[Report This]Date: May 28 2022 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really great foot fetish story, I hope you continue it now that Lisa has the shrink ray at her disposal. Definitely a story worth more chapters.
You asked, and you have quite a lot of grammatical errors {e.g. "Having made sure that noone was around" rather than "no one", "She could feel her eyes starting to close, making best effort to stay focused on the task at hand." rather than "making her best effort", "... felt that he was getting into serious trouble and decided to be tell her the truth." rather than "... and decided to tell her ...", and others such as these.}
That said, this is a great story premise; and your descriptions are fantastic. When Lisa questioned "Are you saying that my feet smell?" and James replied "No. Yes!" and James went on to explain about her foot odor as "... Yes but that is the most glorious of smells!", you hit a home run with all of us lovers of female feet. You said what all us female foot odor lovers feel.
Now that Lisa has the shrink ray, the people of world are hers' for her use and abuse.
Well done!
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you for reviewing my story! I am glad that I managed to make it work! Haha some of those mistakes are typos for example "to be tell". I guess I have to be much more careful with my typing... I was desperate to finish this story and stayed up late haha. I will do my best to continue it, but it might take a while, since I am trying out different ideas. It is very pleasant to hear that you like my descriptions, because not being a native English speaker I am doing my best for them to be of good quality.