Date: June 26 2023 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
great stuff. i love the world building
[Report This]Date: June 25 2023 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hot damn, honestly I wasn't sure you'd take my suggestion. Like I said, I don't like telling people how to write their own story. But not only did you take it, you ran with it. Those two chapters where better than anything i could have come up with.
Penelope is adorable. Love the way you wrote her. I like that Mike now has someone who'll care about his well being. I know his family loves him, but they don't seem to think much about what he goes through. I love her personality and I look forward to whatever kind of action they share between each other. I know you said at the beginning you weren't sure how much of a story you wanted to write with this, but all of the great characters make for a good plot on their own, so it's got plenty of potential. I really think she'll be the one to help Mike learn to enjoy the action.
Chapter 7 was very well done, and has got me anticipating whatever (and whomever) comes next. I'll be adding this one to my favorites so I know when the next chapter is out. You made a hell of a lot of progress in a relatively short amount of time, so feel free to take your time on the next ones, and thank you
[Report This]Date: June 17 2023 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
No problem, happy to provide some good feedback. Yeah I've always loved gentle giantesses myself. Not just because I empathize with the tinies, so naturally I want the giantess to empathize with them as well, but also because I think it's an interesting version of domination. When a woman is so powerful she dominates you without even making any effort to, or while she's actively trying not to dominate anyone. That's some impressive power.
Plus I thought it would be a cute idea. I never want to tell an author what to write, because they naturally know their own story better than I will. But I'm glad you like the idea. But if I could make an actual request of you, whatever ideas you decide you want to explore, whether it's my suggestion or something completely different, could you work in another masturbation scene? One involving one of Mike's sisters? You're really great at writing them so I wanted to ask while I've got your ear.
I appreciate the reply and consideration, my guy. I wish you the best of luck with this story, and I won't be hurt if you don't use my idea. You write it how you want to, because that's how it's going to best turn out.
[Report This]Date: June 15 2023 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really enjoy this story, especially the well written descriptive aspects. You have a very high level writing style which I respect. Looking forward to where you take this.
I try not to make suggestions because you're the author so you should only write what you enjoy. But I read your jack and the beans talk story ax well. My favorite part about that was the queen's best friend/advisor who was actually caring towards jack. I like giantesses who are powerful but have empathy. I wondered if mike could meet one like that. A giantess who showed more care than the average one. Then I thought "what about if he meets a giantess that develops a crush on him"? A beautiful young woman who wants to try to attract him, and finds it awkward given how easy it is for her to accidentally dominate and scare him with her size (as well as her "size" ;). This would possibly lead to Mike developing into a guy who likes giantesses more and he slowly becomes more enthusiastic over whatever fun actions his sisters and mother make him do.
I get that you probably have other ideas of your own, as this is your story, so only write what you want to write. I was just reading this and thought how enjoyable it would be to see a cute giantess with a monster of her own try awkwardly to get a boy who's afraid of her to like her. What are your thoughts on that? I'd like to know. Anyway keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Well, that's actually a very nice suggestion (gentle domination is a kink I find particularly interesting myself, e.g. an innocent giantess who tries to shyly express her affection towards Mike but her massive size makes it difficult for her as even her pittiest move scares him away and sends him running...).I 'll see what I can do. Thanks for the constructive feedback!
Date: May 26 2023 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Nice to see you update this story
[Report This]Date: April 21 2023 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love your works and the different worlds you've built.
For this one in particular, Amy’s brother Tom and Becca from the logistic department's husband are two characters I would love to see get their own full chapters or whole spin off stories at some point.
I do have to say though, as a fan of your plus size model amazonian futanari myself, I would love to see you tell a tale someday about a protagonist who doesn't hate their life/the situation they've found themself in. Perhaps a slow growth/shrink story about a young couple who are genuinely in love and whose love persists even when the virus has completely run its course and he's living in her panties.
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for the review. It's good to hear that my stories are well accepted by readers. As for the said characters maybe there will be a few chapters devoted to them in the future or they may appear as side roles next to the main protagonist's predicament. Now for the slow growth/shrink scenario... I don't see it coming to be honest. As a devoted macrophile for the most of my life, the scenes I enjoyed the most were when the tiny protagonist had to face the humongous giantess for the first time or when the unaware/oblivious giantess made her first appearance and kept moving on with her moves unknowingly destroying the tiny's world with her great size. You know, the sudden realization of feeling utterly helpless and powerless in front of the huge lady. Unfortunately, this whole concept vanishes with the slow growth/shrink sequence and I don't myself writing something I don't really enjoy myself. Sorry if I fail you but even if I tried, I believe the result wouldn't be appealing, I mean to write something I don't fully understand myself. Finally, for the gentle love story...It simply doesn't stick with the whole futa domination concept.
Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 24 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the mom’s presence and control of the situation.
I really wished she got to play with Mike more than 1 day though. 1 day feels too rare. We need Mike to have more interactions with her.
I thought the punishment would be the mom putting Mike in her panties first. The feet part felt random lol.
Hopefully Mike gets in trouble again Tina has to punish him herself in a more intimate manner.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well, I think I'll come up with something. Certainly Tina is a great character and it only feels appropriate for her have her way with little Mikey
As for the pantie entrapment, I thought I maybe spammed it a bit too much, hence the foot part. One thing's for sure, Mike will have a very difficult next week! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 23 2023 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Stumbled into your stories and love them. The sizes you give are great and I love that you give the mom/milfs the most obscene sizes. Always a pleasure to read your content. Looking forward to more of Tina in this story.
Author's Response:
How can mature lady establish herself as the most dominant when all girls are truly curvy and enormous? By being bigger and even curvier of course! That's a point to notice. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yes! Another story from you! I can’t believed I missed out when you first started. Well, now I’m glad to finally read this and I am impressed!
I love giantess school settings, and I love how the teachers are extra kinky! The anatomy teacher was kinda hot from the way she randomly picked Scott and then used him as a toy.
Also, the PE teacher seems to just be horny and I love it. We didn’t get much of a description of her such as the Anatomy teacher so I’m curious how the PE teacher looks like.
I hope there are more hot teachers soon too. Maybe there’s a sex class or something and there’s this naughty teacher that loves teasing the boys in her class. Or maybe she takes one of her students home!
Anyway, I’m loving this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2023 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Fantastic so far! Anticipating more. Was waiting for the fellatio, or even to see poor Mike get pounded into some one's cervix, but alas, the tease. I'm roped in to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! In general I find it difficult to write good smut, hence the short fellatio scene. As for the pounding, I don't know, maybe in the future?
Date: February 02 2023 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Both chapters are great! I hope you continue it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would be lying if I said I didn't want to see the sequel to this story. I know you said it was likely to be a one shot toward the top, but I can hope.
Author's Response:
Well, the extra three chapters certainly prove that this isn't a one shot. I don't know...something just kept me going. Maybe there will be a few more chapters in the future who knows.
Date: December 30 2022 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love every one of your stories and look forward to every update
Author's Response:
Thank you! The web certainly need more giantess futa content in my opinion!
Date: December 30 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooo I was wanting to see a school themed one since it can go many ways. Hope to see more from this in the future.
Author's Response:
The school environment is indeed a great place to inspire kinky thoughts. Thanks for the review!.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2022 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving the story! I love this new world order concept where giant women dominate and little men are just pets. I hope the story focuses more on women's feet.
Author's Response:
I hope chapter 4 fulfilled your expectations on women's feet, even though there's more to come. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2022 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story exicted for chapter two.
Author's Response:
Thank you!