Date: February 20 2025 5:57 PM Title: First day at school
I still just redirects to chapter 7 updated lol, GTS world doesn't like this story lmao.
Date: February 17 2025 8:11 PM Title: First day at school
Yeah I would love those extras. one thing to note though "Backstories" STILL doesn't work on here I had to go to Wattpad, to read it lol.
Author's Response:
I'll just re-upload it.
Author's Response:
I'll just re-upload it.
Date: February 17 2025 8:11 PM Title: First day at school
Yeah I would love those extras. one thing to note though "Backstories" STILL doesn't work on here I had to go to Wattpad, to read it lol.
Date: February 16 2025 4:04 AM Title: First day at school
backstories
Holy shit Matthew's father was actually important wow.
HE HAD A GIANTESS FRIEND?!!?!? that explains he was a bit calmer in chapter 1
he had experience with them.
Jasmine really hit him with a "that's rough buddy" lmao.
And of course Matthew's backstory doesn't humanize him to Jasmne at all lol.
Has her mom never shown her own titan form to Jasmine?
"Lonely is better than weak" This is why she needs Rose lol.
"I'll bring you there"
"really"
"of course not" what did you think this is?!" LMAOOOOO. I find interesting you changed it
from the hanging out with Rose's friend to Matthew's.
Mathew is a complete fucking idiot for not thinking Jasmine wouldn't go through with it
she is the queen of the school and managed to pressure the priniciple of course obtaining
this one tiny would child's play for her.
Emily asks Matthew why he's living with her like he has a choice lol.
Emily is ridculously brave despite knowing that Jasmine is the only person allowed to kill
people,Maybe she has experience with giantesses which is what's bolstering her moxie here.
"So you stay up here like a caged animal" of course he does, wtf does this girl expect,
she's almost a bigger dumbass than Matthew, she must have apretty cozy relationship with a giantess
to fuel these delusions of hers lol.
Author's Response:
I love how engaged you are with the story! Your reactions are hilarious, and you caught a lot of interesting details. Your commentary is great! You’re really picking up on the deeper themes in the story, and I love how much you're enjoying the character dynamics.
Also, I probably made a mistake calling Jasmine, Tiffany. It’s likely because, in the old version, Tiffany was the person they visited, so that might have confused me. I still have the draft and could post it as extras if you want, but other readers might not understand since they haven’t seen the previous version.
Date: February 16 2025 3:26 AM Title: First day at school
I like the added detial of the police being involved in the search for Mathew's father. UNfourtantely they're quite useless ina situation like this, I wonder what would happen if she went to Giantess police.
There's a human principle now? oh wow!! that's interesting, I don't think the Giantess staff or students resepct them much tho.
I find it very ironic they want Mathew to share a room to promote co-exsistence
yet they won't gurantee his life or safety. They can't co-exist if he's dead lol.
Also Matthew seems alot more optimistic about sharing a room with a Giantess in this one.
I like the human principle "Looking out" for Matt by trying to pick someone he's most likely
to survive the longest with.
I just realised why didn't Rose offer to keep Mathew? it would take nothing to house and she clearly
does care if he lives or dies so it would be easy for her.
Chapter 2I appreciate the much alliterative and detailed explanation of how the different parts of the school
are.
I'm writing this as i'm reading i'm guessing the giantess who carried him is Rose, if so I don't think she would give him a creepy smile.
"he was now under her complete control, trapped on the desk with no route of escape."
I really enjoy this line.
I wonder why "will you be nice to me" made Rose so pissed at first.
Rose seems to enjoy making him scared, I hope it's nowhere near the level of Jasmine so the contrast between them remains but I like that Rose enjoy the power of being able to make someone scared for their even if she's not as cruel as Jasmine.
I like how Rose laughs at Sams "please don't kill my friend" I also like her more stoic answer of "it's not up to me" because it hints it the control Jasmine has even over Giantesses, but this one is good to.
"Oh Matthew. Size isn't everything!"
Amazing line.
I'm not going to lie I prefer Jasmine's original lne of "I want him to think he has power over me"
I really like Rose trying to teach Matthew not push Jasmine or it could bad for him and warning him that ,she's the real one to fear.
He should've listened to his better.
I REALLY miss Jasmine' assertion that she would kill Rose if she didn't obey her,but I do like her and Matthew having an extended argument and him pointing out how lucky she suposedly is that Rose took pity on her and befriended her.
I really like how Jazmine is indignant at being called a human lol she really doesn't like that.
Oh.. there's a plan in place this time I like the Rose would strike an agreement with Jasmine thatwould persuade her to spare Matthew's life.
I love how the second Rose picks him and inadvertedly shows him what a being with actual control looks like his bravado disentegrates lol.
As a said before Rose is like the mother hen of this dyanmic she's of both Mathew AND jazmines shit lol.
Also Rose sneakily saving Jazmine's captive lmao, she's so crafty and wise.
Ah so the giantesses in this story are only 70 feet... alright.
I Like how Matthew has delayled perception of Jasmine after she grows,because he bulit a rapport and dynamic with her built on the foundation of the being equals.
He still argues with her in a way he would NEVER with Rose because his perception of Jasmine caught up to reality yet if as she's making subtle threats about her ability to end his life.
I actually like the little peace of fluff we get, I typically dislike fluff because alot of fluff stuff hasno tension in the giantess and tiny dynamic but here, there's alot of tension, Jazmine hates his species, and these two already don't like each other so her choosing to excercise her pure and total control over him by gently caressing him is nice.
I love how gentle but intimidating she is with him. I also like that she's placing value on her promise with Rose
I wonder how the exchange went when she went to take her pet back, did they argue or did she just wordlessly take him back and leave?
I find it very interesting Jasmine doesn't like being called a monster I thought she would revel in that
My notes for this one are mostly the same but answer your question at the end I think it should be a little bit of both, Chapter 4 struck that balence beautifully.
chapter 6You called Jasmine Tiffany at one point lol
I find it very suprising Jasmine is taking an interest in Mathew's life. Maybe she's taking a chance to
actually try and understand humans, i'm betting it was a Rose suggestion.
There is a chapter titledd "Backstory" unfourtuntely I cannot read it when I click on it.
Date: February 15 2025 6:38 PM Title: First day at school
Yeah I'll read and make another review for it soon.
Date: February 13 2025 1:40 AM Title: First day at school
I prefer here to Wattpad so it'd be nice if you could update this one here please. I look forward too it.
Author's Response:
Allright, I'll update it here
Author's Response:
Allright, I'll update it here
Date: January 24 2025 2:40 PM Title: First day at school
This story has good potential, I would love to see the lore about Titans expanded and see Jasmine don her Titan form. I like this story more than the Exchange student and i'm sad you aren't writing it anymore.
I was going to make one LARGE review but I tought it'd be better to split them up for readiblities sake.
It took alot of time to write these so it'd be nice if you could give them thorough responses, if not you can make it up by making another part of this, Or you can do both :D.
Author's Response:
Hey, I really appreciate the time and effort you put into these reviews! Breaking them up for readability and all that, It means a lot that you’re invested in the story, and I’m glad you see potential in it.
I’ve actually rewritten the entire story on my Wattpad account, improving its readability, and even added a new chapter last month.
This is the original so , lemme have your opinion on this. Should I update this to match the one on wattpad or should I just leave it as it is and you can check the updated one on wattpad. Let me know what you think, and thanks again for your dedication and feedback—it litley what made me rember I even posted here
Date: January 24 2025 2:37 PM Title: Mathew's new roommate
Next I want to speak on the full Mathew and Jasmine character dynamic
"Well Matthew I might not be able to kill you but if you anger me I'll do it "
This such a good basis for their dynamic, he needs to be alive for her to show her supremacy above him, but his death is still on the table which adds alot tension to their dyanmic.
I liek dynamics that straw away from the giantess have the same morality as normal everyday humans do but tstill find that balence without straight up killing the tiny.
While I don't like her eating the guy or him serving her feet I like to shows her dominance and supremacy over him.
I love how she physically prods and bullies him in chapter 6 and he can do nothing about it.
Author's Response:
Welp,I've updated it like you asked, pls tell me what you think
Date: January 24 2025 2:35 PM Title: Let's try this again
Jasmine's character.
It also recontexaulises Jasmine's character. How does she feel towards giants? does she hate them? pity them? have a soft spot for them? view herself as superior?
she seems to dislike humans I'm curious as to why she would have any strong feelings to beings that are so inferior to her.
Perhaps she views them as arrogant considering how Mathew started acting lol.
No another aspect I want to touch on is her statement
"Because she has no choice, she's not my friend but my servant"
"If she makes any mistake, I'll kill her. I'm feared in the school for a reason"
I think when she pretends to beg Mathew not to tell Rose about that statement she wasn't entirely faking.
While Jas says Rose isn't her friend I think she's bluffing. Deep down she does view Rose as a friend and cares what she thinks.
When she's about to kill Mathew she let's Rose convince her not to and even falls for her puppy dog eyes ebcause she knew killing Mathew would upset Rose.
She even says "i'm not able to kill you" meaning that she really cares about Rose's feelings.
So while I think she could punish Rose if she disapointed or disobey's her, I don't think she could bring herself to kill because deep down Rose is her friend.
Speaking of Rose her character showed alot of depth. Despite being a Giantess with a murderer best friend in a society that doesn't respect humans she still had empathy, compassion and mercy for Matthew and begged Jasmine not to kill him.She evenr eminded Mathew to behave, maybe she still view tinies as human, and regrets the ammount of them that Jasmine kills.
Date: January 24 2025 2:34 PM Title: Secrets unveil
Meeting Jasmine.
I like how when Rose goes to retrieve Mathew she states to Sam that sparing his friend is not up to her.
Now for meeting Jaz. When you revealed the twist that she was actually tiny I was relly fond of it at the time because I thought it was subversive and cool that a tiny was using Rose for her agenda of control and fear.
Now I haven't talked much about Matthew ebcause I don't care much about him as acharacter but I like his reaction here because it is so realsitic.
When you find the great queen that even the giants fear is actually at your level, of course you're going to get a big head about it.
"Why is she so feared when even I could fuck her up" hi hubris was realistic and him gaining confidence when dealing Jasmine to poke, prod and even threaten her was the first interesting peice of characterization for him.
I like how when thye're bickering like siblings Rose has to be the mother and tell them to calm down lol.
Wizard of Oz
Now for the wizard of Oz I joke about years ago(man how time flies).
This moment recontexualised what we just learned, and at first I didn't like it and much preferred the orgininal twist. Now?
I much prefer it.
Learning the reason why eveyone is so scared of Jasmine is because she's a titan that could outgrow and kill them liek they're ant if she want to has so much lore implications.
How prominent are titans? are they rare? where do they come from? what's their general culture and view on their smaller siblings and tinies?
Does the giant world at large no about them? humans don't seem to know they even exist.
Date: January 24 2025 2:29 PM Title: Meeting the Queen
Ok so the story ehre is rpetty barebones but it's working for now. Matthew is sent to a Giantess only school where he's housed by the queen a giantess feared even by other giants.
The first thing I want to focus on is his frist encounter with Rose.
I like how she imediately jsut grabs him without consent and shows who is in control of the situation.
Onr thing I find peculiar is that Rose acts out of character in this scene, she's a re straight foward and stoic character but she seems to be mimicking Jasmine here.
She starts calling him Matty which is something Jasmine would do and messes with him by saying she'll be nice then contradictig herself, even though Rose is a more straight forward character.
couple that with Rose laying down ground rules for her room even though he's not staying in her room and I think Rose was tying to prep him for living with Jasmine and her personlity lol.
I think it's interesting how Rose views herself as Jasmine's best friend.... I'll revisit that later.
Date: January 24 2025 2:27 PM Title: First day at school
GTS SCHOOL REVIEW
Ok here goes.
This story is really interesting and has so much potential.
Worldbuilding.
Firstly I enjoy the worldbuilding you have setup, I like Gianteses that rampage and kill tinies indiscriminatly with with relish, but that only makes for good erotica not a good story.
A story needs much more than just that esepcially since any type of character interaction or dynamic between Giantess and tiny dies whenver the Giantess kills the tiny.
I liek the world you set up where there is a restrained cruelness towards tinies.
Firstly they are allowed to own huamans I lvoe worlds that allow Giantesses to take away human agency and hold complete over their lives.
And they have a two a wee killing rule which means they're's alot less killing which means more thorough and develped relationships between Giantesses and their pets
Date: September 03 2024 9:22 PM Title: First day at school
Hey if you want I could still give that review. I have some thoughts.
Author's Response: I always appreciate reviews left by readers
Date: September 03 2024 9:22 PM Title: First day at school
Hey if you want I could still give that review. I have some thoughts.
Date: April 17 2022 1:07 AM Title: First day at school
Nice👍
Author's Response: Thanks, you like the storey consider me rating
[Report This]Date: April 07 2022 9:49 PM Title: Let's try this again
I wonder when she grows into titan size
Author's Response: Ya soon enough
[Report This]Date: March 31 2022 9:47 AM Title: First day at school
I’m enjoying the story!
Can’t wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Next chapter should comeeout soon enough
Author's Response: Next chapter should comeeout soon enough
[Report This]Date: March 29 2022 11:12 PM Title: Let's try this again
Read up to this chapter and the story is good now on with what happen i say i think jasmine should let the poor boy out give her a little more character and show she can be remorseful but also evil when she wants to be it be a stern warning to Mathew what she will do and she can make Mathew more submissive in the future but thats just me i dont like killing poeple off for no reason lol but good story
[Report This]Date: March 20 2022 11:29 PM Title: Secrets unveil
really nice story!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the story. Also thanks for the rating