Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

To paraphrase what I said earlier; Deb's doubts have a bad way of being proven wrong. And, if they (GTS-goddesses) have the same anti-human attiude as Jerktor and Mega-giant Fred (or whatever his name was), then I fear an evil alliance of convenience might be in the works!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Heh! Jerktor's anti-human attitude is even more extreme than Misty's. Which makes me all the more concerned about what happened to Deb, on Mega-world.

I mean; she dismissed her employees' fears as needlessly paranoid. And, yet, when she realized one of them might be right, she tracer-chipped Diana behind her back. A habit she first developed when she used to be a human-poacher!

And, all because she overconfidently assumed the mega-giant owner of that house would _not_ strike back at her.

Sorry! But, if I were Steve, I'd say to her, flat out: "I expect that kind of naive arrogance from your sister, not you. Not from the woman that I married! Your people's powers might make you superior to shrink-and-grow tech. Yet, you and I recently learned--the hard way--that those powers can all too-easily be negated by super-witchcraft or other forms of magic. And, God help us if Mega-world ever gets a local branch of the Wishbone restaurant!"