Fantastic story. Brilliant. Rare to see a new, well-written mega story. Especially love the goddess/worship angle.

Can't wait to see this continued! 10/10!

Hey man, I just wanted to drop off this review since I just caught up on the story. This is fantastic work of GTS fiction and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Chapter 8 was no exception. I love the little details that build Kristen's personality such as her getting upset with the tiny specks for being out and about when she crushed some of them. And it added an interesting twist that the message said "good", that she squished them. Nice work, keep it up! I can't wait to see where the story goes, and I really can't wait until we get out of the flashback section and Kristen starts to 'own' it.

Author's Response: We're almost out of the flashback!  Thank you Carnage for the kind words. 

I like how things are developing. I hope the nanos end up "serving" her in some ways, similarly to how the micros are

Thank you very much for making a return! This is a new narrative to me, but it's already off to a terrific start. My favorite part of her apology is when she apologizes so reluctantly to one of her little towns, even admitting to herself that it was embarrassing. When I entered Snowfield in one of the other chapters, I was in awe of your writing skills once again. In one of the flashbacks of chapter 5, she recognized what she had done and it was still enjoyable to read. I'm eager to see where this narrative goes. Thank you for all your hard work.

As a fan of your prior tales and a sucker for milfs, I'm eager to find out where this one goes.

So great to see you back! I just discovered this story and it is off to a great start. I love when she begrudgingly apologizes to one of her little cities, even saying herself that it looked bad. And then when stepping through Snowfield in one of the other chapters, man, I absolutely love your writing style. Even when she realized what she had done in one of the flashbacks of chapter 5, it was so well written and fun to read. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Carnage.  I appreciate your feedback a lot.  You coming from writing such exciting stories that I have enjoyed.  I can't wait to return from the flashback section!

Very good description of the cosmic storm, if something like Osrtov disappeared I imagine that the reactions would be like this

Entire nations shrunken under the rule of cruel women is my biggest fantasy of all so I'm eager to see how she communicates and becomes her goddess, who imposes on them, etc.

interesting, interesting

knowing Kristen's past is fantastic to understand why she acts like a goddess with the micros...so many frustrations in her life need to be channeled somewhere

The stories of an average woman who secretly have a micro civilization in her home and use it to be goddesses are irresistible to me. Also your choice of photos for kristen helped my imagination a lot

Personally I would like a continuation and if possible an origin story for Queenstown and the rest of the cities (Kristen moved into the house of a mad scientist who worked on that project? she stole technology from someone else? etc)

Well done! Haven't read a story like this that I've enjoyed in a long while. Reminds me of the quality of effort put into Cities in the Cellar and a few others. Really looking forward to more.

I'm curious to see where this might go, I really have liked your previous stories and I'm a sucker for milfs

personnally I'm a big fan of a big bush over trimmed but that's just my prefrence,
a nano is the bush is worth thousands in the hand :P