Date: June 22 2022 2:42 AM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Been following you for a long time and have always looked forward to your releases. That being said, I think that the second story suits your style better. Someone else mentioned that unaware can become less engaging, but I think that having the girls aware or even controlling Noah’s antics with his aunt blends both unaware and aware content well. I also think that this story could open more doors than the first. Regardless of which one you pick, I’d love to see some ass scenes!
Author's Response:
Oh, there’ll definitely be some ass scenes…among other risk-ay interactions.
So, another vote for Chapter 2!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 8:08 PM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
It's good to know that you're doing well. Babysitter Trouble is one of my favorite stories on this website. It was such a thrilling read.
With the second one I'm curious if you're going to pull a "Homunculus" by Cayce style story where the girls slowly get better and treat him with more respect. Seeing as there are two of them the way they interact with him has more potential. I also hope that whichever one you choose it's non-fatal. It could be interesting if he thinks he could die only to survive and the two of them continue to 'play' with him.
Good luck, I'm sure what you produce will be great!
Author's Response:
So, I’m not saying that there WON’T necessarily be similarities with “Homunculus”, but this is going to more of a slow shrink story as opposed to an immediate shrink story, with the characters having to deal with the consequences of the main character’s diminishing stature…and some becoming more and more playful than others the smaller he gets. However, I do have several characters who will be developed and intertwined throughout the story, and each will have varying attitudes to Noah’s shrinking.
So, I take it, unless you say otherwise, that your vote is for Chapter 2?
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 6:56 PM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
Another excellent chapter!
Personally, unaware (in large doses) and crushing are less engaging than the intentional verbal humiliation and non-painful footdom from Chap 1.
But still top-quality creative writing, and thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response:
Oh, there’ll still be verbal humiliation and non-painful foot domination, it’ll just be coming from a sister, cousin, and a few other teenaged girls, as opposed to a mother-in-law and wife.
Nonetheless, I’ll take your preference/vote as Chapter 1.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 6:50 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Diane's dominance is amazing and the combo of continuous shrinking, foot play, and a femdom mom-in-law is incredible. Really evocative of an Andrea Untamed or Erotic Nikki roleplay scenario.
Hope to see this story continue and the MIL revel in his destiny of being a speck subservient to her soles and toes!
Author's Response:
That’s exactly the dynamic I’m going for: think of it as a combination of “The Incredible Shrinking Man” with a few added twists. This scene (and the overall story) was inspired by chapter 3 of “Excerpts form John’s Life” by Crocodile; I’ve wanted to explore and expand on the trope of the domineering mother-in-law for a while now. As Dan gets smaller, her attitude towards him becomes more and more dismissive, seeing him as nothing more than a burden to her daughter…and a plaything for herself.