon Country and Abduction.
So far the world and character building have been just as incredible as in your other stories.
I really love the idea of the bracelets staving off the shrinking phenomenon when worn. Especially with the well thought out flaw of cellular damage requiring the wearer to take them off for several days a month. This creates obvious vulnerabilities and opportunities for malicious people or even playful pranksters to exploit.
I look forward to either Quinn or Iris neglecting to take those antacids before falling asleep. Or rescuing the tinies from another girl like Penelope, who intentionally made them suffer.
I can imagine Quinn and Iris being shocked by the horrific state the tinies are left in afterwards. Wincing at their visibly painful wounds/lack of skin (which will thankfully heal up due to their regenerative abilities). The experience serving to blow away their silly fetish-board preconceptions. Making them (Derrick included) realize that they'd been incredibly naive and foolishly dismissive of Kelly's warnings and concerns.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Yeah vore is a bit of a niche, there will be other giantess content throughout the story though don't worry. I like the wristbands because it lets "tinies" live relatively normal lives but with the prospect of being small again always close at hand, along with the need to take them off a few days every month like you said. Quinn and Iris are in for some rude awakenings, like they probably imagine themselves as "mischievous" and it hasn't dawned on them that there are people out there who were really cruel to tinies.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 5:07 PM Title: No Outside Food
Quinn's newfound morals really made her character for me. Even if her and Iris still have a few things to learn about the abuse and cruelty Kelly and most tinies probably had to face. Hoping to see them continue to grow as characters as they are exposed to the ugly side of their fetish.
Author's Response: Yeah as much as Quinn and Iris fantasize about being evil tiny eating giantesses they aren't actually monsters. Kelly will have her own role in helping them figure out some of the nastier parts of the tiny experience.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 6:23 AM Title: No Outside Food
Glad to see Quinn has a conscience, and isn’t fully driven by her lust.
Iris was a little oblivious to the tension there, seemingly completely missing the implications that Kelly was molested and assaulted repeatedly during her time as a tiny.
I find myself hoping that Kelly gets an opportunity to school Quinn and Iris on some of the horrors of their particular fetish. They romanticize the act a little too much, with their opinions colored by the online fetish communities.
Author's Response:
Kelly is definitely the sane(st) person in the room, Derrick got sheltered from a lot of the harder parts of tiny life, and like you said Quinn and Iris are fetishists who are really only slowly starting to realize the objects of their fantasies are people too, though fortunately they do have a sense of conscience.
Date: February 01 2023 1:06 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Lol, and I'm into vore where most of the time it's fatal, but not always, and I like to at least leave open the possibility for survival. That said, I can see from viewing a couple of your stories that you're an accomplished writer and that opening chapter was pretty good, so I'll most likely follow this one through regardless.
Author's Response:
Thanks, obviously even in these scenarios where it's not fatal it's still not the best experience for the tinies unless the bigger partner goes out of their way to make it so, even if it's non fatal I feel like vore is more fun with some element of risk to it, even if it's just an unpleasant rather than a life ending experience.
Date: January 31 2023 12:20 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly
I just thought of something. Imagine some F/F couple that is really into size play and both can shrink. They'll probably have history of surviving together during the 'No cure' days.
F/M will also work but F/F should be more interesting
Author's Response:
We'll hear plenty of tales about how tinies got by in the "no cure" days
Date: January 30 2023 5:05 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Really like the first chapter - very good erotic suspense built up there and a good intro to some major characters. Really like the usage of anti-shrinking wristbands - it allows the author many options and that is also a good thing. As vore is my fetish, I hope the 'nearly' indestructibility of the tinies allows for some digestion, especially if left in the belly too long. I could see where some tinies could survive a shorter time in the tummy. I hope both elements are utilized.
Won't rate the story yet, but the first chapter is 5 stars. Well written.
Author's Response:
I'm into vore that tinies can usually survive, that said it doesn't always end up being pleasant for them. I guess you'll have to keep reading to find out!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 10:10 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly
This is fantastic! I can't wait to see how it plays out. You're a gifted storyteller.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: January 29 2023 9:27 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Get the feeling that Kelly has experienced non-consensual vore in her time as a tiny.
Author's Response:
Yeah, among other things.
Date: January 29 2023 5:20 PM Title: Big Again... Mostly
I’m glad to see more of this universe! One of my favs.
Author's Response:
Yeah we won't see the main characters from We Help Each Other Get By but this will give an idea for how it turned out for former tinies.
Date: January 29 2023 10:28 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Kelly is so cute....
Author's Response:
Yeah she's our independent and feisty tiny, we'll see more of her
[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 2:51 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Excellent start!
Once again showing your skill at world building. Hoping to see more characters with interesting back stories like Kelly.
And speaking of Kelly, intrigued to see if a love triangle of sorts develops between her, Derrick and Quinn… A relationship (or one night stand) where both partners can more or less change sizes at will seems like an interesting thing to explore
Author's Response:
Thanks, we'll hear a bit more about what other people did during their "small years," and why Kelly is a bit more wary of everyone.
Date: January 29 2023 1:05 AM Title: Big Again... Mostly
Liking this so far but Derrick seems way too trusting, it's probably going to lead to some hijinks I'm sure.
Author's Response:
Yep Derrick spent his time as a tiny in the care of family and was pretty sheltered, Kelly is a little more genre savvy you might say.