Date: April 23 2022 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
So excited to see this continued. Also really curious to see where you take it. I really like the addition of the micro country, I think lots of fun possibilities can arise from having different sizes present, whether a shrink ray is used or they're just already that size. Great stuff!!
Author's Response:
Nah, I'd say more like they were already that size, just mixed up in a cosmic accident and ended up in Kristen's room that small.
Date: April 10 2022 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
The stories of an average woman who secretly have a micro civilization in her home and use it to be goddesses are irresistible to me. Also your choice of photos for kristen helped my imagination a lot
Personally I would like a continuation and if possible an origin story for Queenstown and the rest of the cities (Kristen moved into the house of a mad scientist who worked on that project? she stole technology from someone else? etc)
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment, yeah, more cities will have backstories in the upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess
A terrific concept. I have a yet to posted story along the same line, "Brenda's Basement", only not of micro cities but of a woman with tinies captive in her subterranean basement. The depth of the opening to the basement being to high to escape her dwelling.
Will be interesting how this story with such micro tinies plays out. Really like the toe nail polish aspect.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I love nail polish, so there might be more scenes with more detail about that.
Date: April 09 2022 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Well done! Haven't read a story like this that I've enjoyed in a long while. Reminds me of the quality of effort put into Cities in the Cellar and a few others. Really looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Cities in the Cellar is a classic in my opinion and one of the stories that motivated me to pick up writing in the first place.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2022 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess
Good so far, can’t wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! hopefully in a good direction.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess
I'm curious to see where this might go, I really have liked your previous stories and I'm a sucker for milfs
personnally I'm a big fan of a big bush over trimmed but that's just my prefrence,
a nano is the bush is worth thousands in the hand :P
Author's Response: Haha thank you, I wouldn't count bush out of this story as she gets older, or from other characters.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Love it! Please continue
Author's Response:
Looks like I will! Thank you.