Date: March 19 2023 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Back to the Start
ive read a bit of dc but at some point i think ray was involved with giganta so he seems able to have a normal relationship and understand what he did was dubious. he went in for an op and took so much pleasure in the situation he came in his suit not only that he compared himself to batman in terms of the pleasure they gave her he just comes across as quite an untrustworthy guy who shrugs off sexual misconduct. Diana is his close ally and i find it wrong he did that on top of knowing she had a hole bored into her internals by the parasite which i found myself rooting for after he took such pleasure in the situation. it feels like a dirty cop with bodycam he hopes will get him off a charge sort of like "the boys". I wouldn't trust him as a doctor he left her with open wounds and went to sleep!? as a hero he could at the very least acknowledge the concerns although it looks like sexual or incident assault if not for his costume rape as she defiantly hasn't given permission and she seems totally uncomfortable with what went on internally. in which case he is dead he cant just get away with raping wonder woman in an operation he literally said he could die happy and vocalized what he was doing in joy not to mention if she checks his suit hes soiled. Supergirl could probably see everything that just went on and I don't see her protecting him. if he doesn't get killed he should turn himself in. or they should shrink him break his belt and leave him and the footage with giganta and a lot of compensation to deal with the problem. like there needs to be an SVU of dc or it could end up with homelander heroes
Date: March 13 2023 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - You Want me to do What!?
I like how all the characters are portrayed relatively accurately, in addition to the fetish scenario being portrayed. It's good stuff.
Considering the story's likely to end with a happy ending, have you considered writing what-if chapters with bad ends?
Date: February 27 2023 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Final Showdown
>parasite coming out
>add doctor's face to the other end
WHAT COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG?!
Also good job with the story so far, it's been a fun read! Also hoping that Wonder Woman forgives him after seeing the footage.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Battle
Even better than Dark Heart itself, which for a gts fan was all down hill once Atom left Diana and took on the alien.
Author's Response:
I wish there was more done with Atom. So many stories that could have been told with his shrinking abilities. At least we got to see Giganta a few times in that lovely dress of hers. We can only imagine the view underneath. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2023 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - I'm Going In
Well there may not be much direct vore going on, but I like reading Ray's secret thoughts coming out over and over in the story.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2023 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - You Want me to do What!?
Not a very grateful amazon. She should, after all, let him have his fun.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2022 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - You Want me to do What!?
Excellent premise and build up to the showdown with the creature inside Wonder Woman. Looking forward to seeing how this ends!
Author's Response:
It's going to be an interesting showdown and without going into spoilers we're not quite at the end yet. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2022 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Contact
Excellent work so far! Keep it up!
Date: December 02 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - You Want me to do What!?
This story is wonderful
I would like to read more soon...