Date: August 04 2022 2:22 PM Title: Ready, set, go!
Thanks for the reply. For making unaware problems with Aria, I was actually thinking of Sam moving Matt into a position that Aria is about to interact with, like putting him where Aria is about to sit, or step or on an object she is about to use, things like that.
As for having Sam become unaware if she shows up, you could have her temporarily erase her memory of him, though that runs the risk of her leaving before she remembers, and accidentally taking him with her unaware.
Author's Response:
It's a pleasure to work this out together! Sam interfering with Matt like that is certainly an exciting and get-you-going idea as she's just having fun with him, not hurting him intentionally. Although it also seems to be just lazy-writing having her conveniently place him in the places interesting for the story. May use it from time to time, but certainly not constantly.
Temporary erasing her memory of him would really be a stretch as of all people, she cares the most about watching his adventures and entertaining herself with that. Making herself forget for a period of time, when she is in Aria's home and wants to play with him, would be completely irrational, as that would make her forget what she came there for in the first place. So I think that solution won't cut it, sorry. Anyway, I really like, that you took your time and tried to help me. Can't wait for your next ideas!
I see, that somehow, you manage to stay up to date with the new chapters, without adding me nor my story to your favourites. Are you just checking it daily by hand or is there any other way, that I don't know? Let me know!
Cya soon!
Date: August 03 2022 4:44 PM Title: Ready, set, go!
I think Sam is interesting. Though if she does interfere, I think it would be best to either making Aria to cause unaware problems for Matt, or to wait for everyone to be out of the house, and play with him herself. Looking forward to the action. As for a reply to your reply to my previous review, I think different people enjoy different parts of vore, for me personally I enjoy the part inside the stomach itself. especially if the giantess eats a meal with the shrunken already swallowed that way they have to deal with more food coming into the stomach while they are in there. I also enjoy, the trip through the rest of the digestive system until they end up landing in the toilet, with or without scat(that part doesn't matter to me), but that is my personal preferences.
Author's Response:
Hey! I am really glad to see, that you're still an active reader! Those ones are the most valuable for me, as your feedback is really motivating and rewarding as well as giving me more ideas to tinker with :D
What exactly do you mean by making Aria to cause unaware problems for Matt? Magically altering her behaviour or choices she makes? Making her less perceptive to Matt, when they have direct contact? Or something else?
The playing with herself is an interesting idea and I already have something in mind for that, if it comes to Sam's reappearance. But since she knows about Matt, it would not be unaware and that bothers me a bit. If you have anything in mind to fix that or somehow bypass that, then by all means let me know!
And I really appreciate you sharing your preferences on full tour vore. It gave me some fundamentals to hang my mind onto and I slowly begin to comprehend, what that fetish is really about. Nonetheless, if you or anybody else who is reading this have more useful information, that you could share with me, I would really appreciate that! Every one remark about vore brings you closer to finally getting what you want!
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[Report This]Date: August 03 2022 4:31 PM Title: The Bet
I'm loving it so far and where this is heading. Unaware is my favorite because you it tends to be the most realistic, no need for unnecessarily evil people acting out of character. Your friend being normally a nice person but now appearing as an unstoppable force or nature has always appeared to me, maybe because of the irony of it all?
Since you are taking some suggestions into consideration I'd love to give mine. I'd like to see some crushing, perhaps as the weeks drag on the relative invulnerability starts to wear off more and more so that even things that wouldn't normally harm you suddenly hurt much more or are potentially deadly. It would be really hot for him to be crushed accidentally on the last day, perhaps played with underfoot and mashed between her soles like some dirt. Something I'd like to see at least would be his jaw breaking and her skin and sweat being forced into his mouth
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks so much for the review! It keeps me going like crazy! And I totally agree with the view on unaware content, that you presented. It avoids unnecessary and repulsive deliberate aggression and focuses entirely on the exciting part of making tiny persons life unbearable unintentionally. There's something seductive about being messed with without the person doing it even knowing. That's why I decided to write this story in the first place as most of other ones sooner or later introduce the character, that tries to hurt them willingly and try to keep them as their pet/slave. It may be entertaining if done right, but could also kill the buzz. Therefore, I am pleased to say, that I really have so many ideas in my head, that the chapters will certainly be counted in tens!
As to your suggestion - of course I will think it through and if I find some fun way to include the crushing, then I most certainly will. Although for now, crush category is not included in the summary for a reason. The spell has already been described and I'd like to stick with the way it was. At least for now. That doesn't necessarily mean it won't change later as I get some crazy ideas, but I am sure the first several chapters unfortunately won't meet your request. If you think of some clever way, that I could mess with that and make your interest come true, I encourage you to let me know by email or by another review. Two heads are better than one!
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Cya soon!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2022 5:50 AM Title: Ready, set, go!
Loving the characters for the story already. As for a suggestion since Sam can influence Matt's size randomly throughout the 3 weeks I'd love a part or two where she ends up shrinking Matt to microscopic size and having him on Aria's thong. Just a small piece of fabric being a continent to him ;) maybe he'd be so small he wouldn't even realize where he is.
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks very much for the feedback! I'm insanely happy to see, that you and others are so excited about my story and eager to point me in the right direction by leaving suggestions and remarks!
Your review actually opened my mind to a new concept as you enlightened me, that I accidentally left myself a gate to Sam changing Matt's size at will. The way I intended it to work was that the spell was already premade to change Matt's size randomly every week, without any interaction from Samantha, but I didn't specify that well enough, so I might as well use your idea or try to work around it and tailor something entirely new. Either way, I'm really glad you wrote that. Thanks once again!
And about the thong idea... I don't want to spoil anything, but I cannot say it didn't cross my mind, so I am pretty sure you'll be satisfied!
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Date: August 03 2022 3:08 AM Title: Ready, set, go!
I love the plot! Can’t wait for it to start.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! I am really happy to see you're still here and still fond of the story!
I promise, that the third chapter will not disappoint you!
Cya soon!
Date: August 03 2022 12:36 AM Title: The Bet
I am really looking forward to seeing how this bet plays out and curious as to what kinds of hijinks Matt could get himself caught up into. After all, 12 weeks at that scale (and maybe smaller when Samantha has her way) will lead to some grand adventures.
Maybe he gets caught either underneath the converse shoes he loves so much or maybe even *in* them for the day while Aria is out and about. Maybe more giants will make their mark on his time trapped in the house. I'm imagining a lot more scenes but I'll wait to see what you have in store for the future, especially since we have yet to see what Matt's life will be like for the next 3 months. Unaware interaction is my favorite type of interaction and look forward to reading it :)
Author's Response:
Oh wow, I read this review for the third time today and only now notice who left it! I've been here only for a few days, but I've already heard about you and your stories.
I am really pleased to see, you like the story and I also cannot wait to share Matt's adventures with you!
Would you like Samantha to break her word and mess with Matt more, while he's trying not to get caught? Maybe even play with him herself? Or maybe completely opposite, she should be his guardian angel protecting him and helping from time to time? Let me know, what you'd like to see! All suggestions are welcome and helpful!
About your wonders... I won't spoil anything as you'll find you pretty soon by yourself, but I really appreciate the ideas you proposed and if what you're saying is true and you have a lot more in mind, then please share them with me! There's a great chance, that you'll inspire me or plant something interesting to work with in my head.
Thanks once again for the review and adding my story to your favourites!
Cya soon!
Date: August 02 2022 11:00 PM Title: The Bet
I am beyond excited to see what becomes of this story.
Unaware size play is a concept I can never get enough of so when I saw this in my feed I was so down. Safe to say I'm here for the ride
I have to ask, but looking at your tags I don't see it stated at this time, but do you have any plans to include some mouth play or vore down the line? I ask being a big fan of that stuff myself and my curiosity gnaws at my mind
Author's Response:
I'm really happy to find out that you're so excited already!
As I can see, we're on the same page, when it comes to unaware size play. I am also very fond of that concept and except few brilliant stories, I'm really sad to have to settle for all the average ones. That's why I decided to create my own one and incorporate everything, that I've hoped to find in others stories.
Trust me, that you're more than welcome to take this ride with me and all the readers and as I keep repeating - if you have any ideas or suggestions, what I could or should add, then I really encourage you to let me know!
Now, about your question. I've actually already got 1 request for full tour vore, so if you're interested what I have to say about vore and mouth play, please check out the other reviews of my story. I think, you'll find your answer there. However, what I can add over to my already existing answer, is that I can now see, there is more than one person, who'd like to see this type of content and it slowly begins to cross my mind. For sure it's few, so I will focus on what I had in mind in the first place, but maybe somewhere along the way, I'll gather more vore requests and finally decide to write a chapter on it. All the things, that I stated in the other reply are still true, tough. So if you'd like to help, hit me up!
And since I'm here, maybe someone else than you will read it too. It's rather improbable, that the third chapter will come out today (03.08) as I have some things to take care of, but I'll try to post as soon as possible. Realistically tomorrow and for sure by Thursday.
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Date: August 02 2022 2:45 PM Title: The Bet
Nice start. I hope one of the things that happens is unaware full tour vore. Thouth that might be because I enjoy stories where someone shrunken gets swallowed and comes out the back end still alive. Especially if it is unaware. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the review. I'm glad you liked it :D
That idea crossed my mind, but unfortunately I am not fond of vore content and therefore not as experienced with describing this kind of situations. BUT, that's not to say I won't include some chapter devoted to that into the story. However, it would require some more requests, to make me fully on board with the idea.
Assuming I would decide to go for it, I could really use a helping hand to get to know, what expectations you vore people might have. What are you interested into, during vore action and what excites you. The part before accidentally putting tiny person in your mouth? Maybe the part of swirling your mouth around them and crushing the food with your teeth? Or maybe something entirely else? And obviously what's boring and should be kept off the table. I don't know any of that things, as I myself do not read vore stories, so the more feedback I get about that, the more likely I create a chapter dedicated to full tour vore.
Anyway, next chapter is coming pretty soon (maybe even today, if I'll make it on time), so wait patiently!
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[Report This]Date: August 02 2022 3:02 AM Title: The Bet
The description and tags had me interested, and the writing on this prologue was well done.
I can't wait to see how things play out (and how/when the tags will come into play XD)
Matt and Aria seem interesting, and Aria is described quite attractive. (and the fact he likes her feet *now* I can see coming into play in various ways while tiny)
I am excited to see where this goes, and how it will play out.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your opinion!
It's my first story on this site and I didn't know whether I could change the tags etc. after posting it, so I included all the ones, that I have ideas for and that will appear in the series sooner or later. Should I remove them and gradually add the ones, that already are in the story? What do you think?
I also cannot wait to start with the action, but I think that explaining the whys and hows of the story makes it more realistic and therefore more pleasant to read.
Nonetheless, I hope that despite nothing size-related yet, I somehow make it up with teasing and flirting to keep up the tension, that we're all looking for in these stories :D
I'm glad you liked it and hope to satisfy you and all the others that already read the prologue.
Consider adding my story to your favourites, not to miss out on new content as I will be posting relatively often!
Cya soon!