Reviewer: iiaxinus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

shame there was nothing with miss nelson

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2022 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well that was a surprisingly sweet ending.  Nice to that despite the giantesses being very prideful and thinking little of Jack, Ulga honored her promise.  Plus all those guards cheering when the curse was announced to be broken was pretty cute.  Mythia actually seemed to be a little fond of Jack at the end there but then she was a bit more concerned for his well being than Ulga or the daughters.  And nice to see Aria and Alice trying to make amends with Jack after what they put him through.

Overall, this was a delightfully lewd story with dominance and some heartwarming parts.  I normally don't like futa but my brain seems to make an exception at times and this was one of them.  The giantesses and their realm was fun.  It's fun how they were all these incredibly voluptuous, casually lewd beings and thought of Jack as a puny plaything most of the time despite his importance to their race.  The daughters got carried away with the playing bit but everything worked out in the end, to Jack's relief.

As for a "what if the giantesses found a way to human world" scenario/sequal, I'm certainly going to be thinking about that.  A good setting always gets my "what if" juices flowing.

Author's Response:

Every fairy tale is supposed to have a happy end, right? Cause no matter how lewd and smutty it was, it still was a fairy tale...sort of...So there you have it, a nice ending. Anyway, a big thank you to all of you for the constant reading, the reviews, the support and feedback in general...  If it wasn't for you guys, the story would most probably be left unfinished... It was great to have you around, motivating me to keep going...

I hope my setting proves inspiring enough for many writers to work with...

Till the next story...Farewell!    

Reviewer: Cornonacob Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2022 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the latest chapter! 

Sorry to hear about your writers block.  I think you have come close to exploring some really neat ideas. Hopefully I can shed some light on them. In both insertion scenes, jack “does his business” and it’s pretty straight forward. I think some more time in a womb would be a great place to explore some fun things. What it’s like in there by himself maybe, or when something else intrudes? (If you know what I mean...)

another option is for Jack to go inside... the other direction. That’s has lots of potential.

I still think there’s room for many chapters ahead, I’ll be eagerly awaiting the next update! 

Author's Response:

 Well, it's more of a personal preference...To my mind, I find it quite a turn off to read about male masturbation and stuff, more so write about it. I don't know...I believe that readers would be more interested in reading about giantesses and futas (again it's the whole dominance thing that is arousing, hence the male genitals), even descriptions about a giantess's female anatomy (inside the womb), and not when a micro is busy doing his job...All in all, it's against the whole feeling of submission and vulnerability the reader experiences in front of an enormous woman...An act like male breeding is considered dominant which is against the concept... Hope that makes sense...kind off...

 Thank you for the feedback! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2022 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

Man, I love these smut chapters! Also, the queen’s dominant personality is perfect to pair with the timid Jack. I love their dynamic together. 

Mythia was a surprise to me. Jack was admiring her and even the queen was complimenting her beauty. She deserves to be the one to bear Jack’s seed if this is the plan. 

With this sexual adventure, I hope Mythia gets more confident about using Jack. We saw her use her feet by herself, but with the help of the queen, I think there is room for Mythia to play with Jack again on her terms. 

I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! 

Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was kinda hard trying not to repeat my self with the chapter where the queen uses Jack (more or less unwilling insertion there too)...Anyways, since I've run out of ideas, I believe this story heads towards its end...Maybe another chapter or two. I've pretty much exhausted the whole giant futa thing...Unless there are new ideas of course.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2022 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hmm, I wasn’t expecting Mythia to act so responsible. Part of me was hoping she would use him like everyone else. 

Maybe she is letting him rest so she can fuck him later. After all, she did get horny from that foot worship earlier. It’s only a matter of time now. 

I hope Mythia gets her turn next and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2022 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

Looks like actions have consequences.  At least the queen is taking this curse thing seriously.  Good for Jack, he finally gets a break of sorts.  At the same time something tells me Mythia is going to enjoy her time with Jack.  Also, that "oh" moment when every giantess in the room learned that the human is only supposed to be messed with during sex was funny.

The question now it: after being bullied so much, how much does Jack even want to help the giantesses and can they convince him to do so?  Maybe Mythia can help with "diplomacy".

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2022 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

I can't wait to see what he's going to face

Reviewer: Doodadad Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2022 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good stuff. Considering the number of futas in the castle and the size difference, I wonder if we'll end up seeing any unaware scenarios due to Jack getting misplaced or winding up in bad situations.

Reviewer: gtsfan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well I didn't like Miss Whiskers!  Not just that I wasn't expecting a futa story to cross over into bestiality.  It's a matter of size.  A cat is just too big.  Even a horny hamster would be too big.  Futa mouse would have been more appropriate.  But, it still doesn't seem to fit.  I think you would have been better off without it.

Thanks for the reference to the futa sisters story over on writing.com (never would have found that motherlode of futa content).  There's enough material for many more beanstalk chapters.

However, here's what I would have liked to see you do (instead of Miss Whiskers) if the objective was to get Jack Futa Fucked.  He needs to get a girl pregnant to lift the curse.  Maybe he'll succeed with the queen.  But, I'm sure she'll want to hedge her bets.  The queen should command that great witch you introduced to shrink one of her subjects down down to Jack's size so he can "breed" her.  Preferably a criminal who isn't too keen on the idea.  Another adversary (or maybe later an ally) for Jack

Author's Response:

 Now that you mention it, I believe you're right. A cat may be too big, wrong animal choice there. I guess my calculations were wrong from the beginning. I wanted a toe sized Jack to deal with an animal a couple times his size but then the cat would look really small compared to the actual giants, hence the 40 foot furball Miss Whiskers. But anyways, it is what it is...sorry if it was a major turn off.

Reviewer: gtsfan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2022 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just found this in Most Recent.  Very good  couldn't stop reading it.  Currently at chapter 7.  You asked for some game ideas.  I decided to focus on futa games since that's what makes this story unique along with the size ratio.  Assume the girls are going to torture Jack.  But, "safety first" since he's the hero.  So, how about these:
1. Target practice - stuck to the wall like darts but using futa cum.
2. Target practice - Jack as a moving target on a table.
3. Swimming lessons - Jack in a cup that the girls slowly fill with cum.
4. Dunk tank - Jack perched on the lip of a cup of water while girls shoot cum.
5. Penis pickup - Jack in cup.  Time how long it takes for hands free penis to descend an suck him up.
6. Penis pickup free range - Jack is out of the cup and tries to evade the hungry cocks.
Unique story.  Rare to find something new and well written.  Hard to know where you'll go next.  Seems like you already did all the good stuff.
Reminds me of the excellent Windfall Futa Ciri 3D Animation (use Google or try the following URL):
rule34.us/index.php?r=posts/view&id=3414084

Author's Response:

Thank you for the ideas, helped a lot as seen by chapter 8. To be honest, the entire concept of sick games was inspired by poopoodoop's chapters in the interactive story "SHRUNKEN AT HOME WITH SHEMALE SISTERS" on writing.com. Plenty of similar content there.

 Anyway, thanks for the review!