Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2023 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 8, Minigame

Loved this latest chapter, I’m still rooting for the couple though, hope they stick together and can work it out no matter what. Thanks for the chapters :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! This ch was one of my favs to write. The next few chapters will be focusing back on Micha and Juni so I hope you enjoy them :)

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2022 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Six, Dancing with Her Devil

Alright, I'll be patient then. But if you are still sort of in the intro phase, why not throw in a couple of problems that don't resolve themselves? It would make for much better reading. E.g. the manager/owner of the restaurant is prejudiced against mixed-size couples, but May, who is awesome, isn't magically there to fix the problem even before it arose. Again, that's just one example of what you could have done. Then Micha would have to scramble (and prove to the readers why they should care about him...), and there might be a strain on Juni so we get to see a hint of what might look like.

It's either that or longer chapters were something actually happens. You sort of say it yourself, you're talking about everyday stuff even though in this chapter he literally proposed to his gargantuan girlfriend. That should be a pivotal moment, not a "meh, we went to the restaurant and it was mildly annoying but it all turned out okay"-kinda thing. Just my two cents. You don't have to go overboard right away but even solving everyday problems can be interesting so long as they have to be solved (and it's actually really interesting from the tiny perspective, it adds so much). Thanks for your reply!

Author's Response:

I can see where you're coming from. Unfortunately, I can't go into any more detail on why I chose specific plot points, character motivations, etc without getting into spoiler territory (which isn't fun for anyone). All I can say is that these choices are intentional. Oh and if you want to chat my discord/email is in my bio. I don't want to flood the review section with a back and forth :)

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2022 6:14 PM Title: Chapter Five, Above & Below

I don't know about other people but I'm still checking this daily for updates. Are you still working on this? It'd be a crying shame if not.

Author's Response:

Thanks for not forgetting about it! Not that I can blame anyone lol. Sorry, there was much much more going on in the past month than I was expecting. I am still writing and won't stop until I get the story finished. And more importantly, good. Future chapters will probably be coming out every other week at the earliest now. Sorry about the inconvenience!

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2022 1:13 AM Title: Chapter Five, Above & Below

Looks like we're getting some escalation, as Juni's two sides are being brought together. I like how some of her darker nature slipped out and was picked up by Micha, when she was rather dismissive of the mini walk paths. I suppose this is foreshadowing something, a mounting confrontation. Still, it's nice to see that she's still sweet and caring towards her boyfriend, enough to defend him from unwanted aggression.

Also, really like the May character, and from the looks of it, we'll be seeing her again. It's just me, I like the sporty, professional archetype. She probably could use a Mini companion.

Look forward to more.

Author's Response:

mwahaha it's alll coming together... 

I just realized this is the first chapter where all of the main characters are in the same space lol. But yes, I'm so excited to show you where we're heading. It'll be a ride for sure. Also you are definitely not alone about May, it's a fav type of mine too! Thanks so much for the review! 

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2022 4:51 PM Title: Chapter Four, 2 Minutes

This is a really great story. Nice premise, perfect pacing, the exact amount of detail. I love it. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It’s so nice to hear when someone says they love a story, especially another writer. I hope you enjoy the rest as it unfolds :)

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2022 6:50 AM Title: Chapter Three, Hell

Knowing the premise before I dived (heh, get it?) in, I had an uncomfortable sense of dread, even as Micha and Juni were snarking it up with one another. You're pretty good at bouncing dialogue between our main couple. 

Depicting giantess scenes tends to be tough, since it's hard to get a reference and sense of scale, but you've done that in a rather clear and concise way. From the opening, where Micha is lying on the bed, you were able to set up the size difference very quickly. 

Even in the heavenly chapter "his Angel", when one Mini was cussing Juni off, even though nothing dark was hinted at, you managed to make it a tense scene. Maybe because, as I've mentioned before, I knew what kind of story this would be, but you let the scene play out, instead of trying to let people know of Juni's dark side. With the third chapter added, it makes the context that much more terrifying.

I suppose it's inevitable that Micha and Juni are set for conflict. It does appear, when Juni was getting ready for her date with Micha in ch 3, that she does recognize this disparity in her thinking. Looking forward to see how this plays out.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I’m so happy to hear that you gave it a try. The opening scene had to be one of my favorites to write. It was a nice change of pace to do things from a tiny perspective. Also I’m glad chapter 3 added some depth to previous ones. More conflict, good times, and classic size shenanigans are definitely on the horizon. I hope you continue to swim on :)

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2022 9:31 PM Title: Chapter One, Heaven

Micah and Juni are such a cute couple and share a very tender relationship. Kind and caring but there's also room for some teasing, as Juni demonstrated. 

And despite there differences in size there's no real sense of Micah or Juni being superior over the other. They treat each other as equals for the most part which i find just sweet. 

A wonderful story overall.

Author's Response:

Thank you for a wonderful review!! I'm so happy you're enjoying their relationship. Making sure Micha and Juni really felt like a couple instead of just a big and a tiny was one of my main goals. I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds :)