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Reviewer: Small Pet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2023 1:50 AM Title: Whole Story

Oh man, this story was short and right to the point! I loved every aspect of it (ok, I'm not into fart but I can ignore that part easily without the story losing its 'enjoyability').

Well, I can say I'm a bit envy of little Adrian... what could i do to be on his place... I bet his mom is hot!



Author's Response:

Really happy to hear you enjoyed it!

Yeah, the person who commissioned it didn't want to pay for a higher word count. I think it could definitely have been much longer and much better. I may one day write something that is similar to this, but longer and even more detailed.

Thank you for your review!

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