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Reviewer: rave777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2024 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking for a real nice yandere giantess story, looks like I found one. :)

I like the variation of themes between chapters, keeping things fresh while allowing for diverse size interactions with different vibes. Also loves the development in how Adam sees Miki, really telling how things continuously went south as the story goes on.

Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Gokuto Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28 2024 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Im really liking this so far. It would be cool to see more of Miki trying to engage with and be nice to our protagonist using the things she knows about him. Maybe have them talk about nerd stuff that he likes and have him start to develop feelings for Miki in spite of her actions, kind of like how Stockholm Syndrome works.

It would also be cool to occasionally see Miki’s POV and how she feels and has felt about our little guy. 

Another thing, and this is more minor, but I personally wouldn’t mind you writing Janet out of the story. Maybe have Miki say she let her go, but she actually just kills her in secret.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I've intentionally kept it a bit more of the horrors that Adam is experiencing so far because it's only been a couple of days since he was shrunk. Miki has a bit of work to do if she wants to bring him around, but there's a chance Adam will start to have feelings for her. I'm not sure that will happen in the arc I've got planned or not. Related to those plans, there's going to be an upcoming chapter which touches a bit more on Miki's past that will be told more from her POV. Stick around for that!

I'm not sure about Janet. My original draft didn't have her living this long, but it's been useful having another tiny around who obeys Miki. At one point, I considered Miki forming a harem for Adam (as a way to fulfill his fantasies and make him happy) but at this point I'm not sure Miki's the kind of girl who's good at sharing.

Reviewer: Shortstump Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2024 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

The way you blend smut and the absolute horror of Adam's predicament is amazing. I created an account just so I could leave a rating, genuinely had me on the edge of my seat

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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