[Report This]Date: July 27 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yay!! :D I am so happy you decided to continue this story.
I had re-read the first chapter so many times and when I saw this was updated I jumped in to read it straight away.
I love how you've progressed Morgan and Lomasi's relationship here. The interaction between them throughout this chapter was great, loving and adorable and I loved every second of it. I love their dynamic,
Also working in the two smaller shrinkees at the theatre was a nice touch of expanding their world and showing how smaller shrinkees than Lomasi would have to survive if not having proper homes, etc.
I am loving Lomasi and Morgan still, their relationship is well written and I again am just wanting more XD
You wrote them both great, and the dialogue and interactions as I said were really written well.
I can't wait to read more of them :D
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I need more of this XD
I know this says complete, but I would not be opposed to reading more if you continued.
I feel like you really got me attached to these two characters, and this world, and now I just want to read more and see how their relationship grows, and just how their stories continue.
Hope you decide to write more, cause I would definitely read it.
I feel you weren't disrespective, and handled the character of Morgan really well. And Lomasi was well written too.
Author's Response:
Wish granted~.
Author's Response:
Wish granted~.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying the character dynamics, feel pretty realistic and work well with the story.