Date: July 22 2023 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - What's The Worst That Could Happen?
WOW, this is an excellent story, I liked the protocol, and the formal mode of the meeting is great, I hope I can read another chapter in the future.
Date: July 22 2023 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - What's The Worst That Could Happen?
WOW, this is an excellent story, I liked the protocol, and the formal mode of the meeting is great, I hope I can read another chapter in the future.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2023 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 3 - What's The Worst That Could Happen?
Now I wonder if she can play soccer/football in high heels (or of course wedge :), stilettos would dig in to much).
While shue she could just shrink them for harassment afterwards, and they’ll probably be pretty mentally broken and not do anything, shrinking people (depending on how small too) kinda makes it hard to find anything of them if they suddenly disappear, especially if no one knows they sent with her (thought unseen so far is the shrinking is permanent of if Amiée needs to maintain it, will have to be found out). And it has to have happened at least once before by accident.
And there is also always visiting the bad side of town with the ‘wrong’ look to entice people who also will not be missed and not just in the “no one cases about them” way. Thos types would probsbly be even less likely to enjoy her work then, and she could go notably farther. Or some annoying bigots that might be fun to truly break mentally, .
And also her enjoying crushing cars, or the inserted bus/truck, if shes tried.
Do winder if shes considered more permanent pet people. Like Blaire deciding to live with her in a doll house next to her shoes, or a terrarium (classic one). Or maybe finding and actual house to shrink for Blair to live in within a terrarium to really small, then step in when collecting her and Blaire climes onto/onto her shoes/feet.
Or maybe making person jewellery, shrink and tie people up and wear for a date.
Last one actually made me think of ow effective alcohol or drugs are on shrunken, or if they need food. Its something to find out, should make som more energetic, and it would need much. Or Amiée would have at least thought about it.
Well, good chapter, pretty interesting so far, and lets see what’s different about Blaire compared to the others.
And I hope you check in more, then you can respond more quickly and this can more more of a conversation. Or visit the discord server and we can talk there, but others would probably enjoy your story too!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2023 11:32 PM Title: Prologue
Im glad I can give ideas!
I recomend even just googling and looking through Pinterest (some throwaway account should work) for the kinds of shoes/boots/booties you/Amiée would want to use. The algorithms should help the rest.
Plus, if Amiée doesn’t know how to walk in heals well enough yet, or such, there are Reddit snd forum posts on how to train up, good for long time wearing of heels to have tinies in.
And the reason I said train up for hiking, is that hiking does need some training for better fitness and stamina. And, braking in the shoes. So again even before some serious hiking/vacation, thats some rank boots for your and her after the months of it. Besides also wearing the heels on exercise machines, or otherwise intense exercising, and could use heeled sneakers. Thos exist. Not advised IRL but proper training seems to be possible for them.
And Us readers will have it see if Amiée can shrink non living things or how far. Crushing cars are a popular one, going to a scrapyard for cars no one cares about, and again wedges allow crushing with the whole footprint.
Or inserting and crushing a whole bus or train car full of people for her direct pleasure.
Is shrinking and aria/space possible, that will have to be seen.
We will have to find out if shes tried directly eating people, she shrink and kills them regularly enough. And there always mixing them with normal food. Especially depending on how small she can make them.
And if she does get board, she can go online and ask enthusiasts like us for more ideas and there practicalities, theres no real shortage.
So I hope theses help some more, and can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Always love to hear other people's ideas, so of course you can, mate!
Oh, I wouldn't worry about that. Aimée's pretty used to walking on tinies in almost any type of shoe, especially heels. Plus, she's got getting hot and sweaty down to an art form as well. I mean, she plays football/soccer for a reason!
As for the extent of her powers, suppose we'll have to dive into more of that as the story progresses. Though she's not really one for killing the people she targets, after all, that'd be a very real crime she could be viably charged with. Whereas just shrinking and torturing people for a couple nights, at least with the way she does it, isn't really something she worries about biting her in the ass. Especially not when she can just shrink people for even longer if they want to try and hassle her lol.
Thanks man, and hope you like the newest chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2023 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Something A Little More Deliberate
Very well written, I thoroughly enjoy this story~ Of course I love the first chapter, the back-and-forth is especially well done there, and the attention to detail too - I love pointing out her nails accentuate her thong. Insert smug anime face. Plus the ass content is just well written all around~ Maybe I should make someone kiss mine a hundred times next...
I also really like the action and teasing in the third chapter, and seeing some different sides of her makes her feel like a more fleshed out character. Plus who doesn't love a swamp in a boot?
The second chapter is well done, and interesting to see a full other side to the vile one, but Blaire's perspective is definitely a bit cloyingly sweet for my tastes, so I think whether I like that chapter or not depends on how you use her inevitable impression whiplash for maximal effect. Insert smug anime face. Anyway, I can see some possibilities, like having the poor girl torn between liking the orders and attention and being disgusted by the situations, or so on... Though I hope she doesn't become a total willing simp who likes it all because that's sooooo boring, am I right? If I had a coin for every time 2/3 of the way through a story the unwilling tiny goes full streamer simp and enjoying it I'd have... a lot more yen. But hey, that's just my perspective. Insert very smug anime face.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, mate! Really means a lot coming from you!
Yeah, that first chapter wasn't even originally planned but just seemed like the perfect way to introduce Aimée right out of the gate. Same goes for injecting a bit of ass content, just cause I know feet will be the main focus through much of the story, so it's good to find a balance. And knowing you, having a tiny pecking at your ass is never a 'maybe'.
That's kinda my main goal overall to be perfectly honest. Like sure, yeah, hitting all the fetish and kink notes, but I also want Aimée and Blaire to resonate as real people, rather than just smut caricatures. If that makes sense? Plus, if you love swamp boots, then Aimée's got plenty more where that came from lol.
I won't say much about Blaire for now, nor where her character arc might be going, but I don't think you'll be disappointed. As for how she's going to react if and when she sees what Aimée's really capable of... well, suppose we'll just have to wait and see, won't we? Though, if anyone's gonna end up being an unabashed simp, then that won't be her.
Always appreciate your perspective, mate! And I'm sure we can get you more yen one way or another.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Something A Little More Deliberate
Thanks for another chapter!
With Espadrille wedges, a lot of the fashion material is either summer show, indoor or office, or Mediterranean setting. Aimée could (depending on just how small she can make people, or even objects if she can) smuggle some people on a vacation, play the ancient greek goddess on a Mediterranean beach. Or as new house shoes.
Theres even DIY kids for those heels, so she could make smuggling/storage specific shoes for herself. Even enlisting the aid of a tiny to make the work even higher quality.
Besides all the other kind of wedges out there. Even recently found the Moab Wedge Boot Merrell has, that could be if she ever goes hiking, plus all the training shed need to get up to that point, so wedges for months even with exercise. Should get stinky too since that seems to be a major thing.
Even really terrible thing of leaving a bunch of people out in some part of some woods, or when ‘disposing’ of someone, and then coming back to crush the settlement/camp they made in the intervening time or hunting them.
Author's Response:
No worries at all, mate! And thanks for another review!
I can certainly say your knowledge of wedges far surpasses my own, so I'll have to try and makes some notes on the ideas you're throwing around there. I'm sure there'll be the right scenario to draw something from eventually!
And I wouldn't worry - when it comes to doing terrible things to tiny people or making her feet reek, Aimée's certainly more than capable of that. Which I'm sure will only become clearer as the story progresses...
[Report This]Date: January 19 2023 11:20 PM Title: Prologue
Wedge heels like seem like a good high heel for giantesses or who take on tinies. Allow high heel and a sexy look with the issue of the space in-between the sole and heel, so a full foot crush/step could be done in them.
And even if there are no custom heels (which is more then fine your the wordsmith), I think some close toe espadrille at the beach may be good. Making sure theres a tiny for each foot.
And even, different rang of tinies, theres Aimée, then the high heel tall girl, and then the even tinier guy.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, wedge heels are definitely cute and do give a nice amount of space for a giantess to keep some tinies compressed. Espadrille are nice too, thought would probably need quite a specific situation to work in. Something to keep in mind though!
And there will definitely be some size-play featuring different sizes of tinies, whether Aimée's playing with them or if someone else is.
Next chapter should be up now, so I hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2023 1:02 AM Title: Prologue
Looks great!
Can’t wait for the FF F/f and FF/f parts!
And since shoes seems to be on the table from the tags, recommend wedges for maximum underfoot area and easier to walk in for a high heel. Plus there always having a compartment in them for stories shrunken people if wanted.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
It might be a little while before any FF/f content, however, if all goes to plan there should be a bit of F/f in the next chapter, so keep an eye out!
Definitely some good ideas there, so I'll have to make a note of that. Not sure how much this story will get into the idea of heavily customised shoes used to imprison or contain shrunken people like in a wedge or boot heel, but you never know I suppose...
[Report This]Date: January 12 2023 8:28 PM Title: Prologue
Love this so far, can’t wait to see where it goes. Always nice to get right into the action.
Author's Response:
I’m really glad to hear that! Really appreciate the generous review, mate, and I can’t wait to start teasing out where things are heading.
And yeah, this wasn’t originally planned to be the first chapter, but it felt right to kick things off with a little more action!