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Reviewer: The Count Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2022 11:35 AM Title: Pent Up

Glad to see this continued, it's really good! I won't lie, I liked the first chapter more, but that's just personal preference I think, some of it's just not my thing, but it was still written well. The sock's logo and thinking how 'you' used to wear one had me interested to hear more, and I liked how you built the world in part 2, which explained some of that. Great work!

Also the bratty boy is characterized pretty well, would love to see some more unorthodox treatment like being forced to sleep in the shoe and what-not.



Author's Response: What did you prefer in the first chapter? I'd be interested to hear since I'm not 100% sure where to go from here. I was thinking about doubling down on the petplay now that he's gotten more possessive of the main tiny, maybe keeping him on his person during his day at the academy. Stuffed in his shoe or underwear, that sort of deal.

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2022 5:57 AM Title: Reward and Wrath

Since he thought the girl was upstaging him, I'm assuming the "mine" was directed to the old property? 



Author's Response:

In a way, yeah. I saw it like he was confiscating her out of jealousy, but either way works in the context of what was happening.

Magi, no sense of right and wrong

Reviewer: SeSawTer Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2022 9:55 AM Title: Pent Up

I hope to see more from you

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2022 6:38 AM Title: Pent Up

That was a fun story! Especially with the bratty perfect giant.

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