Date: November 13 2022 7:51 PM Title: Deep Into The Depths
Love episodic stories like these. They make for easy reading lmao.
Really liked the premise and executions of chapters 1 and 3. They both did a good job capturing the terror of shrinking, although I think chapter 3 was better. Props on chapter 4. Shaving is a super rare scenario. Dialogue was hit or miss in some chapters, so I guess work on that.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I feel these stories work better in episodic form since they're short and get to the point. I try to capture both horror and the risk one will take when lust takes over.
Regarding the dialogue, that is a weak point of mine. I think I can take an educated guess at which dialogue was a miss. That's on me trying to push a chapter though when I was in a writer's block. Thanks for the critique
Date: November 13 2022 2:29 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
Love this story! Please read the story brobdingnagians business. The tiny cities under the glass with the Chinese manager walking above them in the office. Maybe you could write a spinoff chapter, looks like a story you could appreciate
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. And thanks for the recommendation, I'll give it a read
[Report This]Date: November 13 2022 8:00 AM Title: Deep Into The Depths
One of my favorite chapters of yours! Really well written, looking forward to whatever you write next!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: November 06 2022 1:32 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
Hope next time he is plastered under the giant's sole. Loved this chapter.
Author's Response:
You never know what could happen in future tales
[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 9:56 AM Title: At Their Feet
With this latest instalment of the series, aHomester has cemented themselves as the new monarch of microscopic/nanoscopic stories, bringing in with heavy details and epic storylines. This is a must read for anyone getting into these kinds of stories, and I hope to see more chapters in the future!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words
[Report This]Date: October 11 2022 6:47 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
i liked the latest chapter, people rarely incorporate microscopic life to the well microscopic shrinking stories
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2022 6:13 AM Title: Dirt Underfoot
Excellent descriptions of scale and use of giantesses as landscapes.
A must read for fans of unaware giantesses and extreme size differences.
Looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you enjoy the latest chapters when they come out
[Report This]Date: July 28 2022 10:27 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
Loving all of these. Would like to see some end with the nanos just being stuck at their new size. That one where the razor knocked his shrink ray away I think would have been glorious to have end with him struggling to live in the left over stubble of the girls pubic hair like a mite from then on, etc.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've floated the idea of having someone survive but haven't implemented that yet. Maybe in a future chapter or different title
[Report This]Date: June 18 2022 9:47 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
that last one was great, you are amazing at describing bodies as landscapes.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 17 2022 4:35 AM Title: Fleshy Mountain Climbing
Easily my favorite chapter yet! I love the way you write, you're really good at drastic size differences and making humans seem like landscapes. Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Drastic size differences is the best. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 17 2022 4:12 AM Title: Fleshy Mountain Climbing
Love this chapter, maybe the best yet! Really like your use of size and scale, looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2022 8:45 PM Title: Gone Camping
oh god I love nanos in pubes, this is AMAZING!
thank you for writing, hopefully they can show up again at some point, will keep an eye on this story <3
Author's Response:
There needs to be more stories like that for sure. Thanks for rating!
Date: May 11 2022 2:19 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
Keep up the great work! I loved Chapters 4 and 5 the most so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know!
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 5:04 AM Title: Gone Camping
Wow, this was amazing. Well done
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 4:09 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
Part of me would have liked to have seen the mother finding out she stepped on her daughter.
After all, it was her shrinking ray, so the idea that her daughter had gotten shrunk wouldn't be far fetched.
In your opinion, do you think she figured it out eventually after being unable to find her daughter?
Author's Response:
The thought may come to her mind, that’s for the reader to consider.
In the stories after, the users of the shrinking ray shrink the gun down with themselves. It this first story, the unexpected jolt she felt from using it on herself, dropping it immediately back in the drawer, preventing it from shrinking down too, and it was closed after bumping into it.
Thanks for the 5-star rating!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2022 4:02 PM Title: Party Hard
LOVED this last chapter!
The nameless victims weren’t an issue at all, imo!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input!
Date: May 03 2022 7:56 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
Love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: May 03 2022 3:48 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
I absoulately love the size differences in your stories and hoe descriptive they are, bte I know this is a compilation of small stories but I would like to see a continuation to Greg's story
Author's Response:
Thanks. I’ve always been more of a fan of nano-sized stories.
And unfortunately for Greg, he was wiped out by an earth ending tsunami of lavender lotion and absorbed into his mother’s toe
[Report This]Date: April 20 2022 4:59 AM Title: Dangers of Voyeur
This was a great chapter!
I love the sneaking around aspect as well as them using the spaces in the floor to their advantage.
It was also a nice touch having multiple women there, as well as the mother, aunt and grandmother. Not a lot of people include grandparents in such hands on (or feet on in this case XD) scenarios, and I think that is a real shame.
It was a nice touch adding her in :D
And that ending! Damn he would be traversing his mother's toe like an environment of lavender scented atmosphere.
Great work on this chapter, loved reading it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I never normally write in much older women (In this case, the grandmother was only in her 50's or she's not exactly ancient) but in a scenario when a much older family member plays a part to obliviously killing her grandson was a story to tell.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2022 2:28 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing
I really enjoyed this last chapter. I have no real criticisms just personally preference, I was hoping the sister to have accidentally crushed one of them, maybe just partially. I do like it when someone getting crushed is a bit prolonged, like instead of turning into paste immediately he might just get stuck on her sole like one of the crumbs and be smashed to bits slowly over a few steps, having his arms and legs snapped and then his core compressed and so on.
Loving it all so far, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. I debated whether or not to take the violent route this chapter but went the quick death end. Be on the lookout for a later tale that goes down that route.