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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2022 1:58 PM Title: Part 4

Interesting. If she can change anything I wonder if one of the scenarios has Matt as a shrunken girl for added humiliation 



Author's Response:

that'd be a cool idea!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2022 2:18 AM Title: Part 1

Great chapter.  Really like the idea of the A.I. program making Matt say and do as his sister programed, even if possibly against his will.

Would have been nice if Matt gave a detailed description of the taste and smell of Kirsten's ass sweat.  Regardless, glad Matt had to drink up Kirsten's ? ass sweat.

It seems Kirsten now has absolute power over Matt, completely at her will.  Just how horny and perverted is Kirsten now that she is seemingly all powerful over Matt?



Author's Response:

oh yeah i have a tendency to forget the descriptions of things at key moments LOL my bad

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2022 2:13 AM Title: Part 2

Great story and great concept.

My only suggestion, is that you create a 3-D version of Matt in the real world that mimics the now computerized Matt.  Perhaps the red laser, from chapter 1, that scanned Matt can create a 3-D version of him in the real world; and transfer information (i.e. Matt's actions, his thoughts, Kirsten's actual foot odor, sensations of Matt's tiny body to her real body, etc.) so Kirsten and Matt can experience an actual interaction between them.

The computer program would act as a simple medium between them.  However between Matt experiencing Kirsten's program of herself and Kirsten experiencing a 3-D version of her computerized version of Matt; they would both be experiencing a real life version of each other.

Just a suggestion.

Great story regardless.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

the goal with having a sci-fi machine was to do things i cant do in other stories like forcibly muting the shrunken guy or setting the temperatures to unrealistically high degrees (next chapter). 

i understand what you're suggesting but to me or at least how i picture things, there's not much of a difference. (like a giant could stick a tiny in their butt, or a giant could stick a voodoo doll in their butt which corresponds with the AI sticking a tiny in their butt, or the AI can just independently stick the tiny in their butt. to me thats all the same). but regardless if those kind of interactions are more your thing then the fourth chapter is pretty similar to that anyways :)

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2022 7:50 PM Title: Part 1

Love it



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2022 5:47 AM Title: Part 1

Ok this first chapter was great, really got me excited. The system here has tons of possibilities for kinky play XD

Matt really shouldn't have gone snooping on his sisters computer. 

A very cool cliffhanger at the end, can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2022 12:26 AM Title: Part 1

Looks like another great series to look forward to.

You're on fire, mate! Keep it up.

Author's Response:

thanks!

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