Oh my goodness! That whole last half of this chapter (after the time jump) was incredibly amazing!! I cannot state enough how much I’m LOVING how much Kristen is more and more accepting how much she’s enjoying the power she has over these people. Her cruel demeanor and teasing and asserting her dominance over them is so incredibly hot. What she did to the 17 volunteers is one of the best moments in this story so far! Wish we would’ve gotten a POV of the ones who fell into her asshole but I know the chapter was already long enough. I also love the added element of the video call now! Hope that’s utilized more now that it exists. Both perspectives happening at once was great to see

Sup! I’ve been reading this story along with your other works for a few months now and I just want to say you’re an amazing writer. The amount of effort and dedication you put in unmatched and it these stories have been amazing. 

One of my favorite features of these stories is the POVs from the micros/nanos themselves, such as the the camera feeds off when the destruction happens from Kristen. It would be awesome if we saw the POV of the nano city that was crushed under Kristen’s toe at the end of the chapter as well as the POVs of the those trampled under Parker!

You’re a legend man, keep it up. 

Real good stuff (as if that weren't always the case, lol).

This last chapter really opened up all kinds of possibilities for where the story can go, both short term and later down the line.

Janelle being a cop adds a unique spin and a perspective I can't say I've come across in a story before. So that's real exciting. I'd be lying though if I said I wasn't now hoping for a Secret Rooms version of GV Apartments Chapter 16 down the road, after the latest developments... haha

I'm looking forward to the reference pics as well, I think they add a lot to the imagination while still allowing readers to use their own imagination

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Hello! I had to submit a review because this story is everything that's good in this world. I love interactions with both micro and nano, (but nano in particular), the way you describe both points of view is incredible and the story itself is rather interesting. Only thing I'd like however is reference pictures for the characters, the ones in the first chapter are unavailable and there are other characters without a proper reference.

Perfect as always. the wait is amply rewarded by the quality of every chapter 

Author's Response:

I appreciate the support despite the long waits sometimes.

Should have stopped by with the last Interlude/all multi tiny perspective chapter but c'est la vie.

Anyways, wanted to voice that I love these tiny perspective chapters (and tiny perspectives in general) and would love to see more of this in the future. Very much enjoying this and excited every new chapter I see uploaded.

The length of the chapters isn't too long, and I think it is a good thing to be honest. The longer the chapter, the more it helps with the long wait in-between chapters. Don't worry about it. Go ahead and write them even longer if you want. If there is anyone that has a problem with too much text then they probably wouldn't have stuck around for all these 23 chapters anyway. Those of us who have stuck around obviously are fine with it, and those who aren't fine with it aren't even here reading it anyway, so don't worry about them.

That said, this was a great chapter for world building and character development, but it of course didn't top the previous one in terms of action and the sexual stuff. When it comes to that sort of thing, I think that last chapter was the peak of the story thus far. :)

I'm glad to see the story focusing more on the nano perspective in these latest chapters. The micro stuff was always good too, but nano content is just so rare, you know? That said, this chapter made me realize that the differences in size between the Micros and Nanos isn't as extreme as I had previously thought it was. I always knew the Micros were smaller than ants, but when you wrote of that tiny red ant being HUNDREDS of feet tall in comparison to them, it really put it into perspective how small the micros truly are. But if they're so small that even a tiny red ant is hundreds of feet tall compared to them, then would Kristen, Ginny, Rasha, and so on really even be able to see them with the naked eye? They'd be like, I dunno, motes of dust or something. The Nanos of course are even tinier still, but it seems that with an ant being hundreds of feet talle, even the micros themselves would be at the limit of what could be observed with the naked eye. And the Nanos of course are way past that.

Yet, the difference between them isn't as extreme as I had been thinking. I don't know why, but I had it in my mind this entire time that the Micros were as large relative to the Nanos as Kristen and the others are to them. But this chapter with the ant and Parker being placed in Ostrov and the nanos being half an inch to her (which is still small, but nowhere near the difference as Kristen is to the Micros) proved that isn't the case.

The insect attack was something I had suggested months ago, and I appreciate that you've included this as well as some other things I had suggested. I'm really happy to see you've reconsidered your earlier stance of not wanting the Nanos and Micros to interact with each other, which you said you didn't want to do again after you had done something like that in your previous story. The idea of one or more of the Micros like Parker entering Ostrov and serving as Justyna's enforcer on behalf of Kristen was something I had thought about some chapters back, and I'm glad to see it happen, and excited to see where it develops. There is a LOT of potential there.

That said, perhaps its for the best that the difference between Micro and Nano isn't that extreme after all, because this means that Parker won't be causing too much inadvertent death and destruction, yet at the same time she's a nigh unstoppable force, which only possibly the heaviest weapons could potentially harm or kill. A LOT of Nano nukes could maybe kill Kristen or whomever, but for a Micro like Parker it is certain they could, and in her case it would probably only take a single one. Maybe even conventional bombs with a high enough explosive yield could also do her in, or at least hurt her. But whether the rebels have access to stuff like that or not is for you to decide.

The part about the plane escaping (or attempting to escape) from the Micro room makes me think it might be an interesting idea to explore something like that for the Nanos too. Obviously a trek on foot or even by land vehicles for a Nano to explore other rooms in the house would probably take months or maybe even years, and the logistics would be hard if not impossible to pull off, but when it comes to planes which can move at hypersonic speeds, well I dunno. Now that you have a Micro introduced into the Nano room, it could be an interesting idea to have some of the Nanos make there way into the Micro room for some reason or other.

Like I wrote in the last review I wrote, the plot in the previous chapter with the fighting over Ostrov's nukes made me think of Nyla and her desire to get revenge against Kristen. Well, the rebels in Ostrov also share that same desire, so they could strike up some sort of alliance with Nyla to give her nukes or something. I dunno. But since it looks like Parker is going to start laying the hurt down on the rebels, they might want to flee from Ostrov if they can manage it, and maybe a plane is the way they could do that. Maybe Nyla could give them asylum in Braithe. Maybe in exchange for them becoming her sex toys or something, since she no longer has her boy toy. ;) Nyla's dream of becoming a powerful giant herself could be fulfilled this way. They're so small that she could hide the whole plane and all its occupants in her office or something, and Kristen wouldn't necessarily ever even know about it. Just an idea to consider...

The sort of plane which Ostrov might have which might be able to make the journey into the micro room would probably be a strategic bomber plane, like the B-52 or the Russian Tu-60 or something equivalent to those. Those planes are meant to be in the air for long periods of time in case a nuclear war breaks out and then they can react at a moment's notice, so they carry a lot of fuel. So maybe they could make that journey.

Yet as large as these planes are, since they're nano scale they'd be much smaller than the plane that Ginny detected in this chapter. So it should easily be able to escape detection. As long as the doors to both rooms are open for long enough and no giant is in their path that would collide into, then they probably could make the journey. Aside from going to the Micro room, they could also go to some other room, but I can't think of a good rationale for them doing so. Since we know that both the Micros and Nanos are able to transmit messages to Kristen, isn't it reasonable that they're also able to transmit messages between each other too? The Micros and Nanos have probably been transmitting messages back and forth to each other all these years. So why not have it that Nyla has been in secret contact with these rebels or something? If Nyla can manage to get some of these Nano rebels into her city and under her control, then she could use them for clandestine purposes as spies or something she could send into other rival cities to get information or stuff like that. She could also put them to work cleaning her own shoes, since she's probably tired of being the director of the cleaning of Kristen's shoes, and maybe would like to have that sort of thing for herself for a change.

Or perhaps you could just have Nyla (or some other dissident Micro) get into the Nano room herself somehow, and wreck havoc on Ostrov, or perhaps do battle with Parker and give the rebels some sort of counterbalance or something to even things out. Its up to you but its an idea. :)

I loved the part about how something as inconsequential as a mere strand of Ginny's cum nearly caused Justyna's death by burying her hundreds of feet below that substance which hardened into something like concrete, and how the nanos struggled to make their way through, and it was too much for them and Justyna would have died if it wasn't for Parker's help. Its amazing when something as seemingly insignificant as a strand of cum can be so destructive... :)

Yet at the same time, as you wrote it was hard like stone when it dried, so what if the Nanos were to mine that dried out cum strand of Ginny's and used it for various purposes? There's a lot of things which they might do with it, but my main thought is they could quarry it out into "stone" blocks and then use it as a building material or something. If they're going to start worshiping Ginny as a literal goddess, then wouldn't it be great if they constructed some sort of magnificent temple dedicated to her which is built out of "stone" blocks of her dried cum? There is so much destruction going on, so the construction of that cum temple would be just a little bit of the opposite. And Ginny would probably get a real kick out of a massive temple constructed out of her cum. It could be built in some special safe area, which the giants would take extra care never to disturb. It could be like one of the Great Wonders of their world or something. ;) Imagine the smell the nanos would experience when they entered into that cum temple to worship the goddess who delivered that cum. That said, the same could also be true with the breast milk which Kristen squirted on them years earlier. I'm sure that dried out into a similar hard white material they could build with or something. Maybe even eat as food or something. A temple dedicated to Kristen, constructed from "stone" blocks quarried from her dried breast milk would be very fitting, and maybe its something women of Ostrov might eat as some sort of religious rite, thinking that it may increase their fertility or something like that. As the story progresses towards the development of this cult religion and eventually the introduction of Madelyn, it makes sense to me that the same breast milk the nourished her as an infant would take on some very special significance, and there is a LOT of it, in a dried form, that the Ostrovians would never deplete even in a thousand years.

Even putting religion aside, I'm certain that even from a rational scientific perspective, there would be a good reason to want to eat that dried breast milk since it has a lot of nutrients in it, because that's the whole point of breast milk, after all. And yes it brought death and detruction when it squirted out onto them years ago, but there's also some good to it and it can create and bring life too. I'd say its probably better than the vegan stuff Ginny feeds them, in any case. :)

Okay, this chapter was so good the POVs from the characters, the development, and the tone of the situation were great. I love that Kristen is trying to be a better leader after Justyan's close death and do better by her people now really adds to her being a complicated character with flaws but is trying to be better which I love. Ginny was great I like how she saved the city from an ant and avoided doing too much damage and Parker saving the day was also great. The Luka part was also probably my favoirt POV in this chapter how he could and will die from Ginny passing gas since he was stuck in her colen was great to the point I actually wanted to see that happen but hey maybe another time lol. Also, no the long chapters aren’t annoying their freaking great IMO overall great chapter.

This is the best ongoing story currently published on this site. Thank you for the consistent updates. It's always a thrill to see a new chapter posted.

You have a knack for writing power dynamics. Anyone can throw adjectives together and describe a size scene, but few in this genre have the ability to make readers feel invested in characters like you do.

In case you like reader suggestions, here are a few:

• More development of the cult worshiping the giant women
• Scenes from the nanos' perspective describing life around the giant women
• Nanos try to escape the room, explore the house