[Report This]Date: October 11 2024 2:55 PM Title: Drunken Exhaustion
Eeew Haley. But Kenzie sounds like a good girl. Least compared to many. Good chapter tho~
[Report This]Date: May 12 2024 10:40 PM Title: Evening Appetizer
Woowe this one is brutal and dark. But really good. I would love to see a sequel or so to Volleyball Day and Basketball Shoe. Kinda feeling Ashley a bit. Though the "Smell of Victory" part from the Volley girl got me.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2023 5:20 AM Title: Midday Pedis
Más sobre este concepto por favor, es de lo mejor que existe en todo internet, tal ves los micros puedan ser usados también para la limpieza del trasero en los baños de mujeres o dentro de las bragas para mayor comodidad.
Date: June 19 2023 9:08 AM Title: Animal Tales
Love the pet vore!! Would love to see kitty get a treat next time
[Report This]Date: June 06 2023 4:55 PM Title: Basketball Shoe
any chance any of these men could be used as arch supports rather than toe warmers?
[Report This]Date: May 21 2023 8:52 PM Title: Volleyball Day
Glad to see this got updated, great work as always! You do such a good job at making this society believable and the characters human, especially loved the little conversation between the mom and her daughter at the end.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2023 10:51 PM Title: Basketball Shoe
hey, would it be possible if you write another unaware chapter?
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Date: January 16 2023 8:25 PM Title: Basketball Shoe
Love mall pedis chapter, it deserves a spinoff. Btw did you read brobdingnagians business by vivetta? Have you considered the possibility to write a chapter about those tinies living under the glass? Take a look at it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll check out that story. I'm always looking for new ideas
[Report This]Date: December 03 2022 1:14 AM Title: Aerobics Day
Given how many men fall prey to each girl, I wonder if you'll do a chapter that shows how men are mass produced in this society. Like man farms or cloning factories. It would further reinforce men's low place in this world.
Besides that, these are great. You established the setting and tell little stories in it instead of a big long one. A new reader can start with any chapter and not get lost. I've also been obsessed with cruel NWO stories lately so this is right up my alley.
Author's Response:
I originally planned on including a small tidbit in at least one of the chapters, but I decided against it. I figured maybe it was better to leave it to the reader's imagination. Although I do have one idea for a chapter that I may eventually post.
Thanks for reading!
Date: November 04 2022 1:33 AM Title: Escape?
Chapter 6: A lot of people probably didn’t like this chapter due to its suggestion of animal vore, but that’s just my drunk opinion and I could be full of shit. Personally, I thought the bit with puncturing the man’s abdomen to keep him alive longer was clever.
Chapter 7: Good juxtaposition between older and younger ladies. It was clever having guys in the spice grinder. Classic bit with the queso dip. Very honey I shrunk the kids.
Chapter 8: Nice bit about the boys being more expensive than men. I thought the the bit at the end with the lone surviving boy was good.
Chapter 9: Multiple good scenes, some of them more arousing and others less, but it’s the combination of them that makes the chapter. My favorite was the one where the mom swatted the guy with the flip flop; not enough of that imo.
Author's Response:
Yeah wasn't sure if people would like the animal vore, but there's not many stories out there that feature that. So I included it to have something different. Appreciate your other points. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: October 23 2022 6:10 PM Title: TW (Vignettes)
I really love how you've broken this down into vignettes and shorts. There's really not much the men can do, so lingering too long on any one storyline is likely to get hard to write, this way it just keeps hitting us with this dark world and the juxtaposition of the ordinary, happy lives of the giants vs the misery and certain death of the little ones. Great job with this so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah it was hard to fluff out the content to one chapter, so I broke it down into different shorts/scenarios. Thanks for your review. Plenty more to come
[Report This]Date: October 17 2022 2:26 PM Title: Basketball Shoe
Great job with this series, you’re doing a good job with the world building! I’d personally love to see an older woman get toe warmers for a cold, rainy day, but regardless I’m excited to see what directions you go with this! Love the lore.
Date: October 17 2022 2:36 AM Title: Zuri
Neat setting. NWO type stories are among my favorites. I actually came up with something similar: A futuristic society where men are mass produced in cloning factories and used as food, pets, toys, resources, etc. Except in that setting the women are about 1000 feet tall compared to the men.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was inspired by various NWO stories and authors. Such an interesting fantasy
[Report This]Date: October 17 2022 12:08 AM Title: Zuri
Posting all my thoughts on all the chapters in one go.
Chapter 1: Stories that start by delivering on a simple fantasy are always fun to read. You did a good job expanding on the setting without interrupting the action. The last paragraph in particular is always nice to see in stories like this.
Chapter 2: Liked the two exhausted paragraphs. Straight to the point. Introduced what roles Haley and the guy play while also contrasting them. Personally, I would have brought up how the “game” she’s playing with him is similar to soccer drills.
Chapter 3: The concept is pretty silly, but that’s exactly what I was looking for, so don’t take that as a negative. Not sure you needed to go that in depth into the supply chain and consumer habits of the people buying these things for a story like this, but I suppose it depends on what you want to do with this information.
Chapter 4: Again, I like that you start with the action. That’s really important for super short stories like these and you are nailing them. This one was a little hard to follow because you refer to multiple characters as “the man” and suddenly started referring to “the boy” as “the man” in the last quarter.
Good work so far. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm still trying to improve my writing, so I appreciate your feedback regarding chapter 4. I much prefer writing in the short-story format compared to a long narrative, so I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2022 4:39 AM Title: Basketball Shoe
This setting has great potential!
Date: October 13 2022 10:22 AM Title: Basketball Shoe
Love stories set in a world like this. Was a great read and I look forward to any more chapters you decide to add!
[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 7:16 AM Title: Basketball Shoe
Oooh love some short stories. This one is really nice. Short and simple yet still hot
How about some family-themed ones? A woman and her shrunken brother perhaps
[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 6:01 AM Title: Basketball Shoe
Great story, loved how completely uncaring Ashley was about killing a man!