[Report This]Date: July 29 2022 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it. Love it so much, the sweat, the characters, the relationship... it's very hot, and a good read besides.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It was a fun little one shot.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2022 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Didn't expect to like this one as much as I did, but the dynamic between the protagonists is really enjoyable and the way the MTP works is really fun. Even if you intended this as a one shot I'd definitely read a continuation if you ever did one further down the line. As always good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I like the MTP thing too and I might do another story in the same universe, maybe exploring similar guys who "loan" size out for various purposes.
[Report This]Date: May 27 2022 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bullies with a crush are great, tomboys are great, gentle teasing is great, a teasing bully tomboy with a crush is S-tier and I wish there were more stories with something like that. Great one-shot.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's a set of tropes I have an attraction to.
Date: May 24 2022 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. Loved the dynamic between each character and I would love to see how their relationship was before this story
Author's Response:
Probably not too different, this is kind of a take on the trope that girls pick on the guys they like so Mandy's probably been doing stuff like this to Richie for years. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2022 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, even though it's a one shot I'd love to see more from these two characters. The only scenario I could see getting added is maybe Ritchie and her have sex from the back then she shrinks him down and let's him wander around her thong between her ass ;)
Author's Response:
Would be fun, but I've already got too many ongoings lol. Anyways thanks for the review!
Date: May 24 2022 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love seeing you tackle the athletic tomboy trope, which is among my favorites. Mandy does remind me of Rachel from "Rachel's Lucky Charm" by Jaybug, which is one of those stories I return to every week for ... inspiration. She's caring, but she'll try establishing some sort of dominance over her tiny partner.
The workout scenes were artfully done, though a bit short for my taste. What ties this together is the rather playful, relationship between the characters. Amusingly enough, it looks like Ritchie is the Tsundere this time, putting up with Mandy's antics. Usually the tomboy is pushing this delicate wallflower around, but Ritchie has some backbone and pushes back, which is nice to see.
My only major gripe is purely related to my own tastes (or lack thereof if you will), but I'm not too keen on the "size-sharing" attribute. I tend to like it when the size difference is relatively constant, it gives a steady frame of reference. That being said, good authors are able to make anything interesting, even stuff I'm not usually too enthusiastic about, and you are among those good authors.
I know this was intended to be a one-shot, and ultimately, I don't see where else the story could go. But, that being said, the sweaty, muscly tomboy is besto giantesso, so I would be receptive if this got expanded.
Author's Response:
I hadn't thought of Richie as Tsundere but yeah it fits. The whole size-sharing thing I thought was fun as another added element of trust between the two, like Richie has that lingering doubt that Mandy might actually just keep his size until they get a little closer. Like you I'm not really sure where else the story would go after this, so this one is probably over, but I'm sure I'll do another story with a sweaty fitness loving girl at some point.
Date: May 23 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great story again. Little one shots like this that mix in odor, comedy, and romance are my favorite, and this was another 10/10. Also forgot to comment on your heaven and hell story how much I really enjoyed that one as well! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it and Welcome to Hell! This one leans a bit more towards romance but I think it still delivers on the rest.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2022 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fun story! Love a giantess that is into teasing, humiliation, and domination, while still being gentle (enough) physically and caring overall.
Thanks for sharing your works!
Author's Response:
Thanks! As is probably evident from my stories I love that kind of a dynamic.