[Report This]Date: April 14 2024 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Shrinking Nazis!
This is an incredible story that needs further chapters. Can't wait to see what Sabrina does at Steve's party to the shrunken party goers; especially the one who said put the other tiny up her ass.
Perhaps more nazis enter Martyna and her mother's stomachs, or perhaps their shoes / boots.
Really great concept, just needs more chapters. Solid work my friend.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for your review, which is greatly received and appreciated, I've posted a bit more of the story, hope you continue to enjoy my work and stories!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2023 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Learning her Life Force Well
Can't wait until the next chapter. Swallowing tiny men to fill her Life Well is so hot. Will Sabrina do the same?
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoy it. Posting some more ...
[Report This]Date: October 28 2023 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Mother, are we witches?
Can't wait for the next chapters. Great and interesting story. Love the generational aspect of the story; from the past to the present.
Especially love Sabrina and what she will do with her shrunken captives from the party.
Author's Response: Hi there, thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated. Glad you liked it and the slightly different approach of this story
[Report This]Date: March 18 2023 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Stupid Lads!
Really great story. The subject matter is terrific and enthralling. Love how Sabrina, and her mother, grandmother, and great grandmother {bit confused whether Martyna is her mother or grandmother. Martyna kind of falls into the realm of a young grandmother or an older mother} all hold this power and teach it to their female offspring.
Would like to hear more about the shrunken nazis Martyna put in a deep pot to feed off of their fear.
As a personal request, could you have Sabrina put the guy on the couch who said "Get her to put him up her butt" actually put that guy who said it up her butt? Just thinking it would be an ironic form of justice.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the feedback, I enjoyed reading your thoughts.
Martyna is indeed Sabrina's Grandmother, they pass their skills down through the generations. As the series unfolds you learn that there are other types of Witches covens with different types of skills, interests and codes.
The story does go back to explore more about Martyna and her early days exploring her witchhood, but then also explores her rise to power during wartime.
Yes indeed Sabrina does deal out some justice on the butt guy, and yes, there might be an ironic form of justice involved :-)
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introducing the witches with powers...
Very interesting story so far. Like the power the witches have over the nazis and other brutal men.
Looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response:
Hi there, thank you for your feedback, really glad that you enjoyed this and the power shift it provides to the witches. Chapter 2 is on my Patreon, with more to come on my site.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introducing the witches with powers...
Wow! So real! Great historical fiction! What a set up for giantess revenge! Lots and lots of potential!
I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you SafetyPin, glad you enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to provide your feedback.
Historical fiction is actually quite fun to write, I haven't done it before and with my new 'Myth and Legend' page on my Patreon I'm a little bit inspired to write a bit more of it.