[Report This]Date: February 26 2023 6:22 PM Title: Slimed
Fantastic work here. The dialogue quickly forms and colors the characters, very effectively. I appreciate the playful tone all the way throughout, a refreshing change-up from some of the more punishing work to be found.
Author's Response:
Yeah some of my stories are more serious than others, this one obviously is a pretty silly and playful one. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2023 5:12 AM Title: Slimed
Slimegirls are always so cute 🥺🥺🥺
Author's Response:
Thanks I think so too, luckily he managed to teach her right from wrong in time before she ate everyone lol
[Report This]Date: January 07 2023 6:54 AM Title: Slimed
It’s been a while since I’ve last read one of your stories, and I have to say I definitely picked a good one to read. This is amazing!
The slime woman concept along with giantess is really fun, and opens up a lot of tags/fetish content that usually isn’t as accessible in the size fetish. I’m really loving the way this turned out and how the two lovers progressed.
Though, it’s slightly rough seeing Susan force herself on the male lead a bit, but to her it’s also necessary for her survival. Not to mention no one said anything that a relationship with a slime was gonna follow human ethics down to a tee either.
Overall it’s all fun size fetish stuff in the end, I loved every bit of this story. I understand it’s a one shot, but in all honesty, if you ever expanded on the concept more in a larger story, I would love to read it!
Author's Response:
Overall the implication from the lore Caleb read and how she acts towards him is that most human/slime pairings that get this far probably don't end on such a positive note, luckily he was pretty nice to her at first and so she tried to be nice to him during her formative period. To a degree she's acting on instinct, her first survival prerogatives are secure the human, then eat, once she's got that down she can think about what else she wants, and as it turns out she wanted Caleb as more than a battery luckily. Anyways maybe I need to write about more slimes lol this one seems popular.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2023 8:24 AM Title: Slimed
I LOVED this story! Probably my favorite of your one shots. I also really really love the DnD fantasy world you’ve been building stone by stone. The overall continuity is so fun and they tend to be the ones that make me laugh out loud the most reading them. The “unmaidened activities” gag kept getting funnier every time and I loved the villains being so endlessly pleased with themselves for crossing cultural human/elf barriers haha.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I enjoy the fantasy stories a lot, I really need to make a map or something of the world at some point lol. Anyways I like to have continuity between them but not so much that someone can't just read any of them and be able to jump right in. I'm glad you liked the jokes in this one, that's always great to hear.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2022 3:20 PM Title: Slimed
Really great short story! I love the concept and wouldn't mind seeing more of these characters with the potential this concept holds. We rarely see growth stories from you (in comparison to shrink) but theyre always a hit. Hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Yeah I tend pretty heavily towards shrink or already big giantesses, nothing against growth but I guess I just don't hit it much haha. Anyways I don't know if this one will have a sequel, but we might see the characters again in one of my fantasy stories.
Date: December 31 2022 2:08 AM Title: Slimed
This story was sooo good and well written too. The characters, the worldbuilding, the dialogues and the COMEDY! Pure gold!
"One of the bandits loudly muttered, “slimefucker” and there were murmurs of agreement."
This is brilliant. Please write more stories. I would love to read them!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I do like my monstergirl themed one-shots. I've got a pretty good back catalog of stories if you want to check them out, if you are into comedy stories I recommend Welcome to Hell! Lots of silly stuff going on in that one.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 10:04 PM Title: Slimed
This was a great story. I'd love to see almost a monkey's paw alternate version where Caleb loses control of the slime and she starts eating people and eventually him as she gets bigger and bigger ;)
Author's Response:
Most of my stories tend to be fairly lighthearted, but yeah things could've definitely gone a different way if he was mean to her lol.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 7:32 PM Title: Slimed
Well done! Your stories have alway been great but they’ve noticeably improved in the last year. I’d love to see what you could do in a normal fantasy novel
Author's Response:
Thanks, I've been experimenting with different types of stories, lengths, formats, glad to hear it's paid off. Anyways these little monstergirl one shots are always fun, I've got some normal fantasy novel ideas that don't involve shrinking or giant girls lol, we'll see if they ever go anywhere, for now writing these kinds of stories is pretty enjoyable for me.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 1:33 PM Title: Slimed
Quick, dirty (slimy) and veeeery lovely! Thank you so much. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, at least slime is probably relatively hygienic, right?
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 6:32 AM Title: Slimed
Excellently written one-shot.
Speaking of, any chance we’ll see some more additions to your collection of One Year Lease one-shots sometime soon?
Author's Response:
I'll try to get that one shot about what happened with Amber out before I start my next longer story.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 6:31 AM Title: Slimed
That was funny. Very well written. You've got quite the large... imagination.
You got a guffaw out of me with "maidenless behavior".
Author's Response:
Thanks, I try to bring humor to the less serious stories, yeah Caleb's maidenless behavior came back to haunt him, but at least it was in a good way... kinda.