[Report This]Date: April 12 2023 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man this was a fun read hope for more
[Report This]Date: September 30 2022 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2022 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just wanted to say I loved it, the drawn out mental game trying to "condition" the tiny is something I like a lot, as well as the overall interaction between the two.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It means a lot hearing this from you. If you enjoyed the conditioning process, you'd definitely enjoy the story I'm working on right now, so I advise you to stay tuned for when I'll post it.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2022 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Gentle story with a nice build up of romance, before it pays off near the end. It’s a self contained narrative that ties itself well in a satisfying manner by its conclusion. The writing is descriptive enough to paint the picture, but leaves enough to allow the reader to envision the scene to themselves. Personally I prefer having more details during fetish content, but I can see that those raunchy scenes weren’t quite the focus. The romance aspect was, and that was delivered quite well.
I would have liked a bit more description at the start however. Overall though, I really liked it.
Author's Response:
Yeah I feel like I'm still not entirely sure how to detail the raunchy scenes enough without over-detailing them either.
Regardless, thank you! I'm glad you think the romance aspect was executed well, it really is the core of the story.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2022 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was pretty good, and I loved how you referenced another one of my favourite stories on here in a natural way
Author's Response: Eyyy I was wondering if someone caught the reference! That story was exactly what inspired me. Thanks for the compliments too!