[Report This]Date: October 21 2022 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am LOVING this story! The growing relationship between Ann and Elizabeth is just as wholesome yet messed up top be super hot! And it's looking like the inclusion of two hot slaves will only make that even better. Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope to see the sex hinted at, maybe with the slaves themselves being used a sex toys for both Ann and Elizabeth. Either way, please keep up the GREAT work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise! It's really inspiring as a writer to read people loving your work.
Their relationship, as I mentioned in another review, is the main drive of this story. A messed up, authoritarian tyrant and her small, corruptible girlfriend.
And yes, they will fuck.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2022 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oooo! I love the ending of this one. I wanna see more of this cute relationship:3
Author's Response:
Their relationship will be all this story is about! Don't worry, they'll have their cute couple moments.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2022 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great so far! Anastasia makes a compelling argument. It seems that Beth will see the value in violent methods, but will she also learn to enjoy it the way Ann does? I sure hope so!
I love when a giant is friends with one tiny and does fucked up stuff to other tinies. Maybe Beth will take the lead in suggesting crueler punishments as she grows more comfortable with everything? Or even take an active role during a punishment?
I really like how “Bloody” Ann can be. The deep fry scenario is excellent. I hope we get full scenes like that! Does Ann always execute, or will she just mutilate for lesser offenses?
Author's Response:
The main thing that inspired this dynamic was just that: a giant that does horrible things to tinies, except for one. I just thought it was really interesting and wanted to try it out!
As for Ann's arguments, it came to me while reading about my favourite Space Marine Legion from Warhammer 40k, the Night Lords. Fucked up people with even more fucked up morals, I love them.
Ann is totalitarian, but that doesn't mean she always executes people. Her main point is that terror is the best tool to maintain order, and so she will go out of her ways to create terror in those who she feels will threaten said order. This includes torture, holding loved ones hostage, engaging in various forms of psychological warfare, etc. Now, this is still a smut story and not a political thriller. The fucked up things she will do will be in service of said smut.
Thanks for the review!