Date: June 29 2022 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice, would like to read more. Interested to see how much this one will differ from the original.
Date: June 21 2022 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the idea but he is just too small….wish he was doll size…but that’s my fav
Date: June 21 2022 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the idea but he is just too small….wish he was doll size…but that’s my fav
Date: June 12 2022 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with thegreatrizzo, Jake was clearly a jerk to Mandy before he shrank, so her priority should be to get payback on him in so many ways (in the pool, at the gym, etc). The maternal role should be left to Cindy. Jake will have a very tough time in this new world, especially if all shrunken men need breast milk to survive. That would indeed be some sweet karma.
Date: May 26 2022 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is the good one, but i think u should completed the first one im curious xd
Date: May 25 2022 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting story. I look forward to see where this goes. I hope that Mandy will grow a lot like how Jake shrunk rapidly. I hope he is the “training bra” that he teased her about. Get some sweet karma for that one.
Date: May 25 2022 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I read and loved the first version, maternal and lactation is such a hard combo to find in GTS stories but you tied everything together so well, the only issue was how focused the story became on the grandparents which i just could not "get"
if V2 is being planned out, more involving the stepmother/sister would be more appreciated, involving the grandparents if people want them is fine, but the strong focus was almost ridiculous, you could implement other characters, like teachers (home schooling) the Doctor/nurses or neighbors each with the maternal instinct
Hope this one is even bigger (and milkier :) than the last!
Date: May 22 2022 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
One of my favourite stories! The opportunities for humiliation and domination are endless.
Date: May 22 2022 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Do you do commissions?
Date: May 22 2022 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hope the grandma is more prominent this time