Date: January 12 2023 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Keep it coming, great start. I love how the mom destroyed the city early without warning with such casual attire and effort. Pure bliss. Hope to experience more like that as the story progresses.
Date: January 02 2023 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
This shall be one of my new year's resolutions! To write reviews even if I don't have much to say and encourage artists I wish to see more from! XD
This is the second of two Swiftverse stories I've seen in the New Year and I really hope that means we get a ton more of stories set in this world.
You seem to be doing something different here by placing this within the bounds of the real world if the reference to Winnnebago being their living location is anything to go by. I'm very curious to see if that trend continues or is just a one off.
Admittedly, I'm disappointed to see yet another blond giantess in a sea of blond giantess but I am no less excited to see how the story plays out. despite that The premise is already pretty interesting and the reveal of another person Sam's size at the end is very intriguing. I'm taking this is the Emily that was mentioned before? The name doesn't come up anywhere else in the text.
My only other critique would be to spread out the information a bit more throughout the story proper. While a much needed explanation of his life and a well written scene, the ending feels like an exposition dump and the actual conclusion is much to abrupt. Other than that looking forward to see how this story plays out X)
Author's Response:
thanks for this thought-provoking comment;
What I've found I love in giantess stories is that where the giants and tinies generally have their own societies (the same as ours) that exist simultaneously. Brobis just don't think about Lilliputians much at all, and when they do interact with them in casual everyday ways (like happening upon an ant-hill)- the consequences are make good stories. Obviously there's going to need to be a fair-built of world-building and I have been trying to work on a spread out purely narrative or descriptive info.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2023 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the start of this story. The world building is fun to learn about. I think it’s nice to see how Jennifer sort of adopted him as a family pet.
Maddie and Isabel seem like the usual kind of young women who may seem playful and somewhat sadistic.
I’m really curious about the relationship ship between Jennifer and Sam. I wonder if it will she will have some fun with him too since I’m pretty sure we could guess the daughters will have their fun already.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
thank you for the feedback! I do plan on some interaction with Jennifer. I have a few chapters written; this is in the pipe a little later.