[Report This]Date: June 17 2024 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
This is such a great story.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2023 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another nice chapter :)
I have to say I enjoyed the dream sequence with Morgan seeing Lomasi like that and then Candie XD. The dream-Morgan experiencing a little 'taste' of vore was also a nice touch.
And then the rest of the chapter carried on well.
Alofo....I can see where he's coming from, and it's not an out there thing to think about. (and yeah maybe one day Lomasi will want to carry a child of her own that is hers and Morgans)
But yeah it's something she and Morgan need to decide on, so hopefully Alofo will respect their privacy/decision making. (I know he wasn't coming in all overbearing, but it was something that was sprung on Morgan rather out of the blue)
It would be interesting to see a little future Morgan-Lomasi baby, I bet it would be super cute and adorable :D
[Report This]Date: December 17 2022 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
I liked seeing Jona knocked down a few pegs.....or all of them, in this chapter.
Daisy standing up for herself and not giving into Jona's shit was a great read. She doesn't server that treatment when she was a loving wife, and mother to his child only for him to run off and whore himself out and abandon his daughter.
I get what Polly said, and do see her POV about Morgan's actions.....but I don't have any sympathy for Jona at all. Especially not when he reacted that way to Polly and was going to hit her.....like dude, what did you think Morgan and Daisy were just going to sit there and watch you slap the shit out of their friend?
It was very karmic to see and experience Jona realize he has no choice, and that his own actions led to the situation he's in now, where Daisy doesn't want anything to do with him and he has no one in his corner.
Morgan I know wouldn't go down the route of lording it over tiny people, etc. I feel Jona was a special case/heat of the moment issue.
I feel (from a purely objective stance) they both were in the right in their arguments (morgan and polly) even though Morgan went the physical route/didn't realize her own strength, she was intervening to stop Polly from being hurt (yes she could have used less forceful means) but she was trying to protect her.
But from a non objective stance XD I loved Jona getting some great commeupance in this chapter (and Morgan physically grabbing him like that), he was really shown just how little/zero power he has, and it was great and love picturing Morgan just squeezing the air form his lungs, etc.
Fuck Jona XD
[Report This]Date: December 16 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hahahahahaha XD Ok that ending was hilarious.
But also a great cathartic chapter here, I loooooved Morgan telling off her bitch of a mother like that.
She was so see through, only wanting to "reconnect" as her family basically black listed her/turned on her (for reasons that were understandable, with how she was treating Morgan)
And the shit about "Calling her son".....yeah bitch, great way to start the call off.
Urghh, her parents are such assholes. They don't deserve a penny of inheritance or time from their other family members.
It was great hearing Morgan tear into her and block her number after.
Aaaaand now she and Lomasi are going to have some more sexy fun, good for them.
And I liked how Morgan clarified that she (while enjoying the occasional tryst with Polly) still prefers some one on one time with her girlfriend.
It was another great chapter to read, and I really enjoyed it.
Though I would suggest later going back over this and correcting a few spelling errors here and there.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2022 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Was so excited to see a new chapter up :D
Firstly, still in love with Morgan and Lomasi's relationship, they continue to be perfect together.
I'm still unsure of Polly's place in their home, I do like her growth since her pet-days.
On one hand, I don't want her intruding on the romantic relationship of Morgan and Lomasi.
But on the other hand, a strictly 'friends with occasional benefits' situation could work.
I just personally don't want to see her cause any negative impacts on Morgan and Lomasi's relationship long term.
I feel this was another great "wordly" chapter showing more of their friends/social life/world, etc.
I still think Candie is craaaaazy XD But seeing her take down that drunken loud mouth coach was fun, as was seeing her take charge of the game.
But now....shit.....Jona is coming back into Daisy and Rose's lives....and while Rose may be too young/too naive to realize the negatives, I feel really bad for Daisy :(
But am excited to read more whenever you return to this series.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2022 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
OK wow, this was a damn good season finale of sorts.
I have to say I was surprised at Polly's continued inclusion and Morgan and Lomasi gaining another little lover/polycule type scenario.
But I am interesting in seeing where things go.
So much happened here, but one big thing, Morgan now can afford her transition completely!
Yay for monetary gifts.
I love that Lomasi's parents helped out, they already view Morgan as part of the family, so it just further cements her there. (looking out for their future daughter in law XD)
And Tom also chipping in was great.
Petra, I am still on the fence about in some areas, but maybe having a boyfriend will help her out. (still think Penny needs to be confronted by Petra, but Candie sure put the fear of god into her before)
I hope you enjoy your break, you have worked so hard on this story and have been doing an amazing job at breathing life into these characters and their world.
I am going to be happily re-reading this story till the next 'season' starts.
The holiday's can be a stressful time for everyone. Urghhh, so much to do.
I hope you have a good holiday season however, and rest up! You deserve it after pumping out all these great chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2022 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
I was so happy seeing another update :) Perfect way to start the morning.
Great work on this chapter, as always it was well written, the dialogue was perfectly in-character for the pre-established ones (Lomasi is as always, a hilarious gremling XD)
As well as doing a great job on the newly introduced characters, this felt like a real family reunion/birthday gathering.
I loved the introduction of Martha, she seems like a cool relative to have and takes no shit from people (including her bitch daughter)
It's nice to have another family member in Morgan's corner, as well as the introduction of her twin cousins. They seem like a fun twosome, hopefully *not* keeping Eric against his will.
I laughed when Lomasi jumped up and started making out with Morgan to hide her from her bitch-Karen mother XD The visualization of that was hilarious.
It's also great seeing Gwen doesn't have as much support in her transphobic views as she believed.
Really enjoyed this chapter, another great expansive one in terms of characters. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2022 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ok now this was a fun chapter, and very interesting.
I liked seeing Morgan and Lomasi's thoughts and fantasies on possible size switching and how it would change their relationship.
Lo's first fantasy was hilarious XD Definitely over the top and when fantasy-Petra showed up with an army of tinies I laughed so hard, and Lomasi's responses XD It was great
The last part being a fantasy or possibly a real alternate reality was also fun to read. .
I feel bad for them that Lomasi and Morgan went too far (intimacy wise) and both wound up getting hurt. This is definitely going to make Morgan hesitant to engage in physical intimacy, they just have to learn when to not go too far when having sex, but still enjoy themselves.
Overall a great, funny and cool chapter to read and as always, well written.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2022 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ok wow, Daisy is having a good time XD
I think it was great Morgan and Lo went on the date with her to help her out, as well as get out themselves.
Daisy deserves it after her ex-husband's bullshit.
Also Rose is cute XD
It was interesting seeing Petra out on a date.
And Penny sabotaging her dates makes sense (from a character perspective) she is obsessed and fanatical about Petra.
I know Candie has....issues....but the fact she saw through Penny and warned/threatened her about pulling that kind of shit with Petra's dates shows how much she cares about her sister. (if...enacting it in questionable ways)
Penny needs to realize the truth that Petra doesn't/will never see her like that ( I mean unless she later has a sexual awakening and realizes she's bi/pan/gay, etc)
But even then, I feel she would still see Penny as her pet/emotional support dog, etc.
There would be too much pre-established intricacies in how Petra sees Penny to ever consider her a girlfriend, etc.
The visual of Candie holding Penny down with her nails like that was a cool touch, really vividly painting the picture of her and the danger she presents when she goes into her predator mindset.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2022 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
XD I love that Lomasi has an office her size.
I loved the talk between them were Lomasi reassured Morgan she was happy with whatever form their sexual-future looks like (in regards to Morgan's genetalia) depending on what made Morgan comfortable (in regards to transitioning lower-wise)
Such a loving/cute moment and again solidifying their relationship all the more.
Nice day out at the renaissance fair (and the return of the portly booth operator XD cool)
Candie.....needs help (like as said before her issues with seeking help may cause her to have issues with her kids being taken, etc) but...she is still self aware enough to know she's screwed up as said before, but damn....her character can be scary at times (that psycho-smile...)
Like 'yes' she saved the tiny....but she couldn't have put her in her pocket and ran? (or her cleavage, or panties, etc) no she had to EAT her.....
Morgan keeping in contact with Lara and helping Polly was great (still hoping the enclave's recent shit doesn't roll over onto Morgan and Lo)
Polly....damn she is stir crazy/stockholme syndromed and conditioned way too much, she's in 'pet mode' to the max, and the scene of her breaking down and begging Morgan and Lomasi to keep her got me really feeling for her :(
It's a good thing Morgan is getting the enclave to help her. I wonder if she will return, or make appearances (be it visiting Morgan and Lomasi, or if you have other ideas for her being a permanent member of their household, or temporarily, etc)
She really has to get over seeing herself as an item/pet and embrace her humanity.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2022 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
OK this chapter was great XD (well every chapter is)
But I loved the next step Morgan and Lomasi have taken, moving in together. It also was a real emotional moment when Lomasi was talking about how Morgan was using funds she'd put aside for her transitioning, and how Morgan comforted her, etc.
And the teasing and cute moments between them this chapter were adorable, and I loved reading them.
And how Lomasi felt big and in charge when they were in bed, a great look into their growing private-sex life.
It's also great that Morgan is finally willing to go all the way and try going that extra step, it feels realistic and genuine that they have been thinking and talking over this for all this time, and finally she's ready to try penetrative intercourse. (and remembering what happened to Lomasi's sister is a good callback, etc)
Great work on this chapter as always, it was nice to get back to a more Lomasi/Morgan focussed chapter after the previous ones have been more world-building/supporting character focussed.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2022 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn....things are heating up now.
I'm worried the issues with the enclave's and now terrorist actions might spill over to Morgan and Lomasi (I hope not though, they don't deserve to get dragged into that shit)
At least Petra has not tried to stop some of the tinies from leaving her, though I wonder how she'd deal if it was a mass exodus ,and not just a few.
Lara needs to assert her authority and ensure shit like that doesn't happen again, it's only going to lead to more discent if other tinies who work under her think they can undermine her authority.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2022 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chapter to read.
I mean Petra is finally seeing some sense, she needs a wake up call and hopefully this will be her first step in doing so.
Morgan was right (and that line from Petra about the man's wife not having any choice/autonomy really pissed me off) Petra needs to realize how she acts/views the tiny people she has is not good in every sense of the way.
Yes she cares for them, but she doesn't view them as people.
Glad Penny told her the truth about some of the others in Petra's 'care' don't want to be her pets, can't wait to see how that plays out.
Also more Candie, that was a surprise, I didn't think we'd be getting more of her so soon.
Lomasi and Morgan continue to be a great couple XD Even when arguing they are flirting, and Lomasi 'comforting' the other vendor operator while simultaneously roasting him.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2022 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, ok this was a loaded chapter of expansion.
It was nice to see Daisy and her family.
Her ex-husband is a real piece of work (and a piece of shit)
But damn! Then you have Candie.....she's a basket full of nuts. I mean she seems to at least be self aware (or semi-self aware, without having been diagnosed) that she has issues.
The fact she at least is able to reign herself in is something, but damn....she needs help.
I will say I did like the part where she threatened Jona and grabbed him was great, I mean she may be a sociopath (or another diagnosed personality type/mental ilness) but she is a caring mother, and the way he both insulted her kids AND said he would just abandon his own daughter, yeah...not a good thing to say Jona.
I also liked the start of the chapter showing Lomasi and Morgan experimenting with restraints, nice to see them exploring the bedroom aspects more and easing into kinks while communicating openly about it to one another.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Lara riding that drone was hilarious but also cool XD
Gotta say Morgan is taking a huge risk here, hope the enclave appreciates her going out on a limb for them.
It sucks that Morgan has to deal with people like assholes like the security guard at her work place.
And damn, that guard had noooo idea she was going to wind up tiny XD
I'm glad Petra is being watched and monitored, she needs to be under surveillance.
And Lara pulling a Batman, nice XD
[Report This]Date: August 29 2022 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Pfftt XD Drunk Morgan trying to get her point across while also being a horny mess, I love it.
Yay for Lomasi being an aunt now :D (and can't wait to see her interacting with her nephew.....aaaaand if wedding bells were in the air, Morgan's future nephew)
I have to say I am not liking Petra, as Morgan said she seems like someone who is just viewing the tinies she has a pets, and despite all her posts and online acts of wanting 'rights' for them, she really just wants to keep her pets and her property.
Her thoughts at the end of the chapter, about the tinies legally being hers just reinforces this.
I mean she 'realises' her thought process is wrong, but still I have the feeling her 'love/desire to keep them, or keep them safe in her twisted view' may win out over her desire for them to be independent.
Like it's up in the air what side of her will win over morally/ethically.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2022 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
This was another great chapter :)
It was very realistic and palpable, Morgan's anxiety over going to the reunion. Lomasi was great at keeping her grounded.
I also love Lomasi's reactions to David's jabs at her.
Petra....idk, she seems like a good friend to reconnect with in some senses. But the fact she still has an outdated view on tiny/size mixed people could be an issue.
Like she says she's trying and isn't intentional sizeist, and has Penny.
But the fact Penny still thinks of her as an 'owner' and Petra is allowing that, the dynamic they have is....questionable.
I hope Petra, Candie and Penny won't cause any issues, or drama for Lomasi and Morgan :(
[Report This]Date: August 24 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry for the late review here. I missed this update before.
I love seeing you expand the world out more and showing the effects the shrinking phenomenon has on these other people who aren't as fortunate as Lomasi's family, etc.
David being an outlier member/helper is another nice touch :)
Lara has been through some horrific stuff, Bridget should be more mindful about that, I mean she has visible reminders.
A great chapter, I am heading off to read the next right away :)
[Report This]Date: August 11 2022 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter here :D
I loved seeing more of Lomasi and Morgan being domestic and the airport scenes were great.
Lomasi is such a little horny goblin, and it's adorable XD
I loved seeing Lomasi's family, her father is great as is her mother and meeting he rsister.
They all seem to have a loving and supportive vibe about them, which is what Morgan needs (besides Lomasi and of course her brother) Lomasi's family welcoming her with open arms and treating her as part of the family is something she really needs.
(especially after the last chapter)
(also Lomasi's dad has no filter XD it's fun seeing Lomasi isn't the only one in the family who is open about sex talk)
Lomasi and Taz's talk about the sexual aspects of a mixed sized relationship was a great addition, as well as realistic, if someone was as big/or small as they are, there would need to be careful consideration about penetrative sex and safety measures.
Another great chapter here, you continue to do worldbuilding, as well as explore Lomasi and Morgan's relationship beautifully. I cannot wait to read more of this :)
[Report This]Date: July 29 2022 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wasn't expecting an update this fast but was happy to see one posted :D
Firstly, Morgan and Lomasi continue to be an adorable amazing couple (couple goals with size differences XD)
I loved that you broached more into Morgan's past here and we got a brief glimpse of some of her history with the swimming spot.
The build up to her bikini reveal was cool, and you captured her hesitation and fears over how she would look really well. As you did with Lomasi's comforting nature.
The floating scene were they were talking and leading into the emotional makeout session was also well done XD Morgan is a sappy romantic.
And FUCK HER PARENTS! Especially her mother, they had to come along and (unknowingly but still) ruin her day and make her feel like shit.
I hope Morgan and Lomasi return their later on at some point and try and make more good memories (I mean they don't have to as said, every memory with Lomasi is a good memory XD) but still, her parents shouldn't taint a spot where she can have fun with the woman she loves.
Another great chapter, I loved every paragraph of it. And you continue to write these so perfectly, can't wait to read more.
Keep up the great work :D