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Reviewer: Avareads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2026 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2023 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man this was a fun read hope for more 

Reviewer: Birdxofxhermes917 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2022 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2022 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to say I loved it, the drawn out mental game trying to "condition" the tiny is something I like a lot, as well as the overall interaction between the two.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It means a lot hearing this from you. If you enjoyed the conditioning process, you'd definitely enjoy the story I'm working on right now, so I advise you to stay tuned for when I'll post it.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2022 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gentle story with a nice build up of romance, before it pays off near the end. It’s a self contained narrative that ties itself well in a satisfying manner by its conclusion. The writing is descriptive enough to paint the picture, but leaves enough to allow the reader to envision the scene to themselves. Personally I prefer having more details during fetish content, but I can see that those raunchy scenes weren’t  quite the focus. The romance aspect was, and that was delivered quite well.    

I would have liked a bit more description at the start however. Overall though, I really liked it.



Author's Response:

Yeah I feel like I'm still not entirely sure how to detail the raunchy scenes enough without over-detailing them either.

Regardless, thank you! I'm glad you think the romance aspect was executed well, it really is the core of the story.

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2022 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was pretty good, and I loved how you referenced another one of my favourite stories on here in a natural way



Author's Response: Eyyy I was wondering if someone caught the reference! That story was exactly what inspired me. Thanks for the compliments too!

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