[Report This]Date: September 25 2022 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Characterised as cruel, and our protagonist definitely delivers on that title. The writing has improved from last chapter as well. But spelling errors are still present. Not much though. Overall, this was very nice.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! I am using google docs now for writing, so the spelling mistakes should be gone forever, but I know that there are some mistakes, especially in grammar, which look absolutely idiotic to natives while learners do not have a clue they are making them haha Hopefully I will have acquired enough English to sound natural at some point. Please bear in mind that I am using the British spelling.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2022 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the continuing escalation and sense of mindless consumption in this story.
Great descriptions of cruel and unsympathetic interactions with people, especially the initials actions of a drunk giantess and the recent actions of a hungry giantess at a massive scale.
Here’s hoping that Sarah and her hunger just keep growing!
Eagerly awaiting the conclusion to this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! The last chapter may take a while to write, but it will be there.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2022 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Some spelling errors or awkward sentences here and there. But the description is nice, and for a scenario specific story this seems to be going good.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you are enjoying the story! I am making my best effort to make the descriptions as thorough as possible.
Oh no, I was sure everything was correct, gonna have to proof read everything again... Should you want to review another chapter of this story or any other of my stories, please, please give examples of the mistakes that you see! I am not a native, and so, it is sometimes hard for me to get all the little nuances of the English language right. I would greatly appreciate it if you were so kind! While spelling mistakes are most often just typos, grammatical errors are much more inappropriate. I am doing my best to stay correct, and I don't want to keep repeating the same mistakes over and over again! :)
Date: July 25 2022 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
l Laugh at the end, what a way to go.
Can't wait for the giga chapter. Great work man.
Author's Response:
Thanks you very much! Glad it made you laugh haha
[Report This]Date: June 29 2022 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story another great chapter hopefully more to come
Author's Response:
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Date: June 29 2022 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pregunta 1: alguna vez ubo o habrá alguna historia de Giganta que tenga consecuencias por sus actos y tenga un mal karma y su terrible final?
Pregunta 2: no tengo nada en contra de las gigantas desnudas paro las gigantas de un tamaño considerable que no sea may desproporsional y en prendas provocativas como ropa interior o bikinis no es más aceptable y si habrá de este tipo?
Author's Response:
Hey, I checked the translation in all three languages that I speak, but I am still not sure what exactky it is that you mean in the second question. I wonder why you wrote a review in Spanish. Do you read my stories through google translator? Does that even work? Lol
For the first question, I don't think I will ever write a story, in which a tragic end meets a giantess. In my opinion that would be sad. I haven't written such a story yet either.
For the second one, I think the naked giantess is more realistic when it comes to growth, so that's why I decided to go for this option. In my other story 'The Executioner' the giantess is also naked but that's more because of preference. I especially like the feet of a giantess to be bare, that's why I tend to have my characters all naked. I don't really think it matters if it's appropriate for the giantess to be naked or not. I think the less appropriate she is, the more chaos she causes and the more she oposes the order of the world. She is too mighty of a creature to care.
In this story, the radiation works only on living matter. That's the main reason for her nudeness.
Might write about a clothed giantess some day, though...
Thank you for commenting!
Date: June 28 2022 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best stories in a while keep posting keep writing pleakeep writing please I will be checking back
Author's Response:
Hey, I am glad you like the story! The next part is coming in an hour or so. Please remember to give a rating next time :)