The story was great, it is well-composed and has high amounts of theological and political elements. An unusual but unique writing style. My best description of the story is smart sexy because it's written as if it's a research journal of a well-endowed goddess. And for a non-native speaker, your English is very good!

P.S. The story is only viewable on desktop, the mobile version is not able to fit the story's text to the phone screen.